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richardgloucester

5 Reviews   |   5 Ratings, 0 Likes, 3 Favorites )

Drama Romance Potions Under Duress 790 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Crookshanks Hermione Granger Severus Snape

After the war, Severus observes without being observed. This was a gift for Droxy on her birthday in January 2010.

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Chapter 1: Watching


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19 Stories  |  Favorited by 337  |  22 Reviews Written  |  585 Review Responses

RichardGloucester is now also a published author, under the name Jae Eynon, with stories in a new anthology, "IMMANENCE" (Story Spring Publishing, 2016) and "Thoroughly Modern Monsters" (Story Spring Publishing, 2013).  She still loves the world of Harry Potter and sails the SSHG ship!

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10/10

mick42

All together, at last, as it always should have been.

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Ljpjcg

So unexpected yet beautifully endearing! I'm in love.

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ofankoma

Oh, this is just lovely.  The repetition in the opening of your story - 'He watched...' - is just so simple and so powerful.  Particularly when we make it to "He watched his world settle down into its customary patterns, a little chastened but otherwise unchanged." Now THAT'S a statement - about how easily things fade into the background and how we take so much for granted. It's also poetry.

Ach, and a large ginger menace, a little piece of Hermione, can stay with him until she joins him again! This is just so tender and understated, and their last exchange? Perfect.

0/10

moor

Very neat!

10/10

mcfan

Wow.  Such a nice story!

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