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Good Night
Musicmaker438 Reviews | 8 Ratings, 0 Likes, 3 Favorites )
A conversation between our favorite pair. They are just trying to sort things out after the outside world tries to break them apart.
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aahhh. *sigh* just lovely. thanks
Response from Musicmaker43 (Author of Good Night)
Oh, you're welcome! I'm glad you enjoyed it : ) Thank you for the review : )
some things can never be said often enough.
Response from Musicmaker43 (Author of Good Night)
Exactly! Thanks for reading! Hope you liked it
He's been through so much. At least she loves him, and that helps her to understand him.
Response from Musicmaker43 (Author of Good Night)
yep, thanks for the review! Hope you enjoyed it : )
Response from Musicmaker43 (Author of Good Night)
yep, thanks for the review! Hope you enjoyed it : )
Talking about issues is good and I suspect our couple would need to have many, long conversations. Enjoyed the conversation.
Response from Musicmaker43 (Author of Good Night)
glad you enjoyed it : )
You caught the intensity of the moment very well in your dialogue. I loved that it ended well.
Response from Musicmaker43 (Author of Good Night)
Thank you for the kind review! i tried to consider both sides of a conversation like that, trying to believe someone you love when others are telling you not to. I've been there before.
I really enjoyed the dialogue and am glad they came to an understanding. It's very clear that they love each other. As much as we all would love to think that people would accept them totally, it is more likely that it would be hard for them - at least in the beginning.
Response from Musicmaker43 (Author of Good Night)
yes, in the reality of jkr fantasy world, it would be very difficult for the two, but that's what fanfic is for right?!Thanks for the kind review!
Response from snapesphoenix (Reviewer)
yup - fanfic rocks! and your quite welcome!
Wow! Consider me speechless!
Response from Musicmaker43 (Author of Good Night)
Thanks for the review, i tried to consider both sides of a conversation where someone would be trying to believe someone they love when others are telling them not to. I've been there. I'm glad you liked it. i know it's short, but i thought it turned out well. Again, thanks for the review!
Response from luvsev (Reviewer)
You accomplished what you set out to do, and what's more, you did it in fewer words. Brava.
Very nice. She should tell him him that more often. He will probably need time to get used to it.
Response from Musicmaker43 (Author of Good Night)
very true : ) Thanks for your review and I hope you liked it! : )