Closure
Confessions of a Trampled Heart
Chapter 3 of 3
JunellaThere is always peace after the tempest, and I'm glad I finally found it, as long as it took for me to get there. Enjoy!
ReviewedClosure
Your name resonates still
In the recesses of my mind
Your face still haunts
My dreams at night
But all that you are
Is nothing more than a memory.
I have accepted that
You are never coming back to me
I have realised that
We are not meant to be
I now know that
We are far better off without each other
But I still love you
As I always have
Bequeathing a corner of my heart
To the memories that we made
Forever.
A/N: Well, I suppose it is the end of this mini-saga. I finally forced myself to sit down and think long and hard, and finally realised that I was able to lay down the emotional baggage I've been lugging for a long time now. It's clichéd, but I now know that the end of a relationship does not equate to the end of the world, no matter how much one has been investing in it or how long it lasted. I suppose I owe it to the wonderful people around me who were always ready with tissues and a shoulder when I felt like crying. Gabriel and Adeline and the others (you know who you are), thank you so very much.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Confessions of a Trampled Heart
7 Reviews | 5.57/10 Average
A good ending for this little story of yours...I like dark stories with strong emotions with hope in the end...I'm happy for you that you seem to have overcome this guy. And I hope you'll never have to endure anything similar.
Response from Junella (Author of Confessions of a Trampled Heart)
Thanks for the reviews! I'm really touched you left one for each chapter 
I think i've gotten over him now (mostly) cos the suckiest thing now is that I found out I went into the same school with him, and now I can't stop bumping into him! Man...
Response from Kaesespaetzle (Reviewer)
I think one can never get over anything like that entirely...It's really bad that you have to meet him so often.But why did you notice that only afterwards?!
Response from Junella (Author of Confessions of a Trampled Heart)
Because during the first month or so, I didn't see him at all, darling, and I couldn't be bothered to inquire after him through mutual friends. Bit slow of me, I know. Oh well, I've registered to switch schools, and am hoping that it'll get through, so I don't have to see him anymore. It brings back memories every time I see him, and it's getting to be a little distracting.
This is sooo intense!I don't know any writer who doesn't write the best things when being depressed or in another extreme situation...And now, on to the last one!
I like it very much! Uhh, not good at reviewing...I'll read the rest right away!
I've been there before... after a relationship is over. The hurt does fade eventually--thankfully. Hopefully yours has eased.
No, it's righteous rage... to me.
I can feel your sadness it seems. Feeling alone sucks, especially when you really aren't alone. You know?
You've done some pretty good work here so far. The way you write really shows what you must've been going through when you were feeling these things. I'm sorry that the inspiration had to be so painful, and I hope that you make a full recovery.
Response from Junella (Author of Confessions of a Trampled Heart)
Thank you, that was really sweet. I'm glad to say that I am safely out of that tunnel, and ironically, those three were among my personal favourites. I seem to be at my best during depression. Silly, isn't it? XD
Response from Pennfana (Reviewer)
Not silly at all. Some of my best work has been done when I was down in the dumps. I know a few other people who are the same way; a friend of mine thinks that it might be because of the strong emotions brought on by bad situations. Essentially, the theory is that there's more inspiration to write in times like that because you have to do something or go crazy. In any case, these are some pretty powerful poems and I look forward to reading more of them.