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Unfaithful
ZahariaCelestina6 Reviews | 6 Ratings, 0 Likes, 10 Favorites )
Severus Snape?s wife has always admired his wicked imagination, especially when it comes to sex...
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ZahariaCelestina
Member Since 2006 | 5 Stories | Favorited by 8 | 0 Reviews Written | 26 Review Responses
I live in Montreal, Canada. I have been writing for 17 years, but fanfiction is an art I discovered in January 2005. I really put my heart into the work I publish here. I hope you will enjoy my writing! The experience has been exhilarating so far!
Reviews for Unfaithful
Wow, great writing. I was fooled all the way through. I love when Lucius gets some naughty time in stories. Very erotic and fun to read.
Response from ZahariaCelestina (Author of Unfaithful)
Thank you so much for taking the time to review! Your comments are very encouraging! I'm so glad I was able to surprise you! ;) I love Lucius too! He's a very erotic character, not just evil! ;)
Ah, I've read this before. It was a great read then and still is now. Thanks for sharing.
Response from ZahariaCelestina (Author of Unfaithful)
Hello there! *wink* I'm glad to hear that it's still a good read! Thanks for taking the time to review! Take care!
This was absolutely amazing. The way you write completely mesmerizes me. Not only that, but the subject matter was particularly striking. I, myself, have a bit of a crush on Lucius, and I could see myself in Michaela's shoes (or thong). And, right up until the end, I actually believed that Severus was only watching... It was suspenseful, it was erotic, it was beautiful. It's definitely one of my favorites.
Response from ZahariaCelestina (Author of Unfaithful)
Hello! Thank you so very much for taking the time to review! You words warmed my heart! I am also really glad that the story got you the right way, that the mystery lasted until the end! Take care!
That was a very strange third person essay - or was it second person? Ah, who gives a shit, it was fun for all persons involved. Great writing! Keep up the good work.
Response from ZahariaCelestina (Author of Unfaithful)
Hello there; so sorry it took so long! I only saw your review today! Hehehehe it was a very strange format indeed, and quite tricky to write at times! But that you so much for your comments; they encourage me a LOT! Take care!