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The Heart of Things Chapter 4: The Professor and I, IV
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The Heart of Things

1: The Professor and I

2: The Professor and I, II

3: The Professor and III

4: The Professor and I, IV

5: The Professor and I, V

6: The Professor and I, VI

7: The Professor and I, VII

8: The Professor and I, VIII

9: The Professor and I, IX

10: The Professor and I, X

11: My Pupil and I, I

12: My Pupil and I, II

13: My Pupil and I, III

14: My Pupil and I, IV

15: My Pupil and I, V

16: My Pupil and I, VI

17: My Pupil and I, VII

18: My Pupil and I, VIII

19: The Professor and I

20: The Professor and I

21: Severus and I, I

22: Severus and I, II

23: Severus and I, III

24: Severus and I, IV

25: Severus and I, V

26: Severus and I, VI

The Professor and I, IV

The Heart of Things

Chapter 4 of 26

FicklePen

A romantic drabble series based on Hermione Granger and Severus Snape’s relationship post-war.

Romance General Drabble/100-Word Potions Under Duress 4,110 Words 26 Chapters WIP
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IV.

“I am a lonely man,” he said one day, suddenly and unexpectedly.

She looked up, mouth slightly agape.

“Is it possible that you are also a lonely person, Miss Granger?”

No, she lied to herself. I’m not.

He continued, oblivious to her unspoken lie. “I am older; I can live with my loneliness. But you are young… It must be difficult to accept your loneliness.”

“I’m not lonely,” she muttered unconvincingly.

“You’re here, are you not?” he said, ignoring her. “Youth is the loneliest time of all. Otherwise, why should you come here so often to visit me?”

“I–”

“–Perhaps, in time, you’ll realise that you cannot rid yourself of your loneliness when you are with me. I can’t help you forget it, and soon you will find that you no longer want to visit me.” As he spoke, the professor smiled sadly.

That night, she cried for the first time.

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NB: Some parts of the dialogue have been pilfered from the novel Kokoro.

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Latest 25 Reviews for The Heart of Things

294 Reviews  |  6.9/10 Average

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kimjo2

terrific!  thanks

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beaweasley2

 Oh I really loved this exchange! All over a dallop of ice cream. lol

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neelix

hehe... Things are moving along nicely now! More, please!

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snitchette

Yes Snape! Grab your courage with both your skillfull hands and lick that ice cream off her nose. After the rest should be easy, even for you.... *evil grin*

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Nessa

Resist temptation Severus!!

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sunny33

Go on; tempt him! :)

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kass42

Too cute...I wonder what he would use to help her clean up :-)

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kass42

Wonderful! I'm so glad that they are moving in the right direction.

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debjunk

Oh, I wish he had been more tempted!

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Becky

Oooooooooooooooooooooooo.......Hermione is getting rather daring, I say GO FOR IT SEVERUS....I LOVE IT!! Whoohoo...I CAN'T WAIT to see what you have planned next...Snogging soon I hope? YES?? LOLOL!!!!! WELL DONE!!!

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braye27

Yes, Miss Granger, do tempt him. 

It would be a wonderful thing for him to lift his hand and gently touch the tip of her nose.  Now we'll see if he accepts her challenge.

I love this story!  Thank you for this update.
Beth

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mimmom

ooohhh, how sweet.  OMG, I love this.  Keep going!

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mimmom

oh dear.

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mimmom

Ohh, Poor Severus!

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mimmom

I love it.

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mimmom

LOL.

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mimmom

ohh, this is very good.  I'm finding I really enjoy these drabble series stories.

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JIMBOPATTERSON

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. LOVE THE STORY!

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sunny33

A new start is a good thing. :)

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braye27

This outing to Regent's Park was an inspired idea.  Well done, Hermione!  As was the kiss she place on his cheek.  And he didn't make a fuss.  YAY!  This day really does sing with new beginnings.

Thank you for this lovely update.
Beth

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beaweasley2

Ohhh she kissed him!  Yeah! I loved how you described the day and his waryiness.

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gurlimargrethe

æThis story is   so wonderful, thank you for the update

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Becky

Thank you for the update, I am so enjoying this story, Bless Hermione for taking him out and getting him away for awhile, I just know this is going to be the beginning of a wonderful relationship for the both of them, If Severus will just let it! WELL DONE

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debjunk

*sniff*  That was really beautiful, and so few words to portray such lovliness.

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Anonymous

Sweet :o)

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