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Potions Under Duress Held In Place
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Held In Place

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Held In Place

TeddyRadiator

16 Reviews   |   16 Ratings, 0 Likes, 6 Favorites )

Drama Angst Friendship Potions Under Duress 3,150 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

He only wanted to take away the pain; how she chose to heal him would forever change the way he saw himself. Written for the Summer 2014 HP_Kinkfest

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Chapter 1: Held In Place


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Just a small town girl who loves HG/SS fanfiction. You can always find me at LiveJournal: http://teddyradiator.livejournal.com/ where I 'live' on the net. 


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Reviews for Held In Place

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10/10

HBAR

I like how she just jumps in to heal him, and never falters, always knowing what to do.  And just when he is put back together, it's time for him to return the favor.  They are so gentle in the handling of one another, sometimes physically, always emotionally.  Wonderful.

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Held In Place)

Thank you so much! I really wanted to convey that sense of gentleness. I'm glad you felt it.

10/10

HM_Roberts

Astounding and utterly beautiful. A sonata following a requiem...

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Held In Place)

Thank you!

10/10

articcat621

Oh, Teddy. This was absolutely beautiful. I really loved reading it and seeing the progression of their relationship. Beautifully done. Xx

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Held In Place)

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

10/10

braye27

Damn, Teddy.  This is just as wonderful in this reading as it was the first time I read it.  There is something so gentle and safe and loving about this I wish every one could share the same love and trust in their reltionships that Hermione and Severus share in theirs.Very will done, my lovely.Beth

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Held In Place)

Thank you so much, sweetie. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. 

10/10

hopelesliehermnharry

Awwwww!!!This is so beautiful Teddy! Thank you!

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Held In Place)

Thank  YOU!! :)

10/10

deianaera

Oh my.  This is just lovely and beautiful.

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Held In Place)

Thank you so much!

0/10

deedeebug95

OMG, I did not know how badly I needed a Teddy story. I have missed Severus and Hermione!

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Held In Place)

thank you, sweetie! I hope to be able to have more SSHG goodness for you soon!

10/10

Becky

Oh my goodness, this is such a heart wrenching story..I am in tears..what a wonderful story, especially how Hermione hid her scars..Beautiful story..Well Done!!

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Held In Place)

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I've been thrilled with the response to this story.

10/10

braye27

Teddy, this is utter perfection.  In the act of healing they are both healed, brought to the certain knowledge that what has gone before no longer holds any power over them.  And in each other, they have become beautifully powerful in all the things that matter.Well done, my friend.  Beth

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Held In Place)

Oh Beffey, thank you so very much for your lovely comment. 

10/10

charliesangel10

As always, perfection. 

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Held In Place)

Oh, thank you! :)

10/10

melusin

still lovely after the umpteenth reading

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Held In Place)

Thank you so much!

10/10

mick42

As the song says " the greatest thing we can ever learn, is to love and be loved in return " 

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Held In Place)

I love that song! Thank you!

0/10

sandlapper

I couldn't decide if I wanted to be aroused or sad or happy from the sheer beauty of this story.  I chose them all! Well done, my friend, well done. 

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Held In Place)

Oh, thank you so much, sweetie! It's so good to hear from you!

10/10

wyndnfyr

A bit weird and yet spot on.  I do so love your stories.

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Held In Place)

Thank you! 

0/10

Amathya

Very lyrical and I second the emotion and care that is expressed through Hermione's healing. She's almost saintly, a kind of divine love, but it's earthly, too (they are not inaccessible to each other; saintly as a kind of "giving all of yourself" as something worth giving--Hermione seems to embody this in the way you've written her, in the way she is there for Severus, as seen through his voice). She seems the perfect one to cure him of his insecurities. Then, the turn at the end is both heart-breaking and lovely.

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Held In Place)

Thank you for your lovely comments. Even though this was written for a kinkfest, the prompter indicated that it was the wrists fetish that was more important to her than the actual sex. The image of his wrists tied with red silk scarves was the first thing I was given, then the rest.

0/10

amr

Thie is lovely, lovely, lovely.  I particularly like the way she's been healing him, accustoming him to more human contact, and then, as he nears a kind of healing, he begins to heal her.  Thank you for posting; this was a sad, but ultimately satisfying story.

Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Held In Place)

Thank you so much! I'm thrilled at the response I've had with this fic, and I'm delighted that you enjoyed it.

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