Unspeakably charming--you're really nailed the four voices, and built a searing fire between Harry and Severus. Lovely, lovely, lovely promise--squee!

Nice development of awareness between two who hadn't considered the other potential partners. :)

I've never imagined Snarry could work this well, wow! The way you capture Snape's and Harry's voices here, even Ron's and Hermione's, is absolutely amazing. I'm looking forward to reading more from you!

This story is full of lines that stick and hold- that catch really, really well.  I was really impressed and surprised, to find these gems that added depth to a story that could easily have been 'just smut.'  Which lines?  Possibly the best one in the story was Severus: "It isn't his fault he has the life you want."  That stopped me in my tracks.  As a queer, and a happy one at that, I do sometimes wonder what life would have been if I'd turned out straight.  Does everyone?  Harry does here, and Severus- it's brilliant, and really insightful.  (I wish I were more articulate)  
"Someone who's going to be hexed..." made me laugh, and then the line about discovering he was a wizard seemed really fitting too.  I don't know how you did it, but you buried jewels all through this story, and it was a pleasure to dig them all up.

I've been yearning for a nice snarry story and here it is, where I least expected it! I love all the characters and the major lack of angst - it's just perfect. Of course, now I want more lol.

Loved it! I look long and hard for romantic not too angst filled Snarries and this was great.