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1: Incubus

Incubus

Hechicera

22 Reviews   |   22 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )

Humor Drabble/100-Word Petulant_LDWS 530 Words 1 Chapter Complete
George Weasley Severus Snape

Even if the fat lady sings, it's not necessarily over.

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Chapter 1: Incubus


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8/10

Phyllidia

<snort> George is going to get into sooo much trouble.  I so could see this story continuing. 

And Snape in Bermuda shorts--scarier than a scowl and detention with Filch.

0/10

silverdoe

Brilliant! I wonder what george will do with that hair. LOL

0/10

peppermint

No need for the cloak now, is there? Snape must have mellowed if he's being so careless. 

10/10

HBAR

Why do I know that this is going to become and ongoing scuffle between these two?  Thanks for a good laugh.

0/10

scaranda

Excellent!

10/10

sweetflag

So funny.  George is so smooth under pressure, but let's hope he's more careful this time... for Molly's sake! hehehe

10/10

nagandsev

Brilliant! Love the description of the irate Severus - bermuda shorts -HA! The image won't leave my mind! Poor Millicent (but maybe what she doesn't know won't hurt her- hehe! She's a Slytherin - she'll rebound for the better;-) Love the strand of black hair on the glass - I wonder what our dear George will do with that?

10/10

sunny33

Oh, dear. Snape's reputation is never going to be the same again! :)

Response from Hechicera (Author of Incubus)

So the question is, will it help it or hurt it?

0/10

Severus49

Oh, this is just too funny!

Response from Hechicera (Author of Incubus)

Thank you! George thinks so, too...

0/10

debjunk

ha ha ha.  I loved Snape's threat, but the end was the killer.  Nicely done.

Response from Hechicera (Author of Incubus)

Thank you! George is a devious one for sure.

10/10

blue artemis

That actually wasn't supposed to make me want to smack George was it?  Poor Snape.

Response from Hechicera (Author of Incubus)

Hee. Smack away.

0/10

HermioneJeanSnape

Oh nooooo. George, don't do it! Lol at Severus in Samoa.

Response from Hechicera (Author of Incubus)

You don't reeeallly think George is going to be able to resist, do you?

0/10

lady_rhian

Love this! And the line about telling Molly? I just about keeled over at the thought of Snape showing up on the Burrow's step with such a bit of information in hand ... well done!

Response from Hechicera (Author of Incubus)

Thank you! Yes, Snape on the doorstep, knobbly knees showing beneath his Bermudas...

0/10

nata

Devious. Voldemort could have won if he had drafted the Weasley twins. They have guts and imagination and with them, anything is possible. Even when only one remains.

Response from Hechicera (Author of Incubus)

Yep. You go, George.

10/10

Owlbait

Irate Snape in shorts, gigglesnort! Oh the possibilities with that hair, and Rita .... Oh she is in trouble. Heeheehee. Very well done.

Response from Hechicera (Author of Incubus)

Thank you! I may have to write a sequel...

0/10

linlawless

Hahaha, oh, George!  Fun stuff!

Response from Hechicera (Author of Incubus)

Yeah, Snape may have met his match, don't you think?

0/10

herbologist

"I will tell. Your. Mother."This is so funny! But honestly - Snape in bermudas? Never! ;-)

Response from Hechicera (Author of Incubus)

Word count prevented me from going into more detail :-)

10/10

kyriaofdelphi

Oho, good one.

Response from Hechicera (Author of Incubus)

Thank you!

0/10

ofankoma

HILARIOUS! Oh, poor Millicent! Good on Severus and his Samoan masseuse! As for George taking the hair... well, it's only fair, isn't it, after the ear incident?

Response from Hechicera (Author of Incubus)

Thanks! You know, I actually had written a line about George grinning "from ear to ear" and had to go back and change it. Oops!

10/10

Aurette

“I will tell. Your. Mother.”  Bwuahaha!!  Awesome! And yet, does George stop?  No.  Great!

Response from Hechicera (Author of Incubus)

Of course he doesn't. When has he ever?Thanks for the review!

0/10

Rose of the West

Bah ha ha ha ha... and with a little polyjuice, Georgie is right back in business. Fantastic!

Response from Hechicera (Author of Incubus)

Yes, there's a sequel brewing in my mind already...

10/10

Dreamy_Dragon

This is fun. The twist at the end was brilliant :)

Response from Hechicera (Author of Incubus)

Thank you!

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