A Cunning Plan
marianne le fey37 Reviews | 7.24/10 (37 Ratings, 0 Likes, 10 Favorites )
"Can you at least try to look like you're enjoying yourself? This won't work if you look nauseated."
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Reviews for A Cunning Plan
I adore the dialogue in this story! Thank you!
Lovely, lovely, lovely! Beautifully told, nice progression from nefarious plan to "Ron Who?" Bravo!!
Lol, cute story. Ron's such an ass.
LOL I like how her plan worked, in more ways than one. She sure seems to be enjoying the unintended consequences. Very creative way of writing it as just straight dialog leaving so much to the reader's interpretation.
Great fun, thank you. 
Fucksticks that was jolly fun!
Response from marianne le fey (Author of A Cunning Plan)
Crappity-crap!(thanks!)
Response from marianne le fey (Author of A Cunning Plan)
Crappity-crap!(thanks!)
Forgot to mention - if the title is a nod to Blackadder then I'm sending you lots of virtual hugs and kisses!!! xo
Response from marianne le fey (Author of A Cunning Plan)
. . . so cunning you could clean your teeth with it . . .
Aw, lovely! I ADORE good fanfic that has lots of dialogue rather than narrative that drones on and on. Very, very well done!
Response from marianne le fey (Author of A Cunning Plan)
Dialogue is what usually causes me the most conflict and I still don't know where this story came from, but I'm very glad you feel I got it right!
This put a huge grin on my face... :)) How perfect!
Response from marianne le fey (Author of A Cunning Plan)
Thank you, madhatter!
No matter how many times I read this (five time now) it never fails to make me squeee with joy, giggle at fucksticks, and swoon with happiness!
OK, I feel like a American twit. Fill me in on the Brit wit. I don't get the joke Severus makes when he says, "I'm northern, Hermione. I don't do wit". I promise I'll laugh.
He seems awfully willing to comply with Hermione's silliness, for Snape. I like it. :)
At least she realized she was making a mistake and correct it. And the result...she's happy :)Loved it. Thank you.
Response from marianne le fey (Author of A Cunning Plan)
She got there in the end, bless her!
Response from marianne le fey (Author of A Cunning Plan)
She got there in the end, bless her!
(grin)
Cute, funny, witty, and very well written! Reading this was as much fun as watching The Thin Man with Severus and Hermione as Nick and Nora Charles. And Crookshanks as Asta. Brava!
Beth
Response from marianne le fey (Author of A Cunning Plan)
Ooh, a quick trip to google tells me that's something I ought to watch! I wonder if Snape would be any good at solving crimes . . .
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
The first one made in 1934 is my favorite, but all of them a fun!
Amazingly cute, quite saucy, and wonderfully funny! Thank you for sharing it with us.
Response from marianne le fey (Author of A Cunning Plan)
Gotta love a bit of sauce!
Very nice! I enjoyed this thoroughly. :)
Response from marianne le fey (Author of A Cunning Plan)
Glad you liked!
what fun, clever and charming :)
Response from marianne le fey (Author of A Cunning Plan)
Awfully kind of you!
I loved it, this was brilliantly written. Very well done:-))
Response from marianne le fey (Author of A Cunning Plan)
Am thrilled you enjoyed it! Ta very muchly
Nicely done, thank you!
Response from marianne le fey (Author of A Cunning Plan)
No, thank you!
This was absolutely lovely and well written. Wonderful, believable dialogue. Nicely done.
Response from marianne le fey (Author of A Cunning Plan)
That's jolly lovely of you! Glad you approve!
Super cute story! I enjoyed a more relaxed and fun Severus.
Response from marianne le fey (Author of A Cunning Plan)
Me too! Not particularly in-character, but a lot of fun!