Perfectly said. If you can say something in not-so-many words, and get the point across, that's the best IMHO. (The whole story's based on that opinion.)

10/10

oyasumikaze

Aaaah! This was SO intense. Loved it. A harsh poetry of passion.

Response from notsosaintly (Author of HOT)

Thank you. I'm glad I was able to portray the passion in so few words.

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

And I still love this story. :)

Response from notsosaintly (Author of HOT)

Simple and to the point ... :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Reviewer)

Uh-huh...

10/10

snapeophile

In this case, I think "hot" is an understatement. I also love the really creative format of this one-shot.

Response from notsosaintly (Author of HOT)

Thank you. I always forget this little one-shot is here, but I'm glad it gets read once in a while!

0/10

Laurel

That was great! *smokes cigarette*

10/10

ickle duddykins

Definitely HOT. And spicy as well. And, in general, some fantastic Hermione/Severus smut. :o) ,Sue.

Response from notsosaintly (Author of HOT)

Thank you kindly!

0/10

calamitysandra

So HOT!WOW!Sandra

7/10

EverMystique

Well, I'm a little late in the game stumbling across this one, but it is very steamy. The adjectives at the start of each paragraph were a little distracting. Still, it was hot.

Response from notsosaintly (Author of HOT)

And I'm a little late in responding (darn real life issues—let's all live online!). Glad you thought it was steamy. The adjectives are a poetic vehicle to inspire each line and actually relate to each line. Now I'm wondering if I had put poetry/prose as a genre. I probably should if I have not. (*goes to check*) Thanks for the review!!

0/10

tenoh27

Sexy and fitting, thank you!

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