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Five Times
Unholy_Spectacle15 Reviews | 3.93/10 (15 Ratings, 0 Likes, 4 Favorites )
She approached him five times. He'd always been too stubborn for his own good.
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So, her plan worked, though it might have taken longer than she had hoped. Nice to see him come to her and deal with his longing each year even though he wouldn't admit it to himself.
Great concept, but I can't buy into it. 6 years of waiting?? I realize this is in the humour category, but seriously???
All five times were wonderfully humourous and bittersweet, but the best has to be the final seventh. :) Really enjoyed your courageous Hermione and Severus, thank you!
I need mooooarr! Brilliant :)
"Was there something about mad hair that addled women’s brains?" So that's my problem...
Fun read. Thanks for sharing.
I like the fact that both of them matured over the time it took Severus to get a clue. I think they are well matched now.
Too funny and beautifully ended! Thanks for sharing!
Persistance is a virtue!
I like that Severus came looking for her in the end. Lovely story!
Aww.. This is really sweet. Thanks for posting!
It's not often I laugh out loud when reading fan fiction, but I did, twice, while reading this at two of Hermione's lines ("according to my research..." and "I rather think I'm asking nicely"). Really, it's a very well done, economical story, skillfully showing Hermione's increasing sophistication and adulthood and Severus's slow response to her persistent affection and honest desire.
Nicely done - just the right balance of the snarky and the vulnerable.
That was very, very good! Loved it.
She really was young at the beginning. But to waste so much time...stubborn man! At least she's more mature than him and let him in.
Loved your story. Thank you.
oh really well done.