Welcome to Azkaban
Chapter 5 of 11
EchoLynnVoldemort is dead. As others around her comb through the bodies and help the wounded, Hermione Granger thinks of only one wizard. A wizard who gave everything and died without anything to show for it, but the lives of those who survived because of him. A wizard who deserved a second chance; something Hermione would go to great lengths to make that happen.
ReviewedHermione's knees shook as the two wizards guided her into the tower-like prison known as Azkaban. Even without the presence of Dementors, the place had a gloomy and forbidden feel about it. The door that Hermione was ushered roughly through was small; the dank hall ahead of her was narrow and empty of light except for a few sconces several feet above her that barely lit their way to a set of steep spiral stairs. She jumped as the small but heavy door clanged shut behind them and shivered when she heard magical locks snap into place. It's only for two months, she chanted over and over again in her head as they took the stairway up into the stony prison. Every few minutes or so they would pass by doors leading to different levels, but she never truly got to look through their bars to see a glimpse of what was waiting for her; this, of course, gave her the impression that she was being led inside from some kind of back entrance.
Her feet began to ache after ten minutes of climbing. Her breathe came in gasps as she tried her best to keep pace ahead of the two wizards, who would shove her if she faltered for even a second. Finally, when it felt as if her lungs would burst, they stopped at the top of the stairs and went through another heavy but small door. She had a brief glimpse of seven other such doors before she was shoved through the closest cell on the right. One of the wizards stood guard in front of the door as the other pushed her further into the cramped cell and shut the door behind him.
Hermione's bindings were magically released from her aching arms, and the moment she was free she backed away from the wizard, staring at him with frightened eyes.
"Miss Granger, this will be your cell for the duration of your sentence here at Azkaban. You will not be allowed to leave this room until two full months have passed; your time starts the moment I leave this room and the door is locked. Everything you need to survive will be provided. After I leave, food, water, and a blanket will appear. Whenever food appears at two appointed hours, seven A.M. and seven P.M. you will have fifteen minutes to eat before the food disappears. On your nightstand there is a tin cup for your water. If you are thirsty at any time, merely pick up the glass and it will fill as many times as you might need," he said. He took a breath and continued.
"Once a week a Mediwitch will visit and check you over to make sure you are as healthy as can be expected in such circumstances. If for any reason you become ill, a Mediwitch will be appointed to watch over you until you recover. There is one window in this room, though you will notice that it is too high for you to reach. The window is there for one purpose only: to allow you a minimum of light during the day and plenty of fresh air. As you know, this prison is located in the middle of the sea, and the weather can become rough now and then. When that happens you will temporarily be given an extra blanket. Last but not least, you are in a high-security cell. These cells are monitored for the prisoners' safety but are otherwise completely sound-proof, so you have no contact with anyone, especially the other prisoners," he said. He nodded once and abruptly left her.
As the magic locks clicked into place behind him, leaving her alone in the dark, Hermione sank down onto the floor and cried.
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Severus Snape settled down in the chair of his personal library with a glass of Firewhisky. It was only three hours since the two wizards had left Hogwarts to escort Hermione to Azkaban, but it felt like years. After they had left, Severus and Minerva had spoken at length about what Hermione could do during her coming time of incarceration at Hogwarts. Severus had immediately suggested that she become Minerva's personal assistant. But Minerva had had other ideas, much to his chagrin.
"Severus," she said, "I was thinking that given the circumstances she could assist you with the grading of the first through fourth year papers. You did demand that that duty be handed off to someone else to ease your headaches and allow you time to work on your own personal potions research...."
"Minerva, as convenient as that might sound to you, I would rather not. Miss Granger may have scraped a fair amount of O.W.L.s, but I believe it to be for the best all around if you assign her something else to do," he replied tightly.
"Severus, you made those demands on me, which I grant you is perfectly acceptable after everything you have done over the years for this school and for wizard-kind in general. But you did sign on for another five years as Potions master. Therefore you are under obligation to me, and I'm afraid that as Headmistress I must insist," she countered a bit smugly as he scowled at her.
"Why are you suddenly so set on her working with me, Minerva?" he asked stiffly.
"Because she saved your life, Severus. She has always admired you as a teacher, but you never gave her the credit she was due even though I realize you couldn't because of the war. But that is over. You no longer have to hold back your praise from worthy students and pupils just because they are not in Slytherin. She saved your life... the least you can do is act as a mentor for her," Minerva said, the chiding note in her words clear.
Severus was quiet for several moments, ignoring Minerva as she stared and waited for what she knew he wanted to ask. Finally he got up and headed for the door, only to turn and finally address the matter of the elephant in the room. "Why do you think she did it?" he asked quietly, his voice failing to hide his desperate curiosity and confusion.
"I honestly don't know why, Severus. All I know is that Hermione Granger is a bright young witch who shows an amazing amount of respect for you. Beyond that, I'm left to guess just as you are, unless she decides to confide in one of us... and I'm betting that if she worked with you on school work nearly every day for a whole year, that opportunity just might come up," she said with a slight smile.
Severus scowled again and left her office to drown his sorrows in hopes of forgetting it all. But here he was, several glasses gone, and still his thoughts went to a young witch who was now presumably situated in a dank cell in Azkaban.
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Harry and Ron were busily eating breakfast when they heard a whoosh from the fireplace and Minerva McGonagall being greeted by Mrs. Weasley. They both left the table and rushed into the living room in hopes of seeing their best friend. "Is she here with you?" Ron asked, looking around.
"No, I'm afraid not. That's why I've come over this morning. Hermione is gone for a while and she wanted me to express her regret for not being able to say goodbye before she left," Minerva said, only to be interrupted by their various exclamations. "Hold on and I'll tell you," she scolded as she took a seat and waited for the three of them to do the same.
"Where is Hermione? Is something wrong?" Molly asked in her motherly way.
"Hermione wouldn't just up and leave us like that, Professor," Ron commented as he grudgingly took a seat.
"Did she at least write us a letter or something?" Harry asked as he too sat down.
Minerva lifted her hand to forestall the continued onslaught of questions. "Nothing... is wrong. Hermione was visited by someone from the Ministry and offered a rather last minute position as an apprentice. Due to the secrecy of the job itself, she had to leave to start right away and was not permitted to contact you. She is now apprenticed to someone in the Department of Mysteries, but that is all I know about it. She promised that as soon as she could manage, she would write you all, though I doubt she will ever be able to share exactly what she is studying. The only thing that is widely known about that area of the Ministry is that they are quite regimented in their non-disclosure agreements," she said, hoping Merlin would step in and make them believe this tale she was spinning.
"The Department of Mysteries? That's quite an honor, isn't it? Only highly qualified witches and wizards are chosen for that kind of work," Molly said, her face beaming with pride.
"Hermione an Unspeakable? I don't think it would suit her. The thing she loves most in the world is to share whatever she learns with anyone who will listen to her. I bet it won't last," Ron said, a bit of a pout betraying his feelings.
"Wow. I can see why she would be chosen, but I'm with Ron. I don't think it will last. She'd miss us too much!" Harry said, saddened but at the same time excited for her.
Minerva visited with them for a few more minutes and finally escaped, claiming an appointment she couldn't miss. Despite the shock and confusion she left behind her, she thought her lie had gone over quite well.
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Lightning flashed through the small window far above Hermione's head, waking her from an exhausted sleep. When it flashed again she looked around and realized that she was still sitting on the floor of her cell. Trying to move was a bit painful, but slowly she stood up and stretched her aching limbs. Her throat was parched, and she remembered the tin cup on the plain wooden table next to the cot-like bed. Picking it up, she nearly dropped it as the cup filled with water. She took a tentative sip and was reminded of the tap water one would get at a public park in London.
Looking around, she wondered what time it was and whether she had missed dinner. She set the cup down, and suddenly her whole body froze and she found herself unable to move. Seconds later she heard the door behind her open and close; someone had entered. Slowly the paralysis lifted; she felt her head give way as her body was lifted an inch off the floor, and she turned her head awkwardly to face the person who had entered the room. The witch who stood there lowered Hermione back down to the floor and brightened the light that was coming from the tip of her wand, giving Hermione a good look at her visitor.
"I am Lola. I will be your Mediwitch during your time here. The Petrificus spell is standard for my safety and yours. I will remove it as soon as I leave," Lola said as she approached Hermione and raised her wand in a series of movements Hermione didn't recognize. "All right then, all done. You are healthy. I must warn you that unless you do some sort of exercise during the day, you may become quite weak while you are locked in your cell. I suggest jumping jacks, crunches, even running in place. I'll see you next week oh, and your dinner will pop in any minute now. Remember, you have only fifteen minutes to eat before the food is taken away. Good evening," she said, turning to leave just as abruptly as she had appeared.
"Wait, Miss... Lola," Hermione said hurriedly. "Can you tell me if there's some way to tell the time in here? I just don't know how else I'll know when it's meal time, and if I'm sleeping...I don't want to starve while I'm here," Hermione said, embarrassed.
"When the food appears, a sound like a bell will alert you in case you are sleeping," Lola answered. Then she departed, leaving the room in darkness once again.
After the locks clicked back into place the rest of Hermione's body unfroze and she nearly fell. As she made her way over to the cot and sat down, making out the interior of the room as best she could in the brief flashes of lightning, she heard a bell just as she'd been told and a plate with some gruel-like substance on it appeared on the table. Hermione sniffed at it gingerly and sent a prayer to Merlin that she would live through the next two months without withering away. She also wondered how much worse it would have been before the war, when Dementors still guarded Azkaban.
A/N: Another chapter for you! Just so you know, I will be participating in NaNoWriMo this year, but I still plan to make time for FanFic writing. Please read and review! *HUGS*
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oho! this should help! great update and mucho smoochies!
Response from EchoLynn (Author of The Antidote)
Thanks ;) *HUGS*
ooh, I wonder what Hermione is thinking. I can't wait to read more.
Response from EchoLynn (Author of The Antidote)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing ;)
Not quite getting where you're going with the levicorpus tie in. Hoping for enlightenment as she goes through his journals and memories.
Response from EchoLynn (Author of The Antidote)
I kind of see it as he is clueless as to how to defend himself from Hermione... Since part of him realizes they have much in common, he resorted to his youth. He could'nt kill her... so he tried to shut her up and push her away... lol.
Somebody's got a crush, somebody's got a crush!
Response from EchoLynn (Author of The Antidote)
Lol... Thank you for reading and reviewing ;)
She's onto something! :)
Response from EchoLynn (Author of The Antidote)
Lol... Thanks for reading ;)
I love Snarky in this chapter! She's kind of a mix of McGonagall, a mother and house elf to Severus.Looking forward to seeing what happens next!
Response from EchoLynn (Author of The Antidote)
Thank you so much for reading ;)
I think Snarky likes her. *grin* And why would she want memories of Snape's youth? ^_^
Response from EchoLynn (Author of The Antidote)
Well... Stay tuned lol. *HUGS*
She definitely has Snarky on her side, doesn't she?
Response from EchoLynn (Author of The Antidote)
Yes, she does. Thank you for reading ;)
That's odd. I wonder where they're going? I have to admit, I thought Minerva hit the nail on the head when it comes to Severus' attitude. Time to relax!
Response from EchoLynn (Author of The Antidote)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you like it ;)
Interesting observations. I like how Minerva helps make him see sense through it
Response from EchoLynn (Author of The Antidote)
Thanks for reading ;)
Going for walkies, hmmm? *grin* I love how Snarky got her name. lol! Can't wait for the next chapter. Don't wait so long to post it this time, okay? ^_^
Response from EchoLynn (Author of The Antidote)
Lol, you won't have to wait long at all for chapter 9... its waiting to be validated. ;) Chapter ten is iffy... Nano is coming up soon ya know! If the plot bunnies are there, then there may be an update before Nano ;)
Response from MsTree (Reviewer)
Yeah, I know. Not sure if I'll be able to finish this year. My mother wants to go to CA for Thanksgiving. That's a three day drive. *pout* I'm going to try, though. Already started outlining an original story. Good luck to you for NaNo. ^_^
Glad you are back. It is a harsh punishment, good she has nice quarters and that Snape will take her out (unwillingly)- looking forward to following this story
Response from EchoLynn (Author of The Antidote)
Lol. Thank you so much. The next chapter is already waiting to be validated ;) *HUGS*
He's definitely snarky. I do think he came to some conclusions from his talk with Min.
Response from EchoLynn (Author of The Antidote)
Yep. And he is'nt happy with them.
Response from debjunk (Reviewer)
bwah hah hah. That's great!
A very interesting idea - I am looking forward to this a lot!
Response from EchoLynn (Author of The Antidote)
Thank you. Two chapters are waiting to be validated ;) *HUGS*
I am really liking your story so far. Can't wait for more!
Response from EchoLynn (Author of The Antidote)
Thank you! Updates are on the way ;) *HUGS*
I enjoyed it very much, thoought I think Ive forgotten why she was sent to Azkaban. I may have to go abck to read the beginning. Very good chapetr I look forward to more.
Response from EchoLynn (Author of The Antidote)
Thank you so much ;) *HUGS*
Response from EchoLynn (Author of The Antidote)
Thank you so much ;) *HUGS*
Snarky... love that name for a house=elf
Response from EchoLynn (Author of The Antidote)
Lol. I thought it fit lol. *HUGS*
I LIKE THE NAME SNARKY ,GLAD HERMIONE FEELING BETTER ,SNAPE BETTER GET IT RIGHT!
Response from EchoLynn (Author of The Antidote)
Thank you so much for reading ;)
Hermione has some healing to do, doesn't she? It is unconscionable that she was treated the way she was in Azkaban, but apparently the Ministry and the Unspeakables don't much care for the finer points of due diligence. At least she's back at Hogwarts and had a nice suite of rooms to call home for the next year. I'm glad that Severus left her with some work that he had already graded so that she could not only become familiar with his methods, but he knew it would drive her stir crazy to have nothing at all to do for two weeks. Minerva was very thoughtful to have arranged for Severus to take her for walks outside the castle, too. I realize that Severus may not be looking forward to them, but I can't help but think that these walks and their time together working in the potions lab will provide a good time to get to know each other better.The clear star in this chapter is Snarky! I love her way of addressing Hermione. She leaves no doubt that she is there to take care of Hermione, but she serves the Headmistress and will follow Minerva's instructions to the letter.These next months will be interesting as Hermione and Severus come to terms with themselves and each other.thanks you for this great update!Beth
Response from EchoLynn (Author of The Antidote)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! *HUGS*
wow, i am so intrigued how Severus is going to get a second chance. Have to go to work now so i have no doubts i will be thinking of the story..lol
Response from EchoLynn (Author of The Antidote)
Lol, thank you so much for reading ;)
well, my interest is peaked, cant imagine where this is going, especially as she let him get buried..lol, so i ruled out resurecting his body, so on to the next chapter tomorrow:)
Response from EchoLynn (Author of The Antidote)
Lol, thank you so much ;)
Poor Sev has all the responsibility. Hopefully he will learn to enjoy it soon. :)
Response from EchoLynn (Author of The Antidote)
Lol... yeah. Thanks for reading ;)
Perfect update, well worth the wait. Snarky, what a great name for a house elf. Can't wait to see how the relationship between Hermione and Severus will progress? I think it's a good sign that he can't stop thinking about her.
Response from EchoLynn (Author of The Antidote)
THank you so much ;)
I thought I had started this story and added it to my Favorites list, but apparently I had only read the first chapter and forgot to put it on the list. So here goes: It's a good story with an excellent plotline; the Unspeakables are gits; Azkaban is the pits; and Snarky is priceless. Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter. ^_^
Response from EchoLynn (Author of The Antidote)
Lol. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing ;) *HUGS*