ah, that was sweet - not in a saccharin way, but as in a nice way to end.  :)

i liked the scene at the lovegoods', especially the image of mr. lovegood bopping in time to the printing press.  :)

hee hee. i liked that his face hurt from smiling.  nice addition to his good deeds.  :D

nice chapter.  i have to agree, friendly snape can be quite alarming at times!  :D

Hey, WM! This chapter was perfect!  Just want this fic needed as an ending.  Loved it!  Thanks for putting a pretty bow on this journey!  Much Love ~ Brena

An entertaining story with a good ending.  Well done!

I am looking forward to Hermione and Snape's date in the next chapter. Good chapter here.

Hey Javoher!  Great job with this chapter!  Sorry I'm so far behind!  Loved the ending!  Severus at a Muggle wedding!  LOL!  Much Love ~ Brena

i love it! :)

After asking you to rewrite this twice, I can't tell you how happy I am with it, though I miss the beautiful descriptions of the outfits they wore to the wedding.  I love what somoene said about it being 'steampunk.'  Thanks for bringing that aspect to this story; I think we need more of that clever kind of writing.

Thanks for the clever way of bringing more characters (and a date) into the mix of this story.  This chapter could have been a whole story in its own right.

Very cleverly written chapter with lots of memorable phrasing and ideas.  You really helped to give us direction with this chapter.  Thanks so much!

Awwww! What a perfect ending! They've each devoted so much time to helping others. It just seems so right that they should be each other's reward. I see a bright shiny future for our favorite couple. So long as Hermione can keep her flirtatious aunts under control! I can't blame them for trying, though.

Wow, yes, I really like this ending. I especially liked your use of dialogue to show the change in their wants.  A nice story and I'm glad that he's going to have his own business.

Wow, I can't believe I never thanked you here for giving us such a good start.  You brought up so many things for us.

*Sigh*You did an amazing job with that final chapter, WriterMerrin.I had to laugh about Hermione's aunts flirting with Severus, and felt as uncomfortable as Hermione when she talked about reasons for him to help her move.And in the end a content sigh escaped me.

A lovely ending to a lovely story. Well done to the entire team.

Such a tender, beautiful ending to a wonderfully original, creative tale! Bravo, team Mars!!!(Btw, this line – "‘First it’s “cool” and then “like”? Your vocabulary used to be more refined.’" – had me rolling in my chair from laughter.)

Aaw, poor Severus! I imagine it can definitely be more than a tad overwhelming for him!

"‘I had tea with Neville Longbottom today and sent him into shock. I view it as a medicinal necessity.’"  *cackle*"‘No, Mr. Snape, I just mentioned it in a moment of gloating.’" ROFLMAO!!! Incredibly witty, that Granger girl!

Oh, your Neville is so adorable!!

I love the idea of Teddy copying everyone's appearance – and it was truly brilliant the concept of Andromeda needing assistance so that she could be sure she brought the correct child home, lol! I do have a question, though – was it a Muggle park, or Wizarding one? I just ask because I wonder how Andromeda managed to hide Teddy's perpetual transformations in the midst of Muggles, if it were a Muggle park... and if it were a Wizarding one, did other parents feel slightly annoyed at Teddy's presence, assuming that they, like Andromeda, were afraid of taking the wrong kid home?

Hilarious solution to ridding the house of that ancient hag!

Ooo, what an original idea! I honestly never considered Snape volunteering before – rabid plot bunnies are multiplying by the second!

Nice ending, forcing them both to say what they've wanted to for some time.