Four
Chapter 4 of 8
TeddyRadiatorSeverus has always believed that, if you love someone, you must promise them the moon, and deliver it. How do you wrestle that moon to the ground?
Thanks to all of you for your support and encouragement. I have been thrilled at the response this fic has received. I hope you will continue to enjoy it.
This is dedicated to Stgulik, my beta and Hermione Granger, who is one of the most indespensible person in my life. It is also dedicated to my husband, who always believes each story is great, and to my precious Muse, who writes the song that makes my whole world sing.
The characters in this story are the property of JK Rowling and Warner Brothers. I make no money from this story or any fanfiction I write.
As Severus sat and listened to Remus pour his heart out to what he undoubtedly suspected was the gutter, he wished fervently that Hermione was here instead of him. She was much better at this sort of thing than he. Anything he could think of to say either sounded sarcastic, unfeeling or unkind. He finally settled for inane. "Another firewhisky, Lupin? I believe my glass is dry."
Remus seemed to snap out of his melancholy reverie, and nodded. "Thank you, I believe I will." He passed his empty flagon to Severus, and their eyes met. "You know, I never thought I'd say this, but I have to confess, I'm rather jealous of you."
Severus blinked. "Why in Merlin's name are you jealous of me?" he blurted, then felt foolish. He knew the answer, and the Gryffindor didn't disappoint.
"You and Hermione are so right for one another. Anyone can see you two are a formidable team. You move together like one single entity." He chuckled in that characteristically silent way of his. "You have something rare together, Severus. You and Hermione make sense. Not many couples have what you two have, and it's lovely to watch you together." He looked down at his hands. "If anything good has come from this, it's that I feel like you and I have finally become friends."
He looked up then, deeply into Severus' eyes, and held them for a long time. It was a surprising and rare thing for someone to do, given Severus' reputation as one of the world's most skilled Legilimens. It was almost as if he wanted Severus to see something, or wanted to find something in Severus he sought very badly.
Pondering this, Severus excused himself, and headed for the bar to refresh their drinks.
When he returned, Remus had joined Hermione on the sofa, and several others were listening as she regaled them with the story of Severus' proposal.
"...I mean, it was a given that I was going to say yes, but there I was, elbow-deep in the Curleaze Elixir. Well, I wasn't going to let him get away, was I? So I turned to say something, it was probably something I thought sounded romantic, but it probably would have been complete rubbish..."
"Hermione!" Harry, Ron and Ginny all whined her name at the same time, and Severus stifled a chuckle.
"Indeed," he said, crossing his arms. "We'll be in our dotage before you finish the story, Madam Snape."
She playfully wrinkled her nose at him, and Severus felt his body grow warm. Saucy little minx.
"Anyway, if you'll all let me finish," she continued imperiously, only to be pelted with Honeydukes' sweet wrappers. "As I was saying," she laughed, "I was going to reply with something clever and erudite, so I turned to Severus, and I took my eyes off the brew for one second, and of course the entire cauldron started melting. The next thing I knew, Severus was knocking me out of the way just as the whole sorry mess exploded all over us!"
Amidst the chuckles, she caught his eye, and smiled. "After the smoke cleared, I looked up and he was covered in this grotty, green goo, looking at me like he was thinking about taking house points away. I mean, here we were in the middle of the most romantic moment of our lives and all I could think was, 'oh, Merlin, he's going to give me a detention!'"
"I wish I could have, seeing the result," he interjected dryly.
"What happened?" Remus asked, his eyes twinkling.
Hermione answered, "For a week, Severus' hair was as curly as mine." She gave him a wicked smile. "He looked so adorable."
Severus gave her a withering look that fooled no one. Through clenched teeth, he growled, "I looked like a labradoodle."
The room erupted with an explosion of laughter, and Severus stood still, uncertain as always if people were laughing at him or with him.
"Well, it could have been worse," Ron interjected.
"True," Severus drawled. "It could have turned ginger."
"Oy!" Ron protested, but the laughter from the good-natured Weasleys soon had him chuckling as well.
"Severus has always been a good man to have in any crisis. He never loses his head," Remus added, and Hermione beamed at him.
She turned back to Severus, and gave him her secret, sweet smile. "That's very true. He's the best man to have in a crisis." Impulsively, she stood and toasted him. "To my husband, who never loses his head."
"Hear, hear," Remus added, and all the guests raised their glasses in a toast to Severus, who acknowledged their tributes with a slight bow.
"I appreciate your sentiments, Madam Snape," he said, his voice reaching into the far corners of the room. "But I think you'll find it was my heart that was lost that day. Thankfully, you found it, and have kept it safe for me ever since."
The chorus of surprised "Awwwws" made him roll his eyes. "Stand down, Gryffindors. It's not bloody panto," he grumbled. This time, he knew they were laughing with him.
"And in any case, I have indeed lost my head on several occasions." He toasted her back with a secret smile of his own. "Thankfully, you have always found it, and brought it back as well."
"To Hermione, who always finds Snape's head!" Ron Weasley chortled, raising his butterbeer.
"Ron!" Hermione exclaimed, shocked. Her face was flaming.
Remus laughed, and gave her an affectionate peck on the cheek. "To Hermione!"
"Hermione!" The voices roared. Severus raised his glass with them. As he looked toward his wife, his eyes met Remus' again, and Remus was looking at Hermione with such tenderness Severus was shaken. There was something about the man's expression that elicited no jealousy, no worry. It was the look of someone who truly cared about Hermione more than he did for himself. Severus saw that look in the mirror every day.
He knows exactly how I feel about Hermione. He feels the same way.
Then Remus turned and gave Severus the same look. Severus looked away quickly. He was not sure what he had seen in Remus' expression, but it was just as strong for him as it was for Hermione.
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Later that evening, once all the guests had left, he and Hermione undressed and got into bed. They rehashed the usual post-mortem all couples do after a successful party, and spoke in turn about all the different guests. Everyone was mentioned...except Remus.
"Tired?" Severus finally asked, when the closing ceremonies had ended.
Hermione nestled against his shoulder. "Not too much," she said, then proved the lie with a jaw-cracking yawn. "Well, maybe a little," she laughed. Severus chuckled and pulled her closer.
"You looked beautiful tonight."
Hermione rose and looked at him. "Thank you, darling." She snuggled back into his arms, and her hand drifted down his taut belly. "I thought you looked rather dashing as well."
Severus would have scoffed, but her slender fingers were teasing the waistband of his pants, and he felt his cock stir. By the time she had eased her hand inside his boxers, he was already hard for her, aching to touch her. "I thought you were tired," he murmured, sighing as she slid her palm over his erection.
"I think I've got my second wind," she said, and he could feel her smiling against his collarbone. In one single, fluid movement, he rolled them over so that he was leaning over her.
Her kisses were sweet, flavoured with elf-made wine, and as he cupped her warm, firm breast in his hand, he felt the nipple grow hard against his palm. She moaned, and arched into his touch.
"Severus," she mewled, and the delicious scent of her arousal reached his prodigious nose. He held her and kissed her deeply as he wandlessly removed their nightclothes.
"I love you," she whispered as he slid home with a whimper of pleasure.
"I love you," he said, his body, his heart, his soul crying aloud with joy at joining with his precious woman.
She moved beneath him, and as her climax peaked, she cried, "I would do anything for you... gods, Severus!"
Her orgasm took his own to the point of no return, as they trembled and held onto one another, Severus whispered, "I'd do anything to make you happy, wife."
She pulled him closer. "You're in this world, Severus. You're mine. Nothing could make me happier."
They lay in the dark, replete and sated, and as Hermione drifted off, Severus touched his lips to her forehead. "Anything, Hermione," he whispered, as tears wet his lashes.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Snow Turns The World Deaf
103 Reviews | 7.55/10 Average
What a wonderful and lovely story. I am amazed at the depth of your characters and the depth of their relationship to each other. I loved how real it was. The friendship they all shared was well done and quite realistic. This was no cliche filled story. It was heartfelt, sensual, sad, hopeful, and heartwarming all that wrapped up in one. Thanks for writing.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Snow Turns The World Deaf)
Thank you so much - I'm thrilled you enjoyed it! :)
Oh teddy, this story was so beautiful. Absolutely loved it.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Snow Turns The World Deaf)
Thank you so much! I am so glad you enjoyed it!
lovely
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Snow Turns The World Deaf)
Thank you - I am so sorry to be so late in answering this, but my stupid email has been sending my TPP review notifications to SPAM! I had no idea these were out there.
Response from feisanna (Reviewer)
that's fine - mine as well. I haven't seen a "bookmark" in months :-) It was a beautiful tale and you should be proud.
This was absolutely lovely, beginning to end. Thanks for writing it.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Snow Turns The World Deaf)
Thank you very much for reading and for the lovely comment.
Glad Remus found his own special someone. :)
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Snow Turns The World Deaf)
:) Everybody hopes they can, I think!
Oh, the permutations and combinations... delicious. :)
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Snow Turns The World Deaf)
Loads of possibilities!
Um... she will transform back first, won't she? LOL :)
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Snow Turns The World Deaf)
Well, it certainly would add some spice...
To have so much love that they can share it and allow Remus to grow into the man he always could be is the most precious gift of all. Loved the story from start to finish...and the new start for all of them too. :)
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Snow Turns The World Deaf)
Thank you so much! That was the exact tone of how I wanted the story to end. I appreciate your kind words.
Obviously wizarding alcohol does not have the same effects as the Muggle version...;)
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Snow Turns The World Deaf)
:)
And so their friendship morphs into something else entirely. I think it's the tenderness and regard they hold for each other that will make this bond special.It's a fabulous endearment to both Hermione and Severus' unwavering love for each other that they can include Remus into that heady and safe world.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Snow Turns The World Deaf)
Thank you - I really wanted to show that their relationshipo was so solid that this would be a gift, not a possible problem. I had one reviewer on another archive who got really freaked out and kept saying but what if Remus tries to take Hermione away from Severus or Severus away from Hermione? I tried to explain that this was a giving relationship, not a taking one. I'm glad this came across in exactly the right way to you.
Could anything include a lonely werewolf, perhaps? ;)
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Snow Turns The World Deaf)
:)
Poor Remus has been quite lonely. He needs Severus and Hermione as much as they need him. :)
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Snow Turns The World Deaf)
True!
Moon... Lupin... Hmm. I am suspicious. ;)
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Snow Turns The World Deaf)
Actually, there's no correlation between the two. I just love It's A Wonderful Life.
Poor Remus, not only isolated because of his lycanthropy but also removed as the father of his child. His growing attraction to Hermione and Severus augurs well, though I daresay Remus will tread very carefully.He's been handed a new home with care and attention. I can see him not wanting to rock the boat, so to speak.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Snow Turns The World Deaf)
True. He's been through too much. He doesn't want to jeapardise things now.
Sad... happy...sad... happy? You're putting them through the wringer, my dear! :)
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Snow Turns The World Deaf)
What was it that Kurt Vonnegut said? Keep your characters in conflict; it will show the reader what they are made of ;)
Amazing story. I can echo what others have said in that I'm disappointed it's now finished. I very much look forward to your nest fic.
Response from Bimbo777 (Reviewer)
You can more than make up for it by continuing to share your excellent work with us. Please!!!!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Snow Turns The World Deaf)
As long as my dear Muse gives me stories to tell, I'll be tellin' 'em here. I promise!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Snow Turns The World Deaf)
I'm sorry I've disappointed you.
I have to admit I thought this was going to be a longer story and yes I'm kind of disappointed. But I loved it nonetheless, as I have all your stories. I'd love to see a sequel of how things progress for both the couples especially after the new addition to their family. Any chance of that happening??
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Snow Turns The World Deaf)
Oh, I'm sorry I disappointed you. The Muse gives me a story, and it is as long as it is long (hence the trundling epic that is Lay Me Low). Unfortunately, I have no say in its length, LOL.I don't really see this as continuing. As with most of my fics, for me it ends where it ends. But if the Muse wishes me to take it further, he will.
My two favorite lines:•“I prefer to think of it as concern, but you will think the worst of me.”•“I prefer to think of it as spying, but you will think the best of me.”I have to say that I wasn't certain of the ourcome of this story, but I'm very happy for Remus that he has found the love of his life. And I'm totally delighted that Severus and Hermione's relationship is strong and that they'er going to be parents. I love baby Snapes.Well done, Teddy!Beth
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Snow Turns The World Deaf)
Thank you, Beffey - I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Oh Teddy, it was lovely!! I am so proud of you ...going out of of your comfort zone and still being true to the SS/HG ship!! Thanks to your Muse for pushing you and to Jules of course,because of those two I got to read a lovely story ith three of my favs.! Hugs to you~dee
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Snow Turns The World Deaf)
Oh, Dee, thank you so very much! I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Your lovely comments mean the world to me.
I am so sorry to see this beautiful story come to an end, this chapter was outstanding, The love was felt thru out the chapter, I'm so glad everyone got their happy ending.
Will be looking forward to your next great adventure in wrighting.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Snow Turns The World Deaf)
Thank you so much! It is always such a lovely thing to know that someone is sad to see the end of a fic - and I appreciate your warm words. Next will be an update on Lay Me Low, then Jules and I will be starting on our sequel to Droxy's Folly.
This story had me crying and laughing and sighing in turn; I loved it. Thank you so much for sharing.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Snow Turns The World Deaf)
Thank you so very much! I really appreciate your lovely comments so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
A fitting end to a lovely story Teddy. I really enjoyed it.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Snow Turns The World Deaf)
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I'm not entirely sure that either Hermione's or Severus' hearts are really in this threesome. It'll be interesting to see what happens in the next chapter.Beth
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Snow Turns The World Deaf)
Well, their hearts are in the right place, but whether that is in this threesome will remain to be seen in the next chapter ;)
I LOVE it when a story ends just the way it is supposed to. This could have gone several ways, the most obvious being that the three of them ended up together. Because you didn't go there, I feel comfortable saying that would be all wrong. They mention that this was just an in-the-moment thing, and that is exactly what it felt like. Im glad that Remus' departure from their bed wasn't awkward, and that their friendship and love was the catalyst needed to move him onto the next phase of his life. And that he came back happy was the icing on the cake.“I prefer to think of it as concern, but you will think the worst of me.” ... “I prefer to think of it as spying, but you will think the best of me.”I found myself particularly fond of these lines. :)This was a very satisfying ending to a really touching story.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Snow Turns The World Deaf)
Thank you so much. I also felt like having them all three come together would not have worked, but really, this was one of those moments that came about, and it is probably a tribute to allthree of them that they realised it wasn't something they should try to recreate or hold on to.I'm so glad you liked it, and that it pleased you.
Wow, full of love and eroticism. Poor Sev, getting it with both barrels, think he enjoyed it though.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Snow Turns The World Deaf)
Thank you! Yes, I think he was able to lie back and think of England... :)