Visiting Hours
TeddyRadiator17 Reviews | 8.82/10 (17 Ratings, 0 Likes, 4 Favorites )
This was originally written for the GrangerSnape100 challenge "Behind Closed Doors".
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Just a small town girl who loves HG/SS fanfiction. You can always find me at LiveJournal: http://teddyradiator.livejournal.com/ where I 'live' on the net. 
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I think this need to be a new sshg genre: Snape visits Hermione in jail. This is delightful. I know it's a one-shot and it works fine, but it is unusual and I am used to reading a lot of similar plots over and over again and so I long for more... :)
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Visiting Hours)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! It actually started off as a sub chapter for a longer story.
Beautifully heart wrenching writing and a narrative flow (and final twist) that leaves one aching (in the best possible way). Lovely, lovely story.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Visiting Hours)
Thank you very much - I'm really glad you enjoyed it.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Visiting Hours)
Thank you very much - I'm really glad you enjoyed it.
Well done! Thanks for sharing!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Visiting Hours)
Thank you for your lovely comments!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Visiting Hours)
Thank you for your lovely comments!
Powerful twist that. :)
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Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Visiting Hours)
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When I started reading this, I guessed it was going to be Hermione who was imprisoned, only because you are an author who thinks outside the box, and it is something you would do. But, I got so sucked in while reading, that you had me picturing it with Severus as prisoner. I completely forgot my original thought because every single sentence was said in just the right way to seem as though it was him. Not to mention the fact that I am so wrapped up in it, hanging on every word, that I forget to try and figure out what is going on. Very well done, even if I got a little teary in the process of reading.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Visiting Hours)
Thank you so much - what an amazing compliment to receive! I'm really glad it took you to a different place than expected, then deposited you right back where you thought you were going in the first place. Thank you for always being so supportive and encouraging!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Visiting Hours)
Thank you so much - what an amazing compliment to receive! I'm really glad it took you to a different place than expected, then deposited you right back where you thought you were going in the first place. Thank you for always being so supportive and encouraging!
It is not the inprisonment, that is so heartbreaking, it's the separataion. If there was nolonger any hope of release, Severus would find a way to insure,that they would be together, in death.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Visiting Hours)
Thank you - that was exactly what I was trying to convey. If they didn't have hope, he'd smuggle in a fast-acting potion and down one himself. He wouldn't allow her to continue to suffer. But because they have that slim shred of hope, they torment themselves like this each week. I had originally written this as part of a larger story arc, but as time has gone by and things have happened in the other story, I just don't think I could put them through this again.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Visiting Hours)
Thank you - that was exactly what I was trying to convey. If they didn't have hope, he'd smuggle in a fast-acting potion and down one himself. He wouldn't allow her to continue to suffer. But because they have that slim shred of hope, they torment themselves like this each week. I had originally written this as part of a larger story arc, but as time has gone by and things have happened in the other story, I just don't think I could put them through this again.
Like that H is in the slammer. =) Good to see you archiving.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Visiting Hours)
I'm thrilled to be archiving here. It's such a thriving archive. I hope to eventually have almost everything uploaded here.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Visiting Hours)
I'm thrilled to be archiving here. It's such a thriving archive. I hope to eventually have almost everything uploaded here.
Wow. Just...wow. Unexpected, to say the least...a clever plot twist like that is a sign of a good writer. You do realize, I trust, that your story positively begs for an explanation of what led her to this?
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Visiting Hours)
Thank you - I do have an inkling of where this goes in the arc of a another story I'm writing, but I haven't decided yet if it's just too much to put our couple through again - I don't know if I'm that cruel! ;) Thank you, though, for your lovely comments.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Visiting Hours)
Thank you - I do have an inkling of where this goes in the arc of a another story I'm writing, but I haven't decided yet if it's just too much to put our couple through again - I don't know if I'm that cruel! ;) Thank you, though, for your lovely comments.
WOW! Powerful and unexpected. Great but a heartwrenching place to end it. Is there more? Does she ever get out? Why is she there? Wonderful job.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Visiting Hours)
I have given a lot of thought as to the larger story arc this could take place within, but I don't know if I have the heart to put them through all that anguish again - just doing this little drabble nearly killed me! Thank you for your wonderful comments.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Visiting Hours)
I have given a lot of thought as to the larger story arc this could take place within, but I don't know if I have the heart to put them through all that anguish again - just doing this little drabble nearly killed me! Thank you for your wonderful comments.
OMG..Ok, Crying now!! Wow, this was a surprise..Hermione in prison..Sad, but WELL DONE!!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Visiting Hours)
Thank you!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Visiting Hours)
Thank you!
I know this is a one shot, but everytime I read it I hope that one day you will have Hermione released....
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Visiting Hours)
Oh, bless your tender heart! In my head-canon, she does, if that helps any.
Response from deedeebug95 (Reviewer)
only if I can peek into your head..lol
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Visiting Hours)
Oh, it's a pretty big mess in there! LOL
Oh my gosh, this was so moving!! Seriously, I'm crying. Oh Teddy, well done!!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Visiting Hours)
Thank you so much - I'm glad you enjoyed it - even if I made you cry ;) Seriously, thank you.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Visiting Hours)
Thank you so much - I'm glad you enjoyed it - even if I made you cry ;) Seriously, thank you.
Very moving and so not what I expected. Interesting turn and I wonder what she has done to land herself in Azkaban?
Powerful, horrific, terrible, and painful. Which is meant as a compliment, to be sure. It brought tears to my eyes. Hope can be such a bitch at times.
I know you have a bit of a sad ending thing at times, but this one is just devastating. I feel like someone needs to come along and write the sequel to make it all right for them, but this is just so believable, horribly, perfectly complete already.I've read it so often and it still makes me a bit sniffly.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Visiting Hours)
It is always so gratifying to know that you have gained such an emotional response with your writing. Thank you for the lovely comment. You know I hold them close to my heart at all times.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Visiting Hours)
It is always so gratifying to know that you have gained such an emotional response with your writing. Thank you for the lovely comment. You know I hold them close to my heart at all times.
So painful...the twist at the end did surprise me. Artfully done. So sad. It is a 5 star crafted story. It is too sad to enjoy. I did read it twice through.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Visiting Hours)
Thank you. You will note that the longer my fics, the better the chances are for a happy ending! ;)
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Visiting Hours)
Thank you. You will note that the longer my fics, the better the chances are for a happy ending! ;)
So painful...the twist at the end did surprise me. Artfully done. So sad. It is a 5 star crafted story. It is too sad to enjoy. I did read it twice through.