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Snow Day
OpalJade209 Reviews | 6.51/10 (209 Ratings, 0 Likes, 203 Favorites )
A snowstorm forecast changes the dynamics between Professor Granger and Professor Snape forever.
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OpalJade
Member Since 2007 | 7 Stories | Favorited by 102 | 311 Reviews Written | 726 Review Responses
Hi all!
Currently, I am off work to take care of my son who is ill. I read, write and draw Harry Potter fanfiction to distract myself.
Thanks for taking a peek at my stories! :) Comments are much appreciated and eventhough I have moved on to a different fandom (for now) I come here often to read your kind words.
Reviews for Snow Day
Hee! Mr. "I don't care what you think" has chosen his killer clothes, hmm? And they were so involved that they didn't notice the charm hadn't activated yet. Brilliant!I loved the magical theory and adored Hermione's wandless magic - that left my mouth dry.
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
*Twirls you* Thank you so much for reading this, mon amie! I'm so glad you liked it! :D-that left my mouth dry. *Beams*
LOL! Severus thoughts about his first "encounter" with Miss Granger really seems to have thrown him for a loop.He’d been looking for new material to wank to, not new material to feel guilty about. The only image he wanted of his colleague was the one in which she was pinned underneath him, her face tilted upwards in ecstasy—Gods, the look on her face—as her climax radiated in waves from her cunt to his cock, sending him over the edge.Yeah, he had been looking for new wanking material, but I think he found so much more. I loved being inside his head when he tried to talk himself out to being attracted to "Miss Granger." This chapter was so sweet and full of hope for the future happiness of these two, that all I could do was smile when he decided that he needed someone to share his life with.Yes, that’s what he needed, someone who was intelligent and could hold her own in a conversation, someone who would accept some of his lesser points, someone who was independent and had curly brown hair and curious brown eyes.But you know what my favorite part was? It was when Severus asked her if she were “ready to discuss conditions, Professor Granger?” And then our very brave Gryffindor woman made it very clear to our Professor that it was him she wanted, and she told him by being the one who led him to the Quidditch broom cupboard." Hot dog! Love and kisses are going to fly! Thank you for this lovely and love filled story about our Severus and Hermione falling in love. Girlfriend, I am still smiling about her taking him to the broom cupboard.And you, dear OpalJade, totally ROCK!Hugs you, Beth
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
Oh, Beth, I can't tell you how much I appreciate your kind words. I'm so grateful for your support and your insightful reviews!!Yeah, he had been looking for new wanking material, but I think he found so much more. Yes, that's exactly what happened! :DI'm thrilled that you liked the fact that it was Hermione who led Snape to the broom cupboard in the end! :D And, of course, you read between the lines correctly, sparks are going to fly!!
I'm so, so, so happy that you liked this, Beth!!! You've made my day!
*hugs and kisses*
Sandie
Just... perfect :) xx
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
Thank you very much, Mrs Radcliffe!!! I'm so glad that you enjoyed this! :D Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Response from Mrs_D_Radcliffe (Reviewer)
Absolutely no problem at all (you know when you're younger and you think your names are really cool, cos that's your infatuation at the time...
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
was certainly a poor choice!) XDI really REALLY enjoyed it. Wish there was moreeee :P xx
I have to tell you, this chapter has brought me to tears. Just so poignant and moving, their uncertainty and anxiety about their feelings for each other. Perfect!!
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
Oh,Neelix, you have no idea how happy I am to hear you say this!!! Seriously, I really wanted to try to pull some heartstrings, but I wasn't quite sure I had managed to do that. I'm soooooooo glad that you found it poignant underneath it all!!!!Thank you, my friend! Thank you! *hugs*
BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!! OJ, This was fantastic!!!!!! SHE TICKLED HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HAHAHHAHAHAHA!!!!! And yes, greedy! Wonderful hotness!!!! And sweet too!!!!! Yay yay yay yay yaaayyy!!!!!!!!
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
You're too good to me, my friend!!!! Thank you so much for your generous review, the capitalization and the multiple exclamation points!!!! You make me want to start another story right away!I'm so glad you liked this, TT!!! Thanks for your support and your listening ear! :DMuch love!Sandie
This was worth the wait! I love how Severus just let her break all the rules, and the ending was perfect :)
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
Thank you for your kind words,
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
! I'm glad the 'rule breaking' worked for you and that you liked the ending!! :D
That was excellent.
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
*beams* Thanks so much,
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
! I'm thrilled that you thought so! :D
I love it! Excellent ending.
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Oh, thank you so much
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
! I'm very happy that you liked this! *grins*
Six mm of rain. I think they should plan for a long night! :)
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
Indeed! ;DThanks for reading and reviewing, Sunny!!! :D
Excelent! Fun, smutty and romantic. What more can I ask for? But I espesially loved that line towards the end: ... leaving a stunned Pomona in the middle of gossipy chatter about who had slept with whom last night .. Hehe :) Made me laugh.
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
*Beams* Thank you so much for your kind words,
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
! I'm so glad that you enjoyed reading 'Snow Day'. I'm happy the gossip line made you laugh!!:DThanks for reading and reviewing! :D
Such a fun read!! They are going to have many 'snow days' haha!!
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LOL! Yes, exactly!!!!Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, dear
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
! :D
Wonderful ending! I must admit to be a bit wary if I would get a ending I would like from this story, but you did the job well:-))
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
You have no idea how happy I am to hear you say this! I must admit that I made a few adjustments to my original outline! I'm thrilled that it worked for you,
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
!!Thanks so much for your lovely review! :D
He he, sill sods. Nice ending, thanks for sharing!
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
*smiles* Thanks so much,
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
!!! I'm super glad that you liked the ending! :D It was my pleasure to share!
This wait certainly qualified as the longest queue ever. Since your LJ post that the chapter is submitted, to the final posting today, I oscillated between patience (extremely short-lived), understanding (very difficult to keep up), insistence that TPP stopped sending alerts (always on the forefront of my mind), and annoyance that this is taking too *censored* long.But it's here!And it met all my expectation and far exceeded them in sheer amount of hope one can find in this story. Beautiful details. From mould, through Lily to colours, I loved the dynamics between them. You managed to convey amazing complexity through hot smut. It was fabulous, OJ, absolutely stunning.
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
Oh, Nata, if I would've known you were one of the readers who was anxiously waiting for this, I would've emailed it to you too! Just PM me next time! :DTPP is doing their best!*Blush* I'm beyond thrilled that this exceeded your expectations! I'm very touched that you enjoyed it so much and that the details worked for you! And you liked the smut too!!!!!!!!!!! LOL! Thank you so much for this generous review,
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
! It means a lot to me.(((hugs)))OJ
Response from nata (Reviewer)
There is no doubt that I love your writing. If I were any good in graphics, I'd be sporting an "I fangirl OpalJade" icon.
This entire story was great from start to finish! Your humor is hilarious, your romance is subtle but sweet, and your smut is yummy hot. I don't believe I've ever heard "Miss-Grangery" used as a descriptor and it made me laugh. I like that she is breaking all of the rules, and he can't bring himself to stop her. Especially the tickling... it had to happen. And the reason he wants to remove her bra is because it is the wrong color. I could go on forever about the things that amused me in this chapter.I really liked the end, where they decide that any abnormality in the weather is reason to celebrate. And they have come full circle by heading to the broom cupboard to discuss conditions. Yeah, I'm sure that is why they went in there ;)Thanks for such a fun read!
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
*Twirls you!* Thank you so much for your fabulous, insightful review! I'm thrilled (and touched!) that you noticed so many little details!:D The 'Miss-Grangery' thing made me giggle too. ;DI'm also very glad that you enjoyed the ending. I can't tell you how pleased I was that you cleverly summarized everything I was trying to do in the last scene. Thanks again for your support and your keen eye,
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!!! :D(((hugs)))OJ
I loved it!!! And thank you so much for the dedication.You are very talented and i will continue to look for more stories from you. Best of luck in the future. Erin
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
You're very welcomed, my dear!Thank you so much for your kind words and support. I really appreciate it! :DSandie :D
What a wonderful ending to the day! I so enjoyed this story! indescribably sexy!
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
*Blush* Thanks so much for your kind words, my friend! :D I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it! And I'm beyond flattered that you found it sexy! (Yeah, remember our conversation about writing sex scenes? It's... hard! Er, excuse the pun! LOL!)xoxomoi
That was so much FUN!! I'm so glad they had a wonderful time without need of the charm. And I love the way she approached him in the end with her rainy forecast. Great stuff!
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
Dear
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
, Thank you so much for your wonderful review! I'm so happy that you found this fic amusing! :DYes, they didn't need the charm to have a great time together! ;DThanks again for reading and reviewing!
AWWWWW I do like how you ended it! Every night a different sort of weather charm! I think they seduced each other. Well done my friend!
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(((Hugs you))) Thanks
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
!! Your stamp of approval means the world to me! :DxoOJ
Yea another update, with lots of smutty smut. Great ending.
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
Thanks, my dear! I'm glad you enjoyed the ending! I really appreciate you taking the time to write a review! :D
PERIWINKLE FTW!!!!!Any better way to scream "Do you know what I think of your blasted contract now?!" into his face? I think not.I'm afraid I'm still laughing about the sneakiness.The wandless magic part was a pretty brilliant move and I love how she's fed up with wasting time. Go, girl!I already told you at some point that your Snape is very much how I imagined Snape. I'll add Hermione to it now, too.A wonderful, yum-yum chapter. *big, idiotic grin*You know, I still wonder whether the charm is actually active. I have this fantasy about them sitting in the main hall the next day with all the other teachers complaining that it didn't work. *snort*I'm afraid I left the path of a proper review right from the beginning. I hope you will forgive me and except my everlasting love for this as my excuse.That said, UPDATE!!!!
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
Thanks so much for this fabulous review! I'm beyond (way beyond!) thrilled that you like my portrayal of the cast! :DYou've made my day... and probably my week (even thoug it's not over!) *twirls you gently*Interesting hypothesis!;DDanke Isalie, you're the best!xoxoOJ
Geez. Have I lived under a rock to miss the awesome updates?Oh wait - I have. However, I am quite happy I don't have to carry out my threat and Scotland is once again safe to be spared my presence.Lovely, teasing chapter. And as much as I love cliffhangers, I'm quite happy to be able to read on :D :D :DAnd I bet he's mentally slapping himself for already faltering. Muhahaha. Too late, he fell. Hard. At least I hope it's going to be hard.Um. *sneaks away to avoid punishment*
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
I'm grinning from ear to ear! Your energy is contagious!I'm so glad you're back! :D (and still reading!)Thanks for reading and reviewing! Oh,and no sneaking away necessary... you're right! *smirks*
Still stopping to check this story everyday waiting for more. Hope writing is going well.
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
(((hugs))) Next chapter is on its way to my beta! Thank you for your encouragement,
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.xoOJ
Very enjoyable read, can't wait for the next chapter! I like the way you have kept them 'true' to themselves; yes, they get it together, but still 'fighting' in their own corner. Snape is lost to Hermione, he just doesn't know it yet.Thanks!
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
Thank you so much hazeleyes!I love your concluding comment... he is quite lost to Hermione! :DThank you for your lovely review! :D
Aww... no cuddles! Disappointed... but maybe she can convince him the next time?
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
No cuddles... someone was trying to stick to the conditions! ;DBut, yeah, that needs to change! ;DThanks for taking the time to review, Neelix!