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The Heart of Things Chapter 17: My Pupil and I, VII
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The Heart of Things

1: The Professor and I

2: The Professor and I, II

3: The Professor and III

4: The Professor and I, IV

5: The Professor and I, V

6: The Professor and I, VI

7: The Professor and I, VII

8: The Professor and I, VIII

9: The Professor and I, IX

10: The Professor and I, X

11: My Pupil and I, I

12: My Pupil and I, II

13: My Pupil and I, III

14: My Pupil and I, IV

15: My Pupil and I, V

16: My Pupil and I, VI

17: My Pupil and I, VII

18: My Pupil and I, VIII

19: The Professor and I

20: The Professor and I

21: Severus and I, I

22: Severus and I, II

23: Severus and I, III

24: Severus and I, IV

25: Severus and I, V

26: Severus and I, VI

My Pupil and I, VII

The Heart of Things

Chapter 17 of 26

FicklePen

A romantic drabble series based on Hermione Granger and Severus Snape’s relationship post-war.

Romance General Drabble/100-Word Potions Under Duress 4,110 Words 26 Chapters WIP
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VII.

They were conversing quietly when he noticed her gaze straying to the hidden photograph beneath his pillow.

His breath caught in his throat as she frowned and reached for it, no doubt believing it to be a piece of rubbish left by one of the nurses.

He could do nothing to stop her: he hadn’t told her that he could finally move his hands. He didn’t know why, but buried deep within his subconscious, he was concerned that if Miss Granger did find out, she would declare her job complete and leave, never to return again.

And so he watched with growing horror as her delicate fingers pulled the photograph away, ready to crumple it, until her eyes froze upon the waving image of a pretty, young woman.

A woman with deep red hair and eerily familiar eyes.

There was a terrible moment when he thought she would laugh at him. Or cry.

Of course, she did nothing of the sort.

Instead, she placed the photograph back beneath his pillow and calmly informed him, in an oddly tight voice, that she had forgotten to do something incredibly important.

And then, she was gone.

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AN: Again, apologies to all! Thanks to everyone for sticking with me, I know it's annoying when authors don't update. I seem to be making a habit of disappearing, but I will finish this even if it kills me. On an exciting note, I got an offer to study Japanese at university! (still holding out for my first choice uni) YAY!

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Latest 25 Reviews for The Heart of Things

294 Reviews  |  6.9/10 Average

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kimjo2

terrific!  thanks

10/10

beaweasley2

 Oh I really loved this exchange! All over a dallop of ice cream. lol

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neelix

hehe... Things are moving along nicely now! More, please!

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snitchette

Yes Snape! Grab your courage with both your skillfull hands and lick that ice cream off her nose. After the rest should be easy, even for you.... *evil grin*

10/10

Nessa

Resist temptation Severus!!

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sunny33

Go on; tempt him! :)

10/10

kass42

Too cute...I wonder what he would use to help her clean up :-)

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kass42

Wonderful! I'm so glad that they are moving in the right direction.

10/10

debjunk

Oh, I wish he had been more tempted!

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Becky

Oooooooooooooooooooooooo.......Hermione is getting rather daring, I say GO FOR IT SEVERUS....I LOVE IT!! Whoohoo...I CAN'T WAIT to see what you have planned next...Snogging soon I hope? YES?? LOLOL!!!!! WELL DONE!!!

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braye27

Yes, Miss Granger, do tempt him. 

It would be a wonderful thing for him to lift his hand and gently touch the tip of her nose.  Now we'll see if he accepts her challenge.

I love this story!  Thank you for this update.
Beth

10/10

mimmom

ooohhh, how sweet.  OMG, I love this.  Keep going!

10/10

mimmom

oh dear.

10/10

mimmom

Ohh, Poor Severus!

10/10

mimmom

I love it.

10/10

mimmom

LOL.

10/10

mimmom

ohh, this is very good.  I'm finding I really enjoy these drabble series stories.

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JIMBOPATTERSON

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. LOVE THE STORY!

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sunny33

A new start is a good thing. :)

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braye27

This outing to Regent's Park was an inspired idea.  Well done, Hermione!  As was the kiss she place on his cheek.  And he didn't make a fuss.  YAY!  This day really does sing with new beginnings.

Thank you for this lovely update.
Beth

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beaweasley2

Ohhh she kissed him!  Yeah! I loved how you described the day and his waryiness.

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gurlimargrethe

æThis story is   so wonderful, thank you for the update

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Becky

Thank you for the update, I am so enjoying this story, Bless Hermione for taking him out and getting him away for awhile, I just know this is going to be the beginning of a wonderful relationship for the both of them, If Severus will just let it! WELL DONE

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debjunk

*sniff*  That was really beautiful, and so few words to portray such lovliness.

10/10

Anonymous

Sweet :o)

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