New Chapter for How Ron Lost Hermione
How Ron Lost Hermione
silverdoe31 Reviews | 31 Ratings, 0 Likes, 5 Favorites )
Variety Challenge first runner up. Ron does not realize how wonderful the woman he is engaged to really is. His thoughtlessness and temper cause him to lose her.
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I am just a fan who likes to tell stories.I don't pretend to be an author and I may not even be very good at it, but I enjoy it. It gives me a break from real life.
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Totally awesome
wow! that was so beautifully done! thanks and mucho smoochies
Very nice. I really enjoyed the photo manipulations.
Wow. That's awesome. The photos went along so well with your story. The combination of the text and the photos was amazing; they all fit so well.
Yipes! That song is so perfect for Ron. Though the scenes linger a little too long in the last third of the song (but the kiss was too short!), the timing was spot on in the first two thirds. I love how you used a lot of great pictures of them in Muggle clothes and integrated them. I almost cracked up every time he said 'stupid boy' and you just showed Ron looking dumb.
Response from silverdoe (Author of How Ron Lost Hermione)
hmm, the scenes were all the same length. I am not sure why the seemed lon in the end. The only one that was longer was for the letter. I felt it went by to fast to read so I let it go for 15 seconds instead of 5. That song was made for Ron. :) Thanks for reviewing.
Response from WriterMerrin (Reviewer)
Hmm, I think the scenes seem longer in the instrumental parts.
I absolutely love it and the music is wonderful. *bows low*
Response from silverdoe (Author of How Ron Lost Hermione)
Thanks :)
Omg. That was awesome! I loved the letter! Much Love ~ Brena
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Thank you.
I liked this very much. Good work.
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AHhhhh this was so great! Better than I expected. I think I've seen all the ss/hg videos on youtube, and while I like almost all of them, it's so refreshing to read a story within the images. The music was great too, also different for a sshg video. Excellent work!
Response from silverdoe (Author of How Ron Lost Hermione)
I think it worked well because the song told part of the story. It was a fun expirement. I am glad you liked it. Thanks.
Well done! Excellent use of photos to illustrate your story line and the choice of song is perfect. Of course, as an SSHG fan, I totally approve of your happy ending!
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Well done. What a great piece.
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Very good! First video story I've watched that I liked.Very good use of pictures.Thank you for sharing it with us.
Response from silverdoe (Author of How Ron Lost Hermione)
Thanks. I am glad you like it. It was the first time I ever tried to do a video.
That was great! I have never heard the song before and Hermione belongs with Snape, of course. I always thought a Ron/Hermione pairing was insane.
Response from silverdoe (Author of How Ron Lost Hermione)
Thanks. Ron and Hermione just doesn't work for me either.
Wow, this is really an amazing job. Your song, the writing insets and the pictures really do an incredible job of saying and showing a full story. I'd give you more, but the star scale stops at 5.
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Thank you.
Wow, That was realy great. I loved the mix of text and pictures. Wonderful!
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I loved it!It is incredible how perfectly you match up the pictures with the text and the song.I watched it 4 times just to catch everything... and because it was great to watch.Well done!Thanks for sharing. Donna
Response from silverdoe (Author of How Ron Lost Hermione)
Thank you. :)
*bravo*The longer I reflect over Ron's behaviour in HBP and DH, the more I think he probably could behave the way you pictured it in your vid.Good work!
Response from silverdoe (Author of How Ron Lost Hermione)
Thanks. I think Ron would let the fame go to his head.
Excellent video and storyline, Mystery Creator! I loved it!!! :D
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Very cool, I enjoyed this very much. Well done!
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Wow! I was surprised to find this was a video instead of a storylike I was expecting. I've got to tell you how impressed I am of all the work that had to have gone into making this. It's wonderful!I think the way you showed what happened between Ron and Hermione is about how I would see things going. And of course, I was totally squeee-ing when Severus came to her rescue.Well done!BethBeth
Response from silverdoe (Author of How Ron Lost Hermione)
Thank you. I don't usually do videos, but this just seemed right.
I think your video is a realistic illustration of how things would have really gone for Ron and Hermione... Ron would have eaten up all the hero-worship and adulation with a spoon. Not too hard to see a puffed-up Ron enjoying his fan-groupies' attentions while still expecting Hermione to ditch her dreams in favor of being the perfect golden trophy wife.Great video... well done!
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Very good! I wasn't expecting a video when I clicked on the story. I really enjoyed it. Even my son read it.
Response from silverdoe (Author of How Ron Lost Hermione)
Awww. Thank you.
That was really well done. Thanks for sharing it.
Response from silverdoe (Author of How Ron Lost Hermione)
You're welcome & thanks for reviewing.