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The Unexpected Patient

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The Unexpected Patient

ks51689

13 Reviews   |   13 Ratings, 0 Likes, 1 Favorite )

Humor Drama Friendship sshg_promptfest 2,747 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Just another normal day for Healer Granger … or is it? Written for 2013 SSHG Promptfest.

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Chapter 1: The Unexpected Patient


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TalesOfSnape

Lol! No, Severus Snape would never admit to having the inside of his nose licked. Thanks for sharing the wonderful images.

Response from ks51689 (Author of The Unexpected Patient)

Hehe, I'm glad you enjoyed it : )  Thank you for reading and reviewing!

10/10

IrishChic20

Sounds like the beginning of a beautiful friendship. I don't suppose you'd consider continuing this into more than a one-shot? I'd love to read more!

Response from ks51689 (Author of The Unexpected Patient)

I certainly have ideas for more encounters, it's just making time to write them down.... Stay tuned : )  Thank you for reading and reviewing!

10/10

mikimoto

Love it.

You captured it so well how our pets will listen to us and always take our side through the vagaries of life.  It is no surprise that the man who was deserted by everyone would feel comforted by such an accepting companion.

I have read many stories where Snape gets a pet.  It seems to allow him an outlet for his affections.

Great story.  Thanks.

Response from ks51689 (Author of The Unexpected Patient)

Thank you : )  Sometimes all you need is acceptance and someone to listen, and Snape certainly needed that more than anyone.  I'm glad you enjoyed this.  Thank you for reading and reviewing!

0/10

wyndnfyr

There should be more!

Response from ks51689 (Author of The Unexpected Patient)

I have a few ideas rattling around, but I haven't had time to commit them to paper (or rather word processor lol).  Thank you for reading and reviewing!

10/10

braye27

I like this proud yet vulnerable Snape.  I can imagine him taking a liking to Pinky after he confiscated him... after all, everyone has to let their hair down once in a while.BethPS- Is there a chance you might decide to expand this sometime in the future?

Response from ks51689 (Author of The Unexpected Patient)

Could you resist a warm pink ball of fluff? Lol.  He may be stern, but he's not made of stone.  I do have ideas for further encounters between the two, it's just finding the time to write them down... fingers crossed!  Thank you for reading and reviewing : )

10/10

IrishChic20

Sounds like the beginning of a beautiful friendship. I don't suppose you'd consider continuing this into more than a one-shot? I'd love to read more!

Response from ks51689 (Author of The Unexpected Patient)

I definitely have a few ideas for adding to this, it's just having the time to write them down...  I'm glad you enjoyed this tidbit though! Thank you for reading and reviewing : )

10/10

mick42

I bet that somewhere , at the bottom of a draw, or in an old trunk, there is an old teddy bear it has one eye no ears or fur, but it was Severus' friend when he had no other. That man has a tender heart and I hope that ,now that the war is over, and Hermione has an excuse to see him{ just to check up on Pinkie of course }he may let her in, if she's lucky.

Response from ks51689 (Author of The Unexpected Patient)

Indeed.  Pinky is a great listener, but verbal communication is always helpful in a companion lol.  I know Hermione is certainly intrigued by the possibilities... ; )Thank you for reading and reviewing!

10/10

expected aberrance

Aww what an adorable image. Very cute story! 

Response from ks51689 (Author of The Unexpected Patient)

Thank you : )  I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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TheCopperDragon2004

Aww, I love this! I'm going to insist (while on my knees begging) that you add more to this story! How long will pinky last? Will he thank hermione for prolonging the puffs life by taking her out to dinner? Will pinky die and she helps him deal with his grief over the companion that helped him through some of the hardest years of his adult life? MOAR PLZ!!

Response from ks51689 (Author of The Unexpected Patient)

The possibilities are certainly endless : )  Now, it's just finding the time to actually write them down... We shall see... Thank you for reading and reviewing!

10/10

Fairfield

Well written, inventive, characters in place.

Response from ks51689 (Author of The Unexpected Patient)

Thank you : )

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Ljpjcg

There has to be more!  All the possibilities and cuteness and pink Pygmy puff goodness just waiting to be explored under your talented keyboard! 

Response from ks51689 (Author of The Unexpected Patient)

Oh, in my head there is sooo much more!  If only there was just as much time in the day lol.  I am determined to return to this one in the future though, so keep an eye out : )  Thank you for reading and reviewing!

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pygmypuff

I loved this story & I loved it even more as it featured a Pygmy Puff!! Please do more!

Response from ks51689 (Author of The Unexpected Patient)

Lol, not even Severus Snape can resist a cute, fluffy pygmy puff.  Thank you for reading and reviewing! I hope to have more posted soon : )

10/10

Sampdoria

I absolutely loved it, such a sweet story:-))

Response from ks51689 (Author of The Unexpected Patient)

Thank you : )  I'm glad you enjoyed it!  Couldn't resist pairing our favorite sour professor with the cute and fluffy lol.

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