New Chapter for The Unrequited Heart
The Unrequited Heart
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Bill Weasley catches his fiancée in a compromising position.
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Just another wayward copywriter chewed up and spit out from the merciless world of advertising. Oh, and my writing for the most part centers around a fabulously snarky, drop-dead sexy dark wizard. He's my not-so-secret obsession.
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A consequence that Bill will likely rue to his dying day! (But not bad for Severus!)
I enjoyed this very much. Nice response to the prompt!
Wow! I would never thought Bill to be that kind of person. He had a right to be jealous at first, but if he had acted immediatly he would have understood his mistake and nothing of this would have occured. At least Severus gets to get some happiness out of this. You know this could be a wonderful first chapter of a longer story where we could discover what consequences this could bring with Voldy and the war etc.
Response from rosewood (Author of The Unrequited Heart)
It would be hard to argue that his ultimate response was a crime of passion considering he initially walked away and had a chance to mull things over. In the end he decided on a particularly horrid form of revenge instead of perhaps just breaking things off or letting cooler heads prevail.As far as expanding what was initially meant to be a one-shot, let's just say the plot bunnies are in a huddle at the moment.Thank you for your kind words of encouragement. :)
Ha! Take that Bill Weasley, by being an idiotic prat you have lost the one good thing coming your way. Too bad (not) that the plan backfired and nothing will make Bill able to make amends for his stupidity. I hope Severus and Fleur will have a long and happy life together!
Response from rosewood (Author of The Unrequited Heart)
Yeah, Bill really screwed up. When will men ever learn to take a step back, look at the situation with an open mind and not automatically jump to conclusions. Somehow I don't think he'll like reprecussions caused by his callous actions.I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks for the kind review. :)
I really enjoyed this, Rosewood - Fleur and Severus: not a pairing I have ever read before, but it works for me, If you ask me this has 'sequel' written all over it. Well done.
Response from rosewood (Author of The Unrequited Heart)
Severus and Fleur are indeed a rare pairing. I think many writers don't consider this pair because Fleur is usually not portrayed in a flattering or sympathetic light. But I agree that this story could use a little closure.Thanks for the warm review. :)
Indeed, an epilogue is in order! SS/HG is my favorite pairing, but this is intriguing, and very well written. I'd love to know how things progress between Severus and Fleur, and I really want to know how Bill will react, particularly when he learns the truth about Remus. Please write more!
Response from rosewood (Author of The Unrequited Heart)
There is sometime about this storyline that has been weighing on my mind as well. Let me ponder over it for a little while.Thank you for your kind words. I'm thrilled you enjoyed this little story. :)
I'm sure Remus and Tonks would be devastated to learn that their little game inadvertently caused the destruction of Bill and Fleur's engagement. Not to mention how Bill would react on learning that he inflicted such a torment on his perfectly innocent fiancee.You did an OUTSTANDING job with my prompt... so much so, I think a second chapter, or a small epilogue might perhaps be in order? ;)I'd give you more than 5 stars, if I could!
Response from rosewood (Author of The Unrequited Heart)
It would have been far to easy to take this prompt down a more predictable road, and actually provided an opportunity for a more fulfilling writing experience.Thank you for your warm words of encouragement. I'm glad you enjoyed this little ficlet as much as I enjoyed writing it. :)