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The Black-Eyed Angel
TeddyRadiator42 Reviews | 7.36/10 (42 Ratings, 0 Likes, 8 Favorites )
Hermione cannot seem to stop mourning the death of her husband. But is everything truly as it seems? Who is the Black-Eyed Angel who comes to comfort her?
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Just a small town girl who loves HG/SS fanfiction. You can always find me at LiveJournal: http://teddyradiator.livejournal.com/ where I 'live' on the net.
Reviews for The Black-Eyed Angel
I hate you for this fic. I almost cried at least three times. You are the worst.
Response from Toby Addison (Reviewer)
No no, I'm sorry! I have a weird sense of humor. I actually really loved the fic, I was just upset in a few parts. I meant to put in a note that that was my strange brand of sarcasm, but I forgot to D:
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
I'm sorry you didn't enjoy the story. But thank you for your comment.
loved it thank u for a story that wasnt 1.3 million chapters long but just long enough for a mom of 5 to get thru in a night..hugs and chocolates
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
LOL Wow, I bow to you, Mum! I'm glad I can give you an enjoyable moment or two. I usually don't do huge fics. I do have one long one that I've just started archiving here at TPP, but I'm pretty much happy with ten chapters or less - and I really appreciate your comments. Thank you!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
LOL Wow, I bow to you, Mum! I'm glad I can give you an enjoyable moment or two. I usually don't do huge fics. I do have one long one that I've just started archiving here at TPP, but I'm pretty much happy with ten chapters or less - and I really appreciate your comments. Thank you!
I love how we have come full circle here. They raised a fabulous son who is going to share his greatness with his Lily Potter. A happy ending for everyone. As long as Cobel doesn't ever find out that his parents probably had a wilder time than he did on his wedding night, lol. This wrapped up very nicely.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
Thank you so much for your lovely comments throughout the story. In my early days of writing fanfiction, the Muse totally held sway, and to this day, there are moments of this fic I honestly don't remember writing, because I was just taking his dictation. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I appreciate your comments all along the way.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
Thank you so much for your lovely comments throughout the story. In my early days of writing fanfiction, the Muse totally held sway, and to this day, there are moments of this fic I honestly don't remember writing, because I was just taking his dictation. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I appreciate your comments all along the way.
Well, that was unexpected. And frightening. But at the end, there remains hope. I think ...
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
:)
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
:)
Oh goodness, what is going on here at the end? Although it is hard to care, because my blood is boiling from the rest of the chapter. You are so good at making that happen, you know?
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
Thank you!!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
Thank you!!
Yowza! *fans self* I love how the chapter starts out sweet and timid, and turns all raging desire by the end. Yes, Severus, your first time should be proper and respectful, in a bed. After that, I'm going to say the wall is perfectly fine. Better than fine, actually. ;)
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
LOL I'm glad you enjoyed it. I think you may enjoy the next one very much ;)
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
LOL I'm glad you enjoyed it. I think you may enjoy the next one very much ;)
There is something really sweet and special about their relationship here. They are very much in character, but they are not the extremes we sometimes see. I do hope their late night meeting goes well. We know they end up together, so it can't be too disastrous, right?
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
Thank you - I wanted to show that, as time passed and the world changed, they changed with it.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
Thank you - I wanted to show that, as time passed and the world changed, they changed with it.
Loved the story and how you went from present to past. Very well done. Nice to read a story that had twists and turns I didn't see coming. Glad it had a happy ending though you had me worried for our heroes.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
Thank you so much for reading! I'm really glad you enjoyed it.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
Thank you so much for reading! I'm really glad you enjoyed it.
I love that he sings his song only for the most important women in his life. What a very lucky girl she is!I can tell this is early writing from you, because your voice has matured and you've completely mastered the art since. But, your early stuff is light years ahead of many writers best work, and there is something that is intrinsicly you, even at this point. Lovely story, so far.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
Thank you so very much. That is music to my ears. I feel that fanfiction has helped me grow so much as a writer - which is why I'm doing a major re-write of Her Minder, my original novel. I realised after starting its sequel that my 'voice' had changed, and Her Minder needed to change with it. It's been hard but it was the right decision. It's lovely to hear this from someone who has read a lot of my stories - thank you so much for being so encouraging.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
Thank you so very much. That is music to my ears. I feel that fanfiction has helped me grow so much as a writer - which is why I'm doing a major re-write of Her Minder, my original novel. I realised after starting its sequel that my 'voice' had changed, and Her Minder needed to change with it. It's been hard but it was the right decision. It's lovely to hear this from someone who has read a lot of my stories - thank you so much for being so encouraging.
Rarely do these two see eye to eye and have a pleasant encounter their first time together. I like it. It seems just like him to call it a night because he was getting too comfortable. I hope that it continues. Perhaps they'll get to the strip tease and the blow job faster than usual. ;)
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
I've always enjoyed them pulling together against a common adversary - I mean, in real life, you normally either hit it off or you don't! ;)
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
I've always enjoyed them pulling together against a common adversary - I mean, in real life, you normally either hit it off or you don't! ;)
Oh dear. I've often wondered how one moves on after losing their spouse. I hope to never find out *shudder*. Poor dear.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
It is really too horrible to contemplate, and was very difficult to write. Thank you for your appreciation.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
It is really too horrible to contemplate, and was very difficult to write. Thank you for your appreciation.
HEA....I feel...cheated... LOLYou really can write glorious angst,
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
LOL It's fun to write angst, but it's even more fun to resolve it to HEA - especially in a longer fic. I don't mind making them miserable in a shorter one ;)
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
LOL It's fun to write angst, but it's even more fun to resolve it to HEA - especially in a longer fic. I don't mind making them miserable in a shorter one ;)
Now that's some angst! Lovely, heart breaking angst!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
Thanks! I love making you miserable!!
Response from droxy (Reviewer)
Angst and grief are my chocolate.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
Thanks! I love making you miserable!!
Response from droxy (Reviewer)
Angst and grief are my chocolate.
He is both so alfpah and then totally shy, a bipolar swing of opposits emotions. Damn nice lemons!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
I was certainly trying to find my feet with him on this fic - I loved the assertive, Dominant lover, but I love that vulnerable side too - who says you can't have it both ways! Thanks, Droxy!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
I was certainly trying to find my feet with him on this fic - I loved the assertive, Dominant lover, but I love that vulnerable side too - who says you can't have it both ways! Thanks, Droxy!
. "But I'm a coward, you see." His eyes were intense. "This isn't some game, is it…Hermione?"--- I melt. Awe that's so damn romantic. Le sigh.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
I'm getting such a buzz from you enjoying this - I had no idea you hadn't read it!
Response from droxy (Reviewer)
cosplay, work, modding, and photo management eat nto reading time. I dont nearly read as much fanfic as I did before year 2008. So there is plenty of fic I havent read. Soif SS/Hg really does slow to a crawl- I have tons of fic I can read. There are novels and novels of fic I havent read. I am not really a fast reader. Pluse we got exchange going on-that's usually my read fest for the year outside of drabbles.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
Well, brace yourself. I'm getting ready to upload my monster epic Lay Me Low here, and I'm almost finished with it. You'll recall that little dragon as being in it's first couple of chapters when you first one my TPP auction. Yes, it's still going, but I'm nearly done. I'm currently working on the next chapter. Hopefully it will be done this month.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
I'm getting such a buzz from you enjoying this - I had no idea you hadn't read it!
Response from droxy (Reviewer)
cosplay, work, modding, and photo management eat nto reading time. I dont nearly read as much fanfic as I did before year 2008. So there is plenty of fic I havent read. Soif SS/Hg really does slow to a crawl- I have tons of fic I can read. There are novels and novels of fic I havent read. I am not really a fast reader. Pluse we got exchange going on-that's usually my read fest for the year outside of drabbles.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
Well, brace yourself. I'm getting ready to upload my monster epic Lay Me Low here, and I'm almost finished with it. You'll recall that little dragon as being in it's first couple of chapters when you first one my TPP auction. Yes, it's still going, but I'm nearly done. I'm currently working on the next chapter. Hopefully it will be done this month.
I am enjoying your early voice sluttery...So lovely...-sighs-
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
This is the first SSHG fic I wrote with real voice sluttery. I think I had him say everything I'd ever wanted to hear! LOL
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
This is the first SSHG fic I wrote with real voice sluttery. I think I had him say everything I'd ever wanted to hear! LOL
this is just lovely. Not sure why you are wibbling over writing in this.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
Well, it seems like a very long time ago that I wrote this, and it was pre-stgulik, so it could have probably benefitted from her good advice. But I'm thrilled to pieces you are enjoying it!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
Well, it seems like a very long time ago that I wrote this, and it was pre-stgulik, so it could have probably benefitted from her good advice. But I'm thrilled to pieces you are enjoying it!
Ok- this is sublime angst. Lovely lovely angst...You've been holdin' out....
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
LOL - Never, dear Droxy! This is an oldie - it's been around for a long time! I'm glad you like it.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
LOL - Never, dear Droxy! This is an oldie - it's been around for a long time! I'm glad you like it.
Here's a word BRAVO! Can't wait for your next story.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
Thank you so much - that's a great word! I hope you will continue to enjoy my stories.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
Thank you so much - that's a great word! I hope you will continue to enjoy my stories.
What a wonderful story! Each story you write feels like your best ever to this reader! Can't wait to see what story you have up for us next!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
Thank you so much for your lovely comment! I appreciate it so much. I hope I can continue to please you.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
Thank you so much for your lovely comment! I appreciate it so much. I hope I can continue to please you.
WOW. The emotion, I just don't have the words. How about one of these? or this one you know this one is just as appropriate.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
Wow! I'll be perfectly happy with any of those! LOL Thank you so much. I really appreciate your kind words and emoticons. I'll put up the Epilogue tonight.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
Wow! I'll be perfectly happy with any of those! LOL Thank you so much. I really appreciate your kind words and emoticons. I'll put up the Epilogue tonight.
Severus Snape is a tease.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
LOL That he is!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
LOL That he is!
Beautiful story. I can hardly wait to read the next chapter. I am enjoying their tenderness and the aching loss you so articulately describe. Always enjoy reading your stories, but this story's poignant beauty has captured my attention.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
Thank you so much for your kind comments! I hope you will enjoy the remainder of the story.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
Thank you so much for your kind comments! I hope you will enjoy the remainder of the story.
Alan Rickman playing the role of Severus was perfect,even when Alan thickened a little in the last three movies. His voice is the stuff of legends and I never grow tired of hearing him speak9or sing).This story was wonderful, if only we could persuade Mr. Rickman to actually sing the beautiful lyrics in the story. The song Severus "made up" are those your words? Cause if they are you could have a secondary career as a songwriter! Well done! hugs~dee
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
Thank you sweetie! As a matter of fact, I do have a secondary career as a songwriter. I have a Bachelor's Degree in Music Education, and those are real songs, both the Black-Eyed Angel's song and the lullaby. I belong to a Songwriter's Guild, and I have been fortunate to win awards for my songwriting there.I do love AR's incredible voice. A friend gave me his audiobook version of Thomas Hardy's Return of the Native. I listen to it, and although I love it, I actually don't really know what's going on - I'm too busy loving his voice!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
Thank you sweetie! As a matter of fact, I do have a secondary career as a songwriter. I have a Bachelor's Degree in Music Education, and those are real songs, both the Black-Eyed Angel's song and the lullaby. I belong to a Songwriter's Guild, and I have been fortunate to win awards for my songwriting there.I do love AR's incredible voice. A friend gave me his audiobook version of Thomas Hardy's Return of the Native. I listen to it, and although I love it, I actually don't really know what's going on - I'm too busy loving his voice!
Well done. I do so love a happy ending and this one was doubly happy.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of The Black-Eyed Angel)
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!