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A Long Vernal Season

1: Prologue: Return

2: Chapter One: Hermione’s News

3: Chapter Two: An Unusual Invitation

4: Chapter Three: St. Giles Clinic for Magical Maladies

5: Chapter Four: Through the Looking-Glass

6: Chapter Five: Alternative Treatment

7: Chapter Six: Race Cars Go “Vroom”

8: Chapter Seven: Waxing

9: Chapter Eight: Business as Usual

10: Chapter Nine: A Delicate Phase

11: Chapter Ten: Jam Tarts

12: Chapter Eleven: Don’t Frighten the Firsties

13: Chapter Twelve: The Stages of Brewing

14: Chapter Thirteen: Breakfire

15: Chapter Fourteen: Of Ice Cream, Kittens, and Jet Planes

16: Chapter Fifteen: Bacon Butties and Baked Beans

17: Chapter Sixteen: A Sympathetic New Start

18: Chapter Seventeen: An Ambush for Minerva

19: Chapter Eighteen: A New Man

20: Chapter Nineteen: Of Scotch, Choices, and Ambiguity

21: Chapter Twenty: A Ghostly Halloween

22: Chapter Twenty-One: Fancy Dress

23: Chapter Twenty-Two: Not Onerous or Dreary

24: Chapter Twenty-Three: Collegiality

25: Chapter Twenty-Four: Dawn Light Reflected

26: Chapter Twenty-Five: Preoccupation

27: Chapter Twenty-Six: Laid to Rest

28: Chapter Twenty-Seven: ’Twas the Night Before the Night Before Christmas

29: Chapter Twenty-Eight: A Happy Birthday?

30: Chapter Twenty-Nine: A Tear Shed

31: Chapter Thirty: A Tour of the Past

32: Chapter Thirty-One: A Date with Hermione

33: Chapter Thirty-Two: Disquiet

34: Chapter Thirty-Three: At Spinner’s End

35: Chapter Thirty-Four: Uncertainty

36: Chapter Thirty-Five: Friendship

37: Chapter Thirty-Six: A Darkly Smouldering Magnetism

38: Chapter Thirty-Seven: An Exercise in Harmless Flirting

39: Chapter Thirty-Eight: Playing with Fire

40: Chapter Thirty-Nine: The Morning After

41: Chapter Forty: A Matter of Timing

42: Chapter Forty-One: A Fast Learner

43: Chapter Forty-Two: Confessions

44: Chapter Forty-Three: Distractions

45: Chapter Forty-Four: No Unmixed Pleasures

46: Chapter Forty-Five: An Esoteric Spell

47: Chapter Forty-Six: A Complicated Life

48: Chapter Forty-Seven: Exotic Concoctions

49: Chapter Forty-Eight: A Wager with the Headmistress

50: Chapter Forty-Nine: Normal Life

51: Chapter Fifty: A New Project

52: Chapter Fifty-One: Just a Fling?

53: Chapter Fifty-Two: Technique

54: Chapter Fifty-Three: Dinner at Delancie’s

55: Chapter Fifty-Four: Dangerous Consequences

56: Chapter Fifty-Five: Not Falling in Love

57: Chapter Fifty-Six: Out-of-Sorts

58: Chapter Fifty-Seven: Making it Through the Week

59: Chapter Fifty-Eight: The Barghest’s Howl

60: Chapter Fifty-Nine: Skimming the Lake

61: Chapter Sixty: Perfect Timing

62: Chapter Sixty-One: Late Night Advice

63: Chapter Sixty-Two: For Old Times’ Sake

64: Chapter Sixty-Three: A Little White Lie

65: Chapter Sixty-Four: The Goblin’s Knee

66: Chapter Sixty-Five: Test Flight

67: Chapter Sixty-Six: Broomstick Rodeo

68: Chapter Sixty-Seven: Some Muggle Business

69: Chapter Sixty-Eight: Bad Timing

70: Chapter Sixty-Nine: Moulting

71: Chapter Seventy: To Persist and Pursue

72: Chapter Seventy-One: Descent into Hades

73: Chapter Seventy-Two: Home

74: Chapter Seventy-Three: Renovation

75: Chapter Seventy-Four: Glimpse the Snape Family Past

76: Chapter Seventy-Five: A Wizard Not to be Crossed

77: Chapter Seventy-Six: Present Danger

78: Chapter Seventy-Seven: Paying Court

79: Chapter Seventy-Eight: Sifting the Past

80: Chapter Seventy-Nine: Atmosphere

81: Chapter Eighty: Finding Flowers and Family

82: Chapter Eighty-One: Lighting

83: Chapter Eighty-Two: An End to a Perfect Evening

84: Chapter Eighty-Three: Attack in a Blur

85: Chapter Eighty-Four: Suspicion

86: Chapter Eighty-Five: Jumping at Shadows

87: Chapter Eighty-Six: Remedying Magical Misfortune

88: Chapter Eighty-Seven: Brewing with the Master

89: Chapter Eighty-Eight: Back to Brewing

90: Chapter Eighty-Nine: A Cryptic Missive

91: Chapter Ninety: A Happy Decision

92: Chapter Ninety-One: A Proposal

93: Chapter Ninety-Two: Promising Start to a Holiday

94: Chapter Ninety-Three: Whetting the Appetite

95: Chapter Ninety-Four: The Rewards of Patience

96: Chapter Ninety-Five: Afternoon Games

97: Chapter Ninety-Six: An Unexpected Encounter

98: Chapter Ninety-Seven: Another Splash of Whiskey

99: Chapter Ninety-Eight: Confidences and Promises

100: Chapter Ninety-Nine: Memory Lane

101: Chapter One Hundred: Some Truth

102: Chapter One-Hundred One: Simply Severus

103: Chapter One-Hundred Two: Meeting Max

104: Chapter One Hundred-Three: Of Lilacs, of Love, and of Danger

105: Chapter One Hundred-Four: Party Games

106: Chapter One Hundred-Five: An Assignation

107: Chapter One Hundred-Six: Refuge

108: Chapter One Hundred-Seven: Reparation

109: Chapter One Hundred-Eight: The Greatest Slytherin

110: Chapter One Hundred-Nine: Vita Furtiva

111: Chapter One Hundred-Ten: Journey to Dun Torc

112: Chapter One Hundred-Eleven: An Accident Foretold

113: Chapter One Hundred-Twelve: Association

114: Chapter One Hundred-Thirteen: The Past Follows

115: Chapter One Hundred-Fourteen: Arithmantic Charms

116: Chapter One Hundred-Fifteen: Dead … or Alive?

117: Chapter One Hundred-Sixteen: The Tyree Estate

118: Chapter One Hundred-Seventeen: From the Primrose Cottage to the Shell Folly

A Long Vernal Season

MMADfan

1,058 Reviews   |   1,058 Ratings, 0 Likes, 88 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Drama Romance Alternate Universe Hogwarts Castle 652,726 Words 136 Chapters WIP
Albus Dumbledore Filius Flitwick Hermione Granger Minerva McGonagall Poppy Pomfrey Severus Snape Lucius Malfoy Pomona Sprout Original Character Other Canon Witch/Wizard Narcissa Malfoy Rubeus Hagrid Hogwarts Eileen (Prince) Snape Tobias Snape Draco Malfoy Professor Vector The Fat Friar Madam Rosmerta Alastor (Mad-Eye) Moody Firenze (Centaur) Professor Sinistra Name Withheld (surprise) Ginevra Weasley Arthur Weasley Wilhelmina Grubbly-Plank Harry Potter Fawkes Bellatrix Lestrange Peter Pettigrew Nymphadora Tonks Remus Lupin Sorting Hat

Severus Snape had believed that, for him, life after the Dark Lord was an impossibility, that his death was not merely justice, but necessity. He has survived, though, and now he must learn to live his new, unexpected life, and to find something beyond the narrow existence to which he was once bound. A Snape-centric post-war fic.

A Death’s Dominion sequel, but may stand alone. Not DH-compliant. DH-disregarded. Rated M for overall content. Much of it is "T," but the ratings rise to MA later for a reason, hence the switch to an M-rating for the earlier chapters. Watch the individual chapter summaries and author’s notes for ratings, warnings, and the characters appearing in that chapter.


Part One finds Severus dealing with some very immediate and dangerous consequences of his final confrontation with the Dark Lord more than three months before.

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Chapters (118)

Chapter 1: Prologue: Return

Chapter 2: Chapter One: Hermione’s News

Chapter 3: Chapter Two: An Unusual Invitation

Chapter 4: Chapter Three: St. Giles Clinic for Magical Maladies

Chapter 5: Chapter Four: Through the Looking-Glass

Chapter 6: Chapter Five: Alternative Treatment

Chapter 7: Chapter Six: Race Cars Go “Vroom”

Chapter 8: Chapter Seven: Waxing

Chapter 9: Chapter Eight: Business as Usual

Chapter 10: Chapter Nine: A Delicate Phase

Chapter 11: Chapter Ten: Jam Tarts

Chapter 12: Chapter Eleven: Don’t Frighten the Firsties

Chapter 13: Chapter Twelve: The Stages of Brewing

Chapter 14: Chapter Thirteen: Breakfire

Chapter 15: Chapter Fourteen: Of Ice Cream, Kittens, and Jet Planes

Chapter 16: Chapter Fifteen: Bacon Butties and Baked Beans

Chapter 17: Chapter Sixteen: A Sympathetic New Start

Chapter 18: Chapter Seventeen: An Ambush for Minerva

Chapter 19: Chapter Eighteen: A New Man

Chapter 20: Chapter Nineteen: Of Scotch, Choices, and Ambiguity

Chapter 21: Chapter Twenty: A Ghostly Halloween

Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty-One: Fancy Dress

Chapter 23: Chapter Twenty-Two: Not Onerous or Dreary

Chapter 24: Chapter Twenty-Three: Collegiality

Chapter 25: Chapter Twenty-Four: Dawn Light Reflected

Chapter 26: Chapter Twenty-Five: Preoccupation

Chapter 27: Chapter Twenty-Six: Laid to Rest

Chapter 28: Chapter Twenty-Seven: ’Twas the Night Before the Night Before Christmas

Chapter 29: Chapter Twenty-Eight: A Happy Birthday?

Chapter 30: Chapter Twenty-Nine: A Tear Shed

Chapter 31: Chapter Thirty: A Tour of the Past

Chapter 32: Chapter Thirty-One: A Date with Hermione

Chapter 33: Chapter Thirty-Two: Disquiet

Chapter 34: Chapter Thirty-Three: At Spinner’s End

Chapter 35: Chapter Thirty-Four: Uncertainty

Chapter 36: Chapter Thirty-Five: Friendship

Chapter 37: Chapter Thirty-Six: A Darkly Smouldering Magnetism

Chapter 38: Chapter Thirty-Seven: An Exercise in Harmless Flirting

Chapter 39: Chapter Thirty-Eight: Playing with Fire

Chapter 40: Chapter Thirty-Nine: The Morning After

Chapter 41: Chapter Forty: A Matter of Timing

Chapter 42: Chapter Forty-One: A Fast Learner

Chapter 43: Chapter Forty-Two: Confessions

Chapter 44: Chapter Forty-Three: Distractions

Chapter 45: Chapter Forty-Four: No Unmixed Pleasures

Chapter 46: Chapter Forty-Five: An Esoteric Spell

Chapter 47: Chapter Forty-Six: A Complicated Life

Chapter 48: Chapter Forty-Seven: Exotic Concoctions

Chapter 49: Chapter Forty-Eight: A Wager with the Headmistress

Chapter 50: Chapter Forty-Nine: Normal Life

Chapter 51: Chapter Fifty: A New Project

Chapter 52: Chapter Fifty-One: Just a Fling?

Chapter 53: Chapter Fifty-Two: Technique

Chapter 54: Chapter Fifty-Three: Dinner at Delancie’s

Chapter 55: Chapter Fifty-Four: Dangerous Consequences

Chapter 56: Chapter Fifty-Five: Not Falling in Love

Chapter 57: Chapter Fifty-Six: Out-of-Sorts

Chapter 58: Chapter Fifty-Seven: Making it Through the Week

Chapter 59: Chapter Fifty-Eight: The Barghest’s Howl

Chapter 60: Chapter Fifty-Nine: Skimming the Lake

Chapter 61: Chapter Sixty: Perfect Timing

Chapter 62: Chapter Sixty-One: Late Night Advice

Chapter 63: Chapter Sixty-Two: For Old Times’ Sake

Chapter 64: Chapter Sixty-Three: A Little White Lie

Chapter 65: Chapter Sixty-Four: The Goblin’s Knee

Chapter 66: Chapter Sixty-Five: Test Flight

Chapter 67: Chapter Sixty-Six: Broomstick Rodeo

Chapter 68: Chapter Sixty-Seven: Some Muggle Business

Chapter 69: Chapter Sixty-Eight: Bad Timing

Chapter 70: Chapter Sixty-Nine: Moulting

Chapter 71: Chapter Seventy: To Persist and Pursue

Chapter 72: Chapter Seventy-One: Descent into Hades

Chapter 73: Chapter Seventy-Two: Home

Chapter 74: Chapter Seventy-Three: Renovation

Chapter 75: Chapter Seventy-Four: Glimpse the Snape Family Past

Chapter 76: Chapter Seventy-Five: A Wizard Not to be Crossed

Chapter 77: Chapter Seventy-Six: Present Danger

Chapter 78: Chapter Seventy-Seven: Paying Court

Chapter 79: Chapter Seventy-Eight: Sifting the Past

Chapter 80: Chapter Seventy-Nine: Atmosphere

Chapter 81: Chapter Eighty: Finding Flowers and Family

Chapter 82: Chapter Eighty-One: Lighting

Chapter 83: Chapter Eighty-Two: An End to a Perfect Evening

Chapter 84: Chapter Eighty-Three: Attack in a Blur

Chapter 85: Chapter Eighty-Four: Suspicion

Chapter 86: Chapter Eighty-Five: Jumping at Shadows

Chapter 87: Chapter Eighty-Six: Remedying Magical Misfortune

Chapter 88: Chapter Eighty-Seven: Brewing with the Master

Chapter 89: Chapter Eighty-Eight: Back to Brewing

Chapter 90: Chapter Eighty-Nine: A Cryptic Missive

Chapter 91: Chapter Ninety: A Happy Decision

Chapter 92: Chapter Ninety-One: A Proposal

Chapter 93: Chapter Ninety-Two: Promising Start to a Holiday

Chapter 94: Chapter Ninety-Three: Whetting the Appetite

Chapter 95: Chapter Ninety-Four: The Rewards of Patience

Chapter 96: Chapter Ninety-Five: Afternoon Games

Chapter 97: Chapter Ninety-Six: An Unexpected Encounter

Chapter 98: Chapter Ninety-Seven: Another Splash of Whiskey

Chapter 99: Chapter Ninety-Eight: Confidences and Promises

Chapter 100: Chapter Ninety-Nine: Memory Lane

Chapter 101: Chapter One Hundred: Some Truth

Chapter 102: Chapter One-Hundred One: Simply Severus

Chapter 103: Chapter One-Hundred Two: Meeting Max

Chapter 104: Chapter One Hundred-Three: Of Lilacs, of Love, and of Danger

Chapter 105: Chapter One Hundred-Four: Party Games

Chapter 106: Chapter One Hundred-Five: An Assignation

Chapter 107: Chapter One Hundred-Six: Refuge

Chapter 108: Chapter One Hundred-Seven: Reparation

Chapter 109: Chapter One Hundred-Eight: The Greatest Slytherin

Chapter 110: Chapter One Hundred-Nine: Vita Furtiva

Chapter 111: Chapter One Hundred-Ten: Journey to Dun Torc

Chapter 112: Chapter One Hundred-Eleven: An Accident Foretold

Chapter 113: Chapter One Hundred-Twelve: Association

Chapter 114: Chapter One Hundred-Thirteen: The Past Follows

Chapter 115: Chapter One Hundred-Fourteen: Arithmantic Charms

Chapter 116: Chapter One Hundred-Fifteen: Dead … or Alive?

Chapter 117: Chapter One Hundred-Sixteen: The Tyree Estate

Chapter 118: Chapter One Hundred-Seventeen: From the Primrose Cottage to the Shell Folly


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10/10

KingPig

Gaaaaaaah!! Evil cliffie!!!!

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Muwahaha! A fun evil cliffie, however! For me, anyway! Glad you liked it! Thanks!

0/10

hopelesliehermnharry

Finally!!!! I sure hope things will get better and better between the two of them...Poor Severus, he's all mixed up and insecure.  I'm happy to see Hermione knows her feelings about him and is helping Severus figure out his own. Let's hope he won't screw up. Great chappy.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

He'll be sensitive to Hermione's feelings, and it's good practice for him to get out and socailize and to even think of himself as someone whom someone else might want to be with. Hermione is a good, patient person, and an ideal postwar "first date" for someone as confused and stunted as poor Severus. Gareth's tender care has helped him along, and will continue to push Severus toward more openness and being in better touch with his feelings.I'm glad you enjoyed the chappie! :-) Thanks for reviewing!

10/10

mars m

 Lovely 'quiet' chapter, which seems to be a 'set up' for things to come. I found myself smiling at how Severus thought of a way to have a perfectly unsuspicious day-out with Poppy, under the disguise of 'collegiality'. Slytherin all the way! I doubt if Minerva has dismissed Severus' trip and her worries, but she knows better than to bother him with it. Nevertheless, I believe she keeps a keen eye on him and this situation and she may (want to) find anwers sooner or later.Haha, the Gamps seem omnipresent in Snape's life. Nice discussion also between Filius and him about the elder Gamp, his theories and his teaching. I can envision the discussion between Filius and epecially a somewhat more mature Minerva...formidable sparring partners! And as always, the depth of your magical theory, be it on potions, on charms, on transfiguration or on wands, amazes me. I find  it a bit painful that Sev is so cool towards Gareth, who doesn't deserve that, I feel. But then of course Severus wanted to be alone, to work on his rooms and to read, and now not only Filius interfered with him, but Gareth as well. So I can understand him, but still.... Fitting to see Severus' growth being reflected in his rooms now. That in turn should help him to become even less somber! Interesting and insightful thoughts about himself, in his time as a spy and then short after the war, when to be alive so unexpectedly was hard for him and then reflecting on his growth and changed attitude towards people. I like his refelctions a lot! Not needing to be the servant of his bitterness any longer!  It's also great to see him gaining confidence and believe he can be good for Poppy and that love, to be loved and to be in love is so meaning-giving And then the very engaging discussion between Filius and Snape about, let's say, the Deaths Dominion-developments and Snape acknowledging Filius' extraordinary sharp brain! Awesome also to see Filius trying to build Severus confidence in Poppy's love for him as well in how promising the relation between them is, regarding the factors that could intensify their bond. Oh, this is becoming such a long review, there is a lot to say here. Better round it off now...And: thanks as always for writing and sharing it with us! Looking forward to the next chapter!

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Thank you very much! If I weren't yawning my head off right now, I am sure I could think of a better response!You're right: this chapter, though a quiet one, is setting up some future events and . . . well, better not get into that too much.I'm glad you enjoyed Severus & Filius's interactions in this chapter. Filius is trying to be "Papa Filius" as he had promised Minerva and be available to Severus if the younger wizard should want to talk about anything. Of course, Severus would much rather read his book than talk!At some point in December, I hope to write the next chapter of LVS. I hope that my readers will be patient and still be reading!Thanks for the review!

10/10

HogwartsDuo

Steamy stuff in this chapter and I LOVE IT!!!! I never thought I'd really enjoy a Severus/ Poppy fic but you have proven me wrong and happily so. tee hee.Their name game is getting interesting and I'd already be out of ideas for both of them. I'd need one of those baby naming books to help me, lol.And I loved the last bit, with Severus thinking in the long term about  himself and Poppy being together. That was so sweet and goes to show that he's in this for the long haul, not just a fling with Poppy. Yay!!!Thanks for the update!

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

I'm glad you enjoyed the game and the steam!Severus would love to have a secure, loving relationship with Poppy, and he definitely is seeing it as very long term!Thanks for the review! :-)

10/10

doralupin87

yay! an update!! you've been so great this month! updating CSG and this one! I loved, loved this chapter!! it was amazing! I'm so curious about Poppy's name I want the game to end just so that I can know what it is lol. I don't know why I keep thinking greek names lol like Persephone, she was an awesome goddess lol. I really like it that they are getting along so well, it's so wonderful but I'm a bit worried that Severus might be going too fast and might scare Poppy away, I hope that never ever happens! thanks for updating so quickly, you are the best!I can't wait for more, I'm so very ansious about the attacks! and I miss Minerva lol. Sam

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

I'm glad that you're enjoying the name game so much, even if you're a bit anxious to find out Poppy's name! Don't woory, there will be a winner soon!They are getting along well, aren't they? I think that Poppy worked really hard to make their afternoon date special, so she kinda set the pace a bit for their date, anyway.I don't know when the next chapter will be up at all, but it will be up some time!Thanks very much for the review. I'm glad to know you enjoyed the chapter.

0/10

Hypnobarb

The man is a walking mass of confusion.  It's a good thing Hermione has confidence in herself.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

He's very confused, and considering where he was in the morning before his visit with Gareth and where he suddenly finds himself now, it's hardly surprising that he finds it hard to cope with suddenly being on a date -- with anyone, let alone Hermione. But Hermione does have a pretty strong sense of self, so that steadied it all and kept it from being a complete disaster.Thanks for the review!

10/10

Hypnobarb

Facing one fear after another.  He really made progress for one day.Gareth really did do him some good, even if it was rather surprising.  No, not surprising.  Shocking.  Still a little off balance over that one.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Severus is off-balance, too. He was at a tipping point, and Gareth pushed him over. He's plunged into all kinds of deeper emotional waters, and he'll keep going. Let's hope he doesn't get pulled under . . .Thanks for reviewing!

10/10

Hypnobarb

But...But...You've managed to surprise/shock/stun me.  You did kind of warn that Gareth might be quite liberal in his affections...Wow.This could complicate things, especially with Severus penchant for guilt and hair shirts.Goodness.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

So . . . age cannot wither, nor custom stale, my infinite variety, to paraphrase the Bard? I can still surprise/shock/stun? Yeah, you're right, it can complicate things. You can bet that Severus will gnaw everything over . . . and over . . . and he complicates them more . . . and then he adds complications . . . so he can put on another hair shirt. LOL!Thanks! :)

10/10

Hypnobarb

Gray trousers, garnet stick pins, and snakes on his braces.  Can a rose and a tango be far behind?*snicker*There is so much of this story that is bittersweet.  The smallest things that he's never had are so hard for him, even as he enjoys the thoughts behind them.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Yes, as Gareth said, sometimes even being happy can hurt, especially when, as you say, there are small things he's never had before.Thanks much! (I don't know about a tango! We could probably find someone to teach him! :-))Thanks!

10/10

Hypnobarb

That was a nice party.  Maybe some year, Severus will get to the point where it is not so much a chore.Cute mistletoe charm.  I could use that one.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Glad you liked the little mistletoe charm: Thanks for the review!

10/10

wyndnfyr

oh how the damaged have risen.  only to fall again at their own petty thoughts.  i hope he comes out of his funk and truly realizes exactly what it is that hermione feels for him.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Well, at least he's making forays into socializing more, and it happened sort of suddenly for him, so he's still in shock! LOLSeverus will eventually find his footing, though his path will be circuitous.Thanks for reviewing! :-)

10/10

wyndnfyr

“I got this pot in Amsterdam. . ."  lol sorry i couldnt help it.  i found this very amusing :Dim glad that severus is taking gareth's advice about showing hermione how much he likes her.  i actually wasnt expecting it to be quite so soon though.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

hahahahaha! Yeah, Amsterdam . . . pot . . . haha!Anyway, I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter -- and Severus didn't expect it quite so soon, either! Yikes!Thanks for reviewing!

10/10

wyndnfyr

that was very sensual and i found myself almost disappointed when nothing actually happened lol.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

You and Severus both -- he has mixed feelings, let's put it that way! :)Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

10/10

sandlapper

WOW!! That has to be one of the most sensitive, YET erotic things I have ever read. 

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Thank you,

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

! I'm very glad you enjoyed it! I'd hoped it would come across that way. Thanks very much for reviewing! :)

10/10

Hypnobarb

Reliving those memories for Severus' sake is a real demonstration of friendship.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

It certainly is. He did appreciate that fact, too. :)

10/10

Riposto

Oh, that was hysterically funny, and sweet, and sad, too. It's a good thing one of them is an adult, at least. Poor Hermione is getting her first acknowledged date with the guy she has been crushing on for years, but she has to spend nearly the entire time managing him and his moods, so he doesn't spook and run, ruining things irretrievably. Lucky for her, she has spent half her life managing moody adolescent boys.Severus seems so at sea. He's gone from hardly even acknowledging his interest in her, even to himself, to wondering how long before he can get into her knickers. This is really fun. You need to kick your guests out so you can attend to our needs an post all the chapters, NOW.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

"Lucky for her, she has spent half her life managing moody adolescent boys."LOL! Loved that, and so true!Fortunately, Severus is bound and determined to do his "growing up" fast and try not to stand in his own way, so to speak. He's got a lot of determination, at least! He's not faint of heart! lolIt's family visiting, and you know  how it is with family! But I will try to hop online and post again in a couple days. I did have the foresight to get the next couple chapters through a final proofread and formatted them for posting, so if I have some minutes to myself to think & breathe, I'll try to post regularly -- but not being sure of my schedule, I thought I'd warn folks, so they don't wonder if I died or something! LOL!Severus has a bit of a roller coaster ride ahead of him for the next several chapter -- heck, what am I talking about? It's more than that. He does have some lovely calm interludes -- and some exciting ones, too!Thanks for the review! I'm glad the chapter amused you. I'd hoped it would elicit a few chuckles!

10/10

mimmom

Severus is really in uncharted territory.  Oh I do love seeing Snape out of his comfort zone.  Not that he's ever had a real zone in which he was actually comfortable.  Maybe in the dungeons.  Silly man imagining her with other people.  But he IS trying and trying very hard to do the right things.  It's awful he didn't get the chance to really go through all of these things when he was a bit younger so he'd have some idea what to expect.  I love this story.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Thanks! I'm glad that you see where Severus is coming from here. He'll continue to make progress!I'm glad you like the story! Severus's path is a winding one, so I hope you continue to enjoy it! :) Thanks for reviewing!

10/10

Hypnobarb

It makes a lot of sense in the context of Severus' personality and history.  He would need to know for certain.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Yes, he does. He probably should have talked to someone about it before this point, but it's also a part of his personality -- and his personal history -- that he deals with things on his own, or wants to, anyway.

10/10

Unknown RoSe

YESYESYES!  It seems like I've been waiting forever for Severus to make his move on Hermione.  I'm so happy they are moving forward. If only that damned internal monologue would STFU.  I know how he feels, mine gets pretty crazy sometimes too. I LOVELOVELOVEZZZ this line:"If after three dates, he could kiss her good-night, he wondered how many dates they would have to have before he could thrust his cock into her pussy;"It made me giggle.  I'd been thinking that through the whole date!!!(Please be the 4th, Please be the 4th...)BTW, Thanks for the quick update!

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Well, he's getting his feet wet, anyway! Whether he takes a direct path to happiness or an indirect one, his time with Hermione is important to him, even if sometimes he just wants to run away -- it's all progress for him.Yeah, Severus is thinking a lot about sex these days -- after all those dry years and having no libido, its return is hitting him like a tidal wave. haha!Thanks for the review!

10/10

Hypnobarb

As cryptic as ever, our Firenze.I hope that Severus will find that blossoming in the spring.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

He just might find that blossoming! :) Thanks for reviewing!

10/10

Hypnobarb

An apology accompanied by 20 year old firewhisky.  That's sincere.  Insincere would be 20 day old firewhisky.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

OMG, you crack me up! That's great!

10/10

Hypnobarb

Changing quill colors?  What other radical notions will follow?

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

LOL! And more than just one color, too! Maybe he might branch out beyond black attire???

10/10

Hypnobarb

Francis Flint - a strange man when he was alive.  A strange man now that he's dead.Albus would make a wonderful Scarlet Pimpernel - just the right swash and buckle for it.I'm seeing Peter O'Toole as Lawrence of Arabia and Severus Snape.  kate Hepburn as Minerva and Amelia Earhardt.  Excellent choices!

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

I'm glad you liked those images! I thought the characters meshed well.You're right about Francis Flint! lol!Thanks for the review!

10/10

Hypnobarb

Albus shouldn't change his beard too much, given that he has a special way with it that Minerva appreciates.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

LOL! Yes, it needs to be at least a certain length for satisfaction. haha!

10/10

Hypnobarb

A nice light interlude with planning costumes and Draco committing to some major life changes.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Yes, it shows a bit of progress for both Slytherins, and just maybe Severus might have a good time with his costume. :)

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