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Potions Under Duress Let Somebody Love You
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Let Somebody Love You

1: Prologue

Let Somebody Love You

Mhor Rioghain

18 Reviews   |   18 Ratings, 0 Likes, 14 Favorites )

Romance Epilogue What Epilogue? Potions Under Duress 3,274 Words 1 Chapter WIP
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

His parting words to her echoed in Hermione’s ears, a solemn warning. “Think very carefully before you walk this path, Miss Granger. Severus Snape knew scarcely a moment’s happiness in this world. It may be your most ardent desire to bring him back to life, but at what cost?”

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Chapter 1: Prologue


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10/10

sunny33

Interesting she'd already decided he was the one.  What will she do about it? :)

10/10

HBAR

What a wonderful start.  Your characters are great and I love the Matrimony monitor.  I'd say more, but I must go read the next chapter!

10/10

mimmom

I am intrigued.

10/10

Owlbait

Very nice. You even have me curious about Lavendar and Parvati's futures.

0/10

tenoh27

Intriguing beginning and looking forward to more! Thank you.

0/10

Learka

Ooo, what an interesting beginning!  I can't wait to find out what happens next!

10/10

Dreamy_Dragon

This is a very intriguing beginning! I look forward to reading more.

10/10

esmelle

Excellent chapter. I like this mature Hermione who knows what she wants. Good thing the board doesn't give names because Parvati and Lavender would have been shocked.

10/10

Muzzow

Very well written. An awesome and interesting start. Love the idea with the Ouija board. Fav'd for future updates. ^^

0/10

Angel92

Really, really good! A sad ending <3

Response from Mhor Rioghain (Author of Let Somebody Love You)

It's not over--far from it.

10/10

braye27

Well done!  This is now on my favorites list so I'll know when a new chapter has been posted.

I love the idea of this magical Ouija board.  My grandmother had one, and when we were little we used to have the best time asking it questions, so this first chapter brings back wonderful memories for me as well as setting the stage for what I expect will be a wonderful story.

Lavender and Parvati are well written as her suite mates and foils to get Hermione to begin thinking seriously about what she has only up till now allowed herself to think of as "wishes."  Well done!


Beth

10/10

MuseAmusant

An excellent beginning! I'm definitely looking forward to reading more. :)

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avonesque

 I am intrigued by the start of this and impressed as this seems to be your first story, I am looking forward to the next chapter, hopefully soon!

10/10

snarkycat

me like! please update soon!

9/10

VAMPIRE_LOVE

Love it!

10/10

Bel

very, very nicely done! Your words flowed well, no choppy hesitations, no midunderstandings or misdirection. I look forward to seeing more of this!
I also see that this is your first fic posted here. Incredibly impressive.

10/10

ClayPotter

I don't usually like stories where Hermione is under aged and paired with Severus. But this one has an intriguing beginning. So I will read on. Please just don't make him a perverted old man. If you write him as the Zonko's game described him, I'll be good with it.

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Severus49

Oh, this is starting out very well! Can't wait to read more!

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