Dynamics
Chapter 17 of 24
Rose of the WestAndromeda fights for what belongs to her.
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Andromeda had long since regretted the kind urge that had suggested that Hermione spend so much time in the kitchen. It was good for the younger witch to practice the household spells that were so foreign to her. It was good for her to learn how to manage a house and prepare a good meal. The difficulty was in watching the younger witch gain confidence and beauty. Severus had been very definite about the terms of their marriage, but in the presence of a smarter and younger witch, Andromeda knew moments of worry.
As Valentine's Day approached, the girl went too far. She was naturally eager and excited, but her questions and the advice she requested were things Andromeda had been uncomfortable discussing with her own daughter. Hermione, however, never seemed to understand that some topics were inappropriate.
"It's got to happen soon," she said. "He's got to start thinking about romance."
"I'm sure that..." Andromeda had nothing to offer. More to the point, she could admit, to herself at least, that she wanted all of Severus's thoughts of romance centered wholly upon herself. She wasn't sure how to respond to Hermione's comments, but it didn't matter, since the girl simply made her own observations.
"I'm going to dress for Valentine's Day so that he'll make his move. I'll wear something snug and revealing. Something red, of course."
Andromeda had tried to be a good sport. She had avoided interrupting their private conversations, thinking that she should allow them to make their future plans. She had tiptoed past his room during the evenings, not wanting to trouble them. Suddenly something, some jealous monster perhaps, raised its head and rebelled. She wouldn't let Severus go without a fight. She certainly wouldn't let the future impinge upon the present. He hadn't even kissed the girl yet; well and good. Somehow Andromeda would make sure he wouldn't do so until the proper time came.
She considered her options as her husband lay sprawled across her body. While he slept in her arms, she stroked his hair and thought about how best to wage her small battle. Narcissa or not, Hermione or not, he was Andromeda's husband right now. Whatever they managed to arrange for the future, this was Andromeda's time and, by Psyche, Andromeda would have every second of it.
On the morning of Valentine's Day, she stilled her trembling breath and went to London. She started on Diagon Alley but walked into the Leaky Cauldron and through a door she had only heard of before. Ten minutes after throwing Floo Powder into her own kitchen fireplace, she found herself staring at Muggle Charing Cross Road.
Squaring her shoulders, because she was a Black after all, she followed carefully written directions and made her way to the underground trains and a shopping district in a trendy part of town. Eventually she reached a boutique Nymphadora had once laughingly mentioned. She watched the door for a few minutes. She couldn't be too careful. Knowing her daughter, the place might have have been one where tarts acquired their professional materials or something like that. The clientele seemed well-mannered and elegantly dressed. That was a relief.
She finally took a step through the door. One of the sales clerks came to welcome her. She led the prospective customer to a counter where there was some sort of catalogue. Andromeda had been given a strange card with fancy numbers on it by the goblins. It would somehow enable her to draw from her Swiss account at Muggle stores without the Ministry knowing. She placed it on the counter top and said, "Make me irresistible."
The sales clerk looked at the card and smiled brightly. Then she looked Andromeda up and down, walking around her. She nodded to a co-worker, and together the two started measuring. After that they started pulling garments from racks and cupboards. Finally they sent their customer through a door that had the label "SPA" on it. Minutes later, Andromeda couldn't decide whether she felt more violated or pampered, but she set her chin and submitted to the treatments. She wanted a night that neither Severus nor she would ever forget.
She arrived back home to find a squalling baby in the kitchen with the house-elf. "Little Master is hard to comfort, Mistress."
"I thought Severus would play with him, at least for a little while."
"Master takes good care of Little Master, but then Missy comes and makes Master shut door. Master never shuts door, before." Based on Hermione's determination, it was clear what was probably happening. Andromeda sat down heavily into a chair. The elf rushed over and patted her hand. "Is Mistress sick? Her face is white."
Andromeda roused herself to reassure the house-elf. "Oh, no, Birdie, I'm fine. I'll take Teddy now. I'm sure that if I take him upstairs with a bottle, he'll feel better."
"Thank you, Mistress. Birdie looks after dinner."
"It's just the things we discussed this morning, no more. Thank you, Birdie." Teddy stopped fussing so loudly when his grandmother took him, but he still sniffled and whimpered all the way down the hall. As she passed the door to Severus's room, it opened and Severus himself stood there. He looked at her, and it was almost as though he had been waiting for her.
"I thought I'd heard you come in," he said. "I'm sorry that I couldn't take care of him."
"He's probably a bit spoiled by all our attention most of the time. I'm sure he'll be fine this once." She couldn't help glancing past his still perfectly-dressed form at the room behind. Hermione stood there in a red dress that was far too short, but was impeccably fastened. Nothing had happened. She allowed herself a small smile for the triumph.
"You look different." Severus hadn't taken his eyes from her.
She smiled a little self-consciously, and her free hand patted her head. "Oh, I had my hair done."
He looked her up and down, letting her know that he noticed more than her hair. "It's quite attractive," he answered. He glanced back down from her elegant upsweep to the wrap dress that hugged the very curves he had often told her he admired. "Very attractive."
"Thank you," she said.
"I'll be right up," he leaned down and whispered into her ear.
"I need to see to Teddy," she answered, "but Birdie is seeing to dinner."
His next whisper was almost inaudible. "Then I shall be seeing to you."
The sensation that she was in control was heady. She couldn't resist the opportunity to rub her victory into the face of the witch who didn't know there was a competition. "Good evening, Hermione," she said, knowing that it was anything but good for the younger woman. She didn't wait for a response but rather looked the wizard in the eye as she moved to the stairs.
Severus couldn't understand what had gotten into Hermione. First she had insisted upon shutting the door, although he preferred to keep it open, just to protect everyone's reputation. Then she had drawn attention to her dress, asking if he liked it. When he had observed, "I'm sure whichever Gryffindor for whom you wore it will admire it greatly," she seemed miffed.
Her behavior on her studies had been distracted, and he was grateful when Andromeda came home. It was as though a breath of normalcy had come through the house. Much as he liked the girl, he couldn't wait for her to leave so that he could find out what Andromeda had done today besides visit the hairdresser and purchase that incredibly distracting dress.
He saw the girl to the Floo and then took the tray the elf handed him. As he went up the stairs, he discovered that he was walking through flower petals on a path outlined by candles. When he arrived in the bedroom, he found a witch waiting for him, a witch who had gone to a great deal of effort just for him. There were more candles, and the flower petals were swirled around the room along the floor, over the bed, and on the love seat where she was sitting.
"Happy Valentine's," she said.
He moved across the room quickly. He wanted to put the tray on the coffee table and take Andromeda into his arms. Once accomplished, he crushed her close. "My dove," was all he could say.
"You like it, then?"
He groaned into her shoulder. "I can't decide whether to ravish you as you are or to undress you and go from there."
"We have all night and plenty of food," she murmured.
He lifted his head and looked around. "That's right. We're married, and we're in our own bedroom." He sat on the loveseat and pulled her down onto his lap. He fumbled in his eagerness, and Andromeda, who had never before understood sexual power, put her arms around her husband's neck and over the next several minutes brought them both complete enjoyment.
His face pressed to her bosom as they caught their breath afterward. "What's gotten into you?" he asked.
"I don't know," she answered, "but I'm determined to enjoy every minute with you that I have."
He kissed a bit of skin visible above the neck of her dress. "Would it be all right to eat, now?"
"Oh, yes," she answered.
He ate quickly and urged her to do the same. "You're so different tonight," he observed. "Did you really do all of this for me?"
"I just wanted you to know how important you are to me, how much I've come to enjoy having you here." She was careful not to say anything that might be interpreted as needy. She didn't want him to feel that she was clinging to him.
"You know I've enjoyed every minute I've spent in your home. Every minute, even two years ago, when I believed you were unattainable." He leaned toward her and fingered the ties of her dress. "May I?"
She smiled. "Of course."
The dress was held together with a tie on the outside over one hip and another tie on the inside over the other hip. He found both ties and unfastened them and then held the dress open. He lost his breath looking at her. He had never seen so much black lace in his life.
"For me?" He leaned back helplessly. Sensing that she needed to take the initiative, she stood. Lifting her hands, she slid the collar of the dress over her shoulders. Then she shrugged and let it fall to the floor. He moaned weakly. She reached up and removed the pins from her hair, letting it tumble around her shoulders and down her back.
"My dove..."
She reached for his hand. "Come."
He followed her to the bed. She knelt upon it and leaned toward him, kissing him as he stood there. He simply sampled her mouth and enjoyed the taste of it. There were some flavors that were from the dinner they had just shared, and others that were simply Andromeda to him.
She pulled free of his lips and started kissing his chest. He hadn't realized until then how quickly she had undressed him. He wasn't sure what she wanted him to do with his hands, so he let them trail down her back. When he moved lower, he discovered a suspender and sucked in his breath. He followed the elastic down to where a silk stocking was held in place. He groaned, and his other hand moved to do what the first was doing.
He wasn't sure if he could wait. Now he took the initiative and gently pressed her back among the pillows. He had to explore and experiment, but he figured out how to remove her delectable undergarments, kissing and touching the whole time. Her gasps and shrieks drove him mad. Finally they were alone on the bed save for the flower petals. He leaned up over her and kissed her as the toes of one pedicured foot traced the back of his leg.
He wished he could tell the witch how he felt about her. He was sure she knew, and he entertained hopes that she felt the same way. He whispered that he found her beautiful and desirable. She sighed in response, and he told her of the pleasure she brought him. A moment passed in which neither was capable of coherent thought.
When he was able to speak again, he brushed her hair out of the way and whispered. "I wish I could explain how much I feel for you, how important you've become to me and how much I admire and esteem you." He couldn't resist kissing her once more.
When she could speak again, she said, "Severus, I love you."
He was very quiet. He was facing a different direction, and she couldn't see his eyes. She had no idea what he was thinking and suddenly started to panic. It had just come out...she hadn't meant to say anything so needy or clingy.
"I'm sorry," she whispered. "That just came out; I don't mean to make you uncom..."
His mouth covered hers, and it seemed that his face might be damp. "Don't be sorry; I was hoping you felt the same way I do." He whispered a Summoning spell and a box came out of his robe. "This is for you. I've felt since we married that you should have a proper diamond ring." He slid the ring on her finger and then removed the wedding band from the chain around her neck to place it on her hand as well. "I look forward to the day we announce our marriage to the whole world," he said.
A/N: Thank you to Trickie Woo for beta reading!
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Go Lucius! You shut that bitch up haha. Still can't believe she was seriously talking about murdering the baby! But I suppose she would have thought about it and thought against such an abonimable thought, right? Especially since she wants another baby so much herself. Hope she gets considerably busy with her own life very soon! Because she needs it!! I shudder at what a daughter would have to put up with from her though, or maybe she would soften with her own daughter, who knows? Let me guess, Hermione has decided to go get comfort from Viktor Krum cos she's feeling rejected and is craving attention haha, and who is the person who Draco recognised and bothered him... Curious! Hoping for a longer chapter next :P
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Stars are Blind)
Thanks for the review!Very clever suppositions! Yeah, Narcissa needs something to keep her busy. Lucius will try to fill that gap as well as he can, LOL!
If this is how the Malfoys take the news, I can hardly imagine how the rest of the wizarding world will react. I'm unsettled by Narcissa's belief in her ability to reverse the situation, but at least Lucius and Draco seem somewhat accepting. I look forward to the next chapter as soon as possible. Thanks!
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Stars are Blind)
Yeah, Narcissa is quite a piece of work.I think she's got an uphill battle now, though. Thank you for the review!
Hi, I just discovered that there is this sequel. What a unique thought of linking Severus with Andromeda! It works really well here--good job!This chapter: Severus now sees first-hand what it means to raise a baby. He surely realises that he had been in no position to raise his daughter adequately 19y back. I actually wonder how seriously he was asking for her--had he even thought it through?? Most boys that age wouldn't, and he definitely wasn't overly mature but seeking recognition among all the wrong people! Nevertheless, Hermione is going to need some time and someone who listens and moderates carefully. Could that be Molly perhaps? Looking forward to another chapter!
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Stars are Blind)
Excellent points, all! I don't think young Severus worried about what to do with a baby other than what he hoped it would get him. So yeah, not thinking it through, for sure. And yes, Hermione needs to find herself some good advice. The question is whether she'll actually find it or follow it. Thanks for the review!
How many people know of her affection for Severus? Poor girl will have some heavy humiliation to deal with if the public are aware, hopefully not too much though. I hope her attitude improves a lot!
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Stars are Blind)
I don't think her feelings were too obvious to anyone outside the family, and Severus completely misread them. By not actually having her tell Severus what she thought, she gets to save face, but the fact that Andromeda has tried to be so helpful, through her own ignorance, is going to be a sore spot. Or maybe I've really balled this up. We'll see. ;)Thank you for the review!
Man is she a little shithead! "some lovesisck mortal" but I guess she is terribly confused regarding her affections and probably feeling a bit disgusted at the same time! hahaha I do feel sorry for her, but she's still been a bit of an annoying idiot the whole time anyway thoughout this story. Looking forward to what comes next :)
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Stars are Blind)
It was meant to show that she's a bit enamoured with something she's constructed in her mind rather than what he reallly is. She's just turrned 19, by my calculations, and her growing up got interrupted, so now she has to catch up. She'll be ok, though.Thank you for the reveiw!
Poor Hermione! Narcissa is to blame too, of course, she could have guessed something earlier, having known all the pertinent people, and maybe Hermione would not have acknowledged her feelings. Do you pair her with Tim, I wonder?
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Stars are Blind)
Yes, a lot of people should have known better. Hermione hasn't quite made a fool of herself to Severus, but she suspects a lot of people will be laughing at her, now, and that's going to be unbearable. Tim would be an interesting pairing, for sure. We'll have to see how things progress.
Wow! I just spent a few very enjoyable hours catching up with this story. If you are going where I guess you are it will get even more exciting. I really like how you bring a minor character to life, thank you! Your Andromeda is a remarkable woman.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Stars are Blind)
Thank you! I love Andromeda myself, because I love her husband and daughter, and she must have had some amazing internal resources to survive everything.
Yayyy! So excited! I hear what Joan is saying about Andromeda's problem with Sev/Hermione dragging out a bit, but it looks as though things will turn around very soon! Don't stop updating pleeease xx
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Stars are Blind)
Thank you for the review! I'm afraid I dug a bit of a hole in this one, but hopefully it's going to work out soon.
I have spent the better part of two days reading The Life and Times of Perseus and this story so far. What an enjoyable time it has been! I've not read other stories about Andromeda and Ted so your stories are wonderfully filling that void for me. At this point I'm somewhat frustrated that Andromeda can't just tell Severus that Cissy told her he would marry Hermione. It seems as though there is quite an ongoing, long-standing miscommunication that, from my perspective, is beginning to drag this story out. But I am thankful for your recent update, and I hope you will continue to update regularly. Thanks for yor beautiful work!
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Stars are Blind)
In a nutshell you're describing the reasons why this story went on hiatus, LOL Hopefully the next few chapters will pull things out of the doldrums. Thank you for your honesty, and for taking the time to leave a review. I appreciate it.
Oh my, another great twist! I'm so looking forward for more!
What a patchwork family!
Hmm. I'm not sure that Hermione would up and fail her NEWTs if she found out, and surely it would be less stressful for everyone in the mean time. But I suppose Severus will do what he will, and there is no making him understand.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Stars are Blind)
I don't think she'd fail her NEWTs, but I think she might get distracted enough that she didn't get 106%, LOL. Over-protecting her future seems to be one of Severus's little fixations, thereby furthering the family pasttime. Thank you, again. :)
Oh, I missed two chapters! I need to put this story on alert since I apparently can't be trusted to see it when it comes up. Oh, that Umbridge makes me so mad! Leave it to the ministry to try and leave poor Teddy totally without because of who his guardian is.But I hope Andromeda was listening this time when Severus tried to reassure her. Wonderful man.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Stars are Blind)
Umbridge is pretty evil, but she saves us writers from having to write someone else that way, if that's a benefit, LOL?I think Andromeda is starting to pay attention. She needs to stop being fixated on the other idea. Of course, fixation seems to be a family trait...Thank you for reviewing! I so appreciate it.
I thought sure he would tell Hermione, and what is it with wizards anyway? I'm like Andromeda -- touch me when I say 'no' and get hexed (or a knee to the groin), whichever works best. ^_^
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Stars are Blind)
My beta reader is a bit impatient with Severus over this chapter, too, but the poor fellow seems to be a bit chicken when it comes to confrontation with witches. I guess Stanley thought that if he pressured her she would just fall into his arms. I'm glad Andromeda was able to hex the guy, even if she didn't mean to. Thanks for the review!
it is understandable that Andromeda is unsecure in the marriage, I think Severus is behaving badly - he is in a way cheating on both women, I hope he soon will come to his senses
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Stars are Blind)
Everyone's got a secret and a reason for thinking they need to keep it. He'll come to his senses... eventually. Thank you for the review!
Page turner. I've just read it all in one go! Finding it hard to gauge exactly how Severus feels - A's worries about him are strange, and, I'm assuming, due to her own lack of confidence, but there's a certain manipulative quality to him here that I distrust. Also, his relationship with Hermione is a bit of a question mark. I have to admit I'd prefer a HGSS but am now a bit torn over what should happen. I don't want H or A hurt. Looking forward to what you have planned :)
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Stars are Blind)
Thank you, again!
Page turner. I've just read it all in one go! Finding it hard to gauge exactly how Severus feels - A's worries about him are strange, and, I'm assuming, due to her own lack of confidence, but there's a certain manipulative quality to him here that I distrust. Also, his relationship with Hermione is a bit of a question mark. I have to admit I'd prefer a HGSS but am now a bit torn over what should happen. I don't want H or A hurt. Looking forward to what you have planned :)
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Stars are Blind)
Well, he's not very good at the whole romance thing, and there's a secret or two he's keeping from everyone. I'm not going to tell you what will happen next, but I can promise a happy ending for everyone. My stories end that way with very little exception.Thank you for the lovely reviews!
Response from Tilly (Reviewer)
Yay! I love happy endings!ps - sorry about the duplicate posting :/
Ugh they should ban Narcissa and Druella from the house. Andromeda needs to get a backbone where those two are concerned. Love how Severus is so tender and loving with Andromeda. Can't wait for Andromeda to see that this is a real relationship, not temporary. Hope you update soon.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Stars are Blind)
Wouldn't it be better if we could just decide not to be related to our relatives any more? LOL.Thank you for the lovely review! The next chapter had some major retooling and is in process right now. I hope to get it posted in a few days.
I love this already, I loved The Life and Times of Perseus,and your Andromeda. Both she and Severus deserve some happines, but we will see where you will lead them
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Stars are Blind)
Thank you, again! I hope you enjoy what happens to them as they recover from the war.
Beautiful chapter. I think that says it all. ^_^
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Stars are Blind)
Thank you. I'm so glad that you're enjoying this.
Aww, I love that Andi is finally letting herself go, but her emotions are bittersweet.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Stars are Blind)
Thank you! She's so sure she knows what will happen that she thinks she already knows the answers, so she won't ask the important questions.
finally!!!!!! at long last....... and draco taking care of teddy..... that's a nice touch
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Stars are Blind)
I couldn't wait any longer, myself. ;) Thank you for the review!
I liked where she looks up to the sky and can't decide if Perseus is pursuing or pulling away. So evocative. ^_^
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Stars are Blind)
Thank you! I'm so glad you saw that the way I hoped I wrote it. It was an important moment for her.
this was mean........... let them get close and let severus realise what she fears........
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Stars are Blind)
It is mean, and I know I'm on the edge of drawing it out too much. The next chapter will be different, I promise. Thanks for the review!
Ugh, Druella is still alive and as awful as always. Andromeda needs to get a backbone and kick Narcissa and Druella out and take the suitors with them. Severus has made his feelings clear. I hope Andromeda is listening.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Stars are Blind)
Yeah... Druella is still alive when Harry and Sirius look at the family tree in OotP, so I guess she's still around, putting her nose where it's not wanted.Andromeda is listening to too many people. Given all the things they are all telling her, she might not understand it all.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Stars are Blind)
Whoops! I meant to say thanks for the review, too! :)
Ah, schemes within plots within machinations. Good job. Can't wait for the next chapter. ^_^
Response from Rose of the West (Author of Stars are Blind)
Thank you! It's coming! It's true that everyone has an angle here. Most of them are Slytherins, after all. ;) I hope you continue to enjoy it!