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Potions Under Duress Taking Farewell
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Taking Farewell

1: Taking Farewell

Taking Farewell

beaweasley2

17 Reviews   |   17 Ratings, 0 Likes, 8 Favorites )

Drabble/100-Word Potions Under Duress 1,141 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Hermione Granger Name Withheld (surprise)

She came to take her farewell. It was the only place she knew that she could… but she knew he wasn’t there.

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Chapter 1: Taking Farewell


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Member Since 2006  |  53 Stories  |  Favorited by 519  |  2,769 Reviews Written  |  6,181 Review Responses

I love to write. A dreamer, a creator and filled with wonder, imagination and life. Sometimes I get lost in the other worlds I've read and in some I create. It's all good, I’m in good company. 

“Imagination does not become great until human beings, given the courage and the strength, use it to create.”― Maria Montessori
 “Our imagination flies -- we are its shadow on the earth.”― Vladimir Nabokov 
“Imagination is everything. It is the preview of life's coming attractions.”― Albert Einstein

“Imagination will often carry us to worlds that never were, but without it we go nowhere.” ― Carl Sagan

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Reviews for Taking Farewell

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10/10

sinbad

Excellent, poignant and sweet.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Taking Farewell)

Thank you very much, doll. Hugs~

10/10

notsosaintly

Wow, that was a powerful piece, beaweasley.  And the ending, I loved it.  So beautiful.  I like how you kept it vague to let the reader use their imagination.  Amazing.  Thank you for thinking about me.  It has been an unusual time, to say the least.  It certainly isn't what I'd ever have imagined.  It is nice to know that there are friends like you who keep me in mind. 

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Taking Farewell)

You are very welcome. I'm so glad that you like yor gift, (I suck at sympathy cards) and wanted to give you something with hope in it. Something positive - a promise at the end.My prayers and thoughts are with you, and yes, you have friends here for you. Hugs~

10/10

snitchette

I like that there is hope at the end. Maybe he's not dead after all. Or maybe it was just the wind.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Taking Farewell)

Yes, I wanted it to end on a note of hope. No it was him, ghosts don't have shadows nor do leaves stop against them then flutter off. lol Disillusioned.Thank you so much for the reveiw and the shiny stars.

0/10

Severus49

Beautifully written!  Okay, I'm an emotional mess now!  LOL! Thanks for that!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Taking Farewell)

Thank you very much.Oh, sorry about that. Your welcome? *holds out facial tissue*Thank you for the review.

10/10

Clairvoyant

So beautiful and sad, but hopeful....

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Taking Farewell)

Thank you very much.

0/10

sunny33

Very sad. But nice to think he heard all that. :)

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Taking Farewell)

Thank you.

0/10

debjunk

A lovely tribute.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Taking Farewell)

Thank you very much.

10/10

PHONELADY

THAT WAS SWEET OF HER TO COME AND PAY HER RESPECTS TO SNAPE, OF COURSE I KNOW HE DIDNT DIE. NICE STORY.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Taking Farewell)

Nope, he was right there listening in! lolThankn you very much for the review and the pretty stars.

0/10

moiramountain

A beautiful story and a compassionate gift.  I offer my belief that her loved one is on a journey of light. 

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Taking Farewell)

Thank you very much. I think she'd appreciate the thought. Thank you for the review.

8/10

MsTree

Beautiful story. I had tears in my eyes.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Taking Farewell)

Thank you very much. Hugs~

10/10

sregner

Was he there?

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Taking Farewell)

Yes, sitting on the rock where Harry had cried. Then he walked up to where she had been standing after she left.

10/10

Marty21

Beautifully written, *Sniffs*

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Taking Farewell)

Thank you. I'll send you a virtual tissue and offer a hug. Sorry to make you cry.Thank you for the review.

10/10

Anonymous

Really lovely. He's the most tragic character ever, because not one nice thing happens within his actual lifetime. He never lives to see himself respected. It's nice to see him witness it in this fic. And actually, I think it's technically possible in canon that he didn't die. Lovely work.

Author's Response: Actully, Disillusioned was my intent: the shadow shifting, the sound of his boots as he walked, the shinner, the leaf landing against his body, the light bending...  so in this story he does see the respect given to him even if everyone thinks he's dead.

Thank you very much for the review and the shiny stars.

alliean's response: Oh yes, that's what I meant really. I didn't phrase it right, I know he is Disillusioned, not dead.

10/10

blue artemis

That was beautiful and haunting.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Taking Farewell)

Thank you very much, blue.

10/10

braye27

Bea, this is lovely and gave me hope that what we perceived as an ending isn't necessarily the case.  Perhaps Severus will reveal himself to Hermione in time.It's such a lovely gift for Notsosaintly.Beth

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Taking Farewell)

Brayer, you never know. We can all hope - that's what I wanted anyway.Thank you for the review, doll. Hugs~

10/10

sevibaby

This was really good.  I have tears in my eyes.  Thanks for writing this.xxxxxxooooooo

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Taking Farewell)

You are most welcome. Thank you very much for reading and for the review.

10/10

ClayPotter

One could infer from the ending that he is not dead. One could hope so, anyway.Beautifully written. Thanks for sharing.I'm not a part of the LJ family, so I didn't know that notsosaintly had a tragedy in her life. My heart goes out to her as well.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Taking Farewell)

Yes, one could definately inferr that! I wnated it to end with a ray of hope. Thank you very much and you are most welcome.I heard about it through a friend, and just wanted to make her something - so the picture that I drew poped in my head and the drabble wrote itself after. Thank you for the review and the shiny stars.

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