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Crossfire
shatteredrose11 Reviews | 11 Ratings, 0 Likes, 14 Favorites )
Severus and Hermione are two people caught in the crossfire of the War. AU after HBP.
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Very enjoyable read. Sad, but hopeful and sweet, too.
Ahh sigh! Compelling story and great imagery. Well done!
Beautiful. Very intense. Explicit descriptions were unnecessary, as emotions were the main focus here.Often people do things during wartime that they might never do when life is normal. I hope these two can continue their love when the war is over. Although I think seven children might be a bit much, even for Hermione!
Response from shatteredrose (Author of Crossfire)
I tried to make sure that their emotions were the main focus, so I'm very glad that it was picked up on.Also if I continue this later in a sequel, I highly doubt either of them would want 7 children either. I used that line almost as a play on other stories I've read (I can't name any honestly, nor would I) about how they realize their soul mates and have an amount of children that I feel doesn't fit their personality.Thanks for reviewing!
That was a bittersweet story... and I enjoyed it very much!
Response from shatteredrose (Author of Crossfire)
Well I'm throwing around some concepts for a potential sequeal, so I might give everyone a happy ending. Though, knowing my preferences, it'll still be bittersweet.
lovely, lovely story! You did one thing that I really admire and seldom see-you have them admitting they want an after, together, rather than having them brush it off or get angry or run away! Brave and honest, as Hermione is by nature and as Severus would be if he could, I think!!!Brava!!!Fizzabella
Response from shatteredrose (Author of Crossfire)
Thank you! I really feel the same about the characters being brave and honest, especially with each other.
I really liked this. It was in a way very calming to read.The fact that I listend to Crossfire by Brandon Flowers made it much more moving, I could deffinatly see the inspiration there.
Response from shatteredrose (Author of Crossfire)
Yay! You get cookies! I'm glad you like it :D
well written, sad but there is hope too, I loved it
Response from shatteredrose (Author of Crossfire)
I do my best to let them have a bit of hope where ever I make Severus and Hermione go. :D It's sad to read a story thats is well, sad. While a lot of them are very well written, I don't think I have it in me.
great story, really well written. Thanks for posting
Response from shatteredrose (Author of Crossfire)
Thank you, I'm happy you enjoyed it.
Beautifully rendered, thank you.
Response from shatteredrose (Author of Crossfire)
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!