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Saturday Night Drabbles Neighbors
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Neighbors

1: oneshot

Neighbors

debjunk

18 Reviews   |   18 Ratings, 0 Likes, 3 Favorites )

Drabble/100-Word Saturday Night Drabbles 1,086 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Severus encounters his new neighbor, who just happens to be a celebrity.

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I am a classically trained singer with three children. I love Star Trek and have watched probably every episode of every series. Favorite HP charaters are Snape and McGonagall. (not as a couple.)

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10/10

mick42

Well done, you caught Severus perfectly. 

Response from debjunk (Author of Neighbors)

LOL thank you!

0/10

kimjo2

i agree, she is insufferable! (hy not her).  cute, my deb.  mucho smoochies forever

Response from debjunk (Author of Neighbors)

Thanks, kimjo!

0/10

astopperindeath

omg this was amazing!

Response from debjunk (Author of Neighbors)

LOL, thank you!

9/10

poopotter

Saucy...is the one word that comes to mind describing Hermione after reading this story......nice change for her!....thanx for this perspective...good story!...

Response from debjunk (Author of Neighbors)

I love that word!  Thank you so much. 

10/10

Nessa

I love Keeping Up Appearances! To make it work with my favourite couple is priceless!

Response from debjunk (Author of Neighbors)

LOL, quite the twist, huh?

10/10

countrymouse

Adorable--absolutely adorable!

Response from debjunk (Author of Neighbors)

Thank you!

10/10

sunny33

LOL. Well, she's better than the original Hyacinth! :)

Response from debjunk (Author of Neighbors)

Yeah. The new, improved witches version is better, huh? Thanks, sunny!

0/10

Clairvoyant

Severus, take note.  When Hermione is bored, mischief is at hand.  Cute story about the ever present annoying neighbor.

Response from debjunk (Author of Neighbors)

Thanks!

0/10

Elizabeth

What about Richard? And

Response from debjunk (Author of Neighbors)

is always over for tea too!Man, I love that show. It's the best. Some of the greatest laughing fits in my life have come from that woman.

Response from debjunk (Author of Neighbors)

There's just something about British sitcoms.  I'm actually more familiar with Are You Being Served than this one, but, well, I'm not gonna say anything more.  Thanks!

10/10

braye27

When I read "tall and leggy" and Hyacinth Bucket in the same paragraph, I knew you were up to something.  Hee hee.You've captured the esssence of Hyacinth Bucket, perfectly!  "That's Boo-kay"  I kept waiting for Onslo to pop his head in the door and say "Awwww, nice," followed by "Our Rose" and Daddy in his WWI helment and trench coat.I can see how pretending to be the indomitable Mrs. Boo-kay would give a bit of counter-punch to Hermione's boring Ministry job.  But before all is said and done, I think Severus will become much more familiar with "our Hermione."  "Our Hyacinth" will see to that!Well done!Beth

Response from debjunk (Author of Neighbors)

Yes, well, this is the wizarding version, I guess.  :)  Thanks, Beth.  I appreciate your kind words.

10/10

blue artemis

Hee.

Response from debjunk (Author of Neighbors)

Thanks for the giggle. 

0/10

moiramountain

Considering that "Hyacinth" is so fond of her "candlelight suppers" Severus is in for quite a time.  You really had me going there for a minute - I could not imagine how Mrr. Bucket could EVER be referred to as "leggy".... so I knew you were up to no good !! 

Response from debjunk (Author of Neighbors)

That I was!  she's a wizarding Boo-kay, I suppose.  :)

10/10

BrenaMarie

I have never heard of this "Keeping Up Appearances" show, but this was very cute!  Much Love  ~ Brena

Response from debjunk (Author of Neighbors)

Thanks, hon.  This is actually nothing like the show.

0/10

sara lady dalian

That was very funny!  Is this Hyacinth real?  It seems as if I've heard of this show before, but I can't really remember.  Thanks deb!

Response from debjunk (Author of Neighbors)

It's a British sitcom.  She's the main character and actually is middle-aged and looks nothing like this. This is the Wizarding world's version, I guess.

0/10

snapify52

Oh my. Oh my god.  I don't know what I expected, but that definitely wasn't it! Funny!

Response from debjunk (Author of Neighbors)

Yeah, tell me about it!  Thanks!

10/10

snitchette

Oh I love it. Severus in black bathing suit in a big tub. The dream turned real, although I'd prefer him without the bathing suit...

Response from debjunk (Author of Neighbors)

Who wouldn't?  Well, you can continue the story in your mind and disrobe him however you'd like!

10/10

lyn_f

*snrts*Should have figured it wasn't the frumpy old Mrs. Boo-kay. :) I loved how it was Hermione in disguise!Thanks for the laughs! :D

Response from debjunk (Author of Neighbors)

This is the new and improved witches version of Mrs. Boo-kay. 

10/10

beaweasley2

LOL Hermione in disguise! Quite clever. You pegged Severus and his reactions so well.

Response from debjunk (Author of Neighbors)

LOL, thanks!

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