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Beyond Blue
Hanagasume243 Reviews | 243 Ratings, 0 Likes, 25 Favorites )
A marriage law has been passed by the new Minister for Magic... Hermione and Snape aren't impressed, but they have to follow the law, right?
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Hanagasume
Member Since 2008 | 31 Stories | Favorited by 246 | 119 Reviews Written | 1,704 Review Responses
I write fan fiction: I am a big SS/HG shipper, but I also like RL/HG, DM/LL and tastefully written Dramione or Lumione on occasion.
I photoshop: I use photoshop an awful lot to create my own banners and edit photos - I love my DSLR.
I am a bibliophile: Paperback, hardcover, graphic novel, fiction or non-fiction. You name it, I read it and collect it.
SEVERUS SNAPE IS MY ONE TRUE LOVE!!!
Reviews for Beyond Blue
Very cute story. I loved it. A nice fluffy, romantic piece, with a touch of drama...just what I needed to read today :) Great job!
Great end for a lovely story
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Beyond Blue)
Thanks so much :) I wrote it a long time before the challenge, but never got around to posting it :p And I almost wish I had made it longer, but in the end I didn't want to change it :) Thanks again! <3
~ah, settling in to the married life~ :)
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Beyond Blue)
Heh, yeah well they had to at some point :) After a rough beginning, this will be good for them! Thanks :)
Good for Harry!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Beyond Blue)
Heh, yeah Harry had to come around eventually :)
Good chapter. :) I liked the beach scene.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Beyond Blue)
Mmmmhmmm - Not that it would be terribly comfortable with all the sand. but its a nice fantasy :p
I like Filius. Hahaha! Glad they're going off together like this.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Beyond Blue)
Heh, I love Filius Flitwick as well - just in general. It's nice that they are getting time away :)
glad her parents were so cool to him :) that's a plus!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Beyond Blue)
Heh, well with one of her best friends being lame, her parents had to be supportive naturally :)
yay! I'm glad he told Harry off! :)
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Beyond Blue)
Mmmmm it's time Harry was a bit of a jerk - Like I hate Ron and everything, but sometimes its nice to have Harry being the douchebag :)
I still feel sorry for him. Glad he closed the door in her face. :)
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Beyond Blue)
I know :) She deserved it for being a cold-hearted meanie :p Thanks!
Poor Snape. :)
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Beyond Blue)
Mmmmhmmm poor thing - always getting shut down :p
LOL! Surprise! :)
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Beyond Blue)
Lol yep - for them but I know everyone kinda saw it coming :P Thanks!
I adore MLC fics. :) Good start
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Beyond Blue)
Heh, thanks love :) <3
Personally, I think the whole idea of them falling in love so quick and how quickly the story progressed was a bit too fast. I enjoyed it very much however and think (my opinion, Im nobody, lol) that you could later re-write it into a mid to full length novella and add a little more obstacles and get more in-depth with the more minor characters. Overcoming whatever challenges (the bigger, sometimes the better) makes for a great read! You have done well and I liked it because it was short and sweet as well. Which, considering my 'constructive' criticism, is a conundrum! This has extreme potential to develop into something truly amazing and become one of the 'Upper Echelon' of TPP. Cheers!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Beyond Blue)
I know it seemed all very fast, but I hadn't intended for this to be a long story at all. Perhaps one day when I find I have the time I might expand on it into a longer one, but as it is, I am happy enough with it. Thanks for the review and the CC.
If anyone deserves happiness, it's Severus. I am so glad he finally got his happy ending.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Beyond Blue)
Yes, he does deserve it, and so does she. Thanks!
Ouch. Dealing with morning sickness as well as start of term? Lucky Hermione has such a supportive husband.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Beyond Blue)
Heheheh, yes indeed. It would be trouble, but Sev is a good man :) Thanks!
I am glad Harry came to his senses. Hermione needs her friends as well as her husband.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Beyond Blue)
Yep, she sure does. Now everything is right again! Thanks!
Mmmmmm. Sevrus Snape can help me make dinner any day!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Beyond Blue)
Heheheh, not if he is helping me make din-dins! Lol. Thanks for reviewing!
To paraphrase Hermione: who knew Severus Snape could be such a romantic. Perfect time, perfect place.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Beyond Blue)
Heheh, indeed it was perfect timing :) Thanks!
I thought Hermione's parents would be a bit more put out about her marrying so suddenly, but if they can see how happy he makes her, I'm glad they accept him. Oh, and was there anything terribly important in the Ministry letter Snape forgot to give her?
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Beyond Blue)
I didn't really think it would be fair to make Hermione suffer more - she already has Harry against her. And really - most parents just want to see their children happy. And no - the letter was just a letter. Thanks!
Uh oh. Harry is out in full selfish brat mode. I hope Hermione won't let that sway her.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Beyond Blue)
Heh, and when has Hermione ever let Harry or Ron deter her from her purpose :p Thanks!
Poor Severus. He has hidden behind his mask of indefference for so long, how can he blame people for believing his advertising?
Poor Severus. He has hidden behind his mask of indefference for so long, how can he blame people for believing his advertising?
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Beyond Blue)
Heheh poor Severus indeed. He just needs the love of a woman to help him along :) Thanks!
It seems Hermione is putting the coldness into her words and certain thoughts in order to protect herself from what she is perceiving as the cold manner of Snape. Sigh.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Beyond Blue)
Heh, she was trying to protect herself :) Besides, she was trying to play the part of a strong, independant woman :p Thanks!
Dumbledore as Minister? Yes, I could see this hairbrained scheme as being one of his.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Beyond Blue)
Yes, he does tend to have quite a lot of hair-brained schemes. This one was deffinately one of his best :p Thanks for reviewing!
Hehe. I can just imagine both their faces after they have tried to occupy the same space at the same time. Not to mention realising they are the other's match.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Beyond Blue)
Heh, yeah it would be terribly awkward. But hey, they are still a match, and thats all that counts :) Thanks!