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Potter Place's Variety Challenge 2009 The Unforgiven
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The Unforgiven

1: Chapter 1

2: Chapter 2

3: Chapter 3

4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

6: Chapter 6

7: Chapter 7

8: Chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Chapter 11

12: Chapter 12

13: Chapter 13

14: Chapter 14

15: Chapter 15

16: Chapter 16

17: Chapter 17

18: Chapter 18

The Unforgiven

livvy6

398 Reviews   |   398 Ratings, 0 Likes, 42 Favorites )

Drama Romance Alternate Universe Potter Place's Variety Challenge 2009 56,105 Words 18 Chapters Complete
Harry Potter Hermione Granger Original Character Severus Snape

Fourth Place Winner in the Potter Place's Variety Challenge 2009. Life after Voldemort isn't as everyone thought it would be.

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Chapters (18)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Chapter 18: Chapter 18


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livvy6

Member Since 2007  |  17 Stories  |  Favorited by 655  |  625 Reviews Written  |  6,131 Review Responses

I am a grateful fan of Ms. Rowling and of her overwhelming Byronic Character, Severus Snape! Please check out the first chapters of each fic (except for "How Can I Tell You," which is on Chapter 2) to see pictures of the Heroines.

 

Admins' Note: Livvy6 died suddenly on February 22, 2012, leaving behind her husband, six-year-old daughter, and seventeen stories well-loved by the TPP community. All who knew her—including those in Harry Potter fandom and all of us, here—are richer for having known her.

Requiescat in pace, Livvy. Always.

 

 

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Reviews for The Unforgiven

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10/10

mick42

Perhaps Hermione should have taken her parents to StMungos to visit Nevelle's parents, them maybe they would have understood what she did for them. Ron kicked to the kerb .

10/10

mick42

Hermione is begining to realize, that there is a world of difference between sex and making love.Ron is an insensitive clod, but Hermione is not making any effort to get him to change his ways. Seeing her bleed for a month, time after time, should have let him know he was doing something wrong, but no he is just too thick and selfish, the sooner Hermione leaves the prat the better. 

8/10

hilli72

Loved this fic so much! Great job, Eugene was sublime, ss/hg interaction was fabulous. This was all kinds of Wonderful!

0/10

Montara

Your Hermione is so strong! And wise! Even though she's so young. I guess a war can do that to people, especially women. I mean, Ginny was strong also.

I can understand her need to be cherished, I think no one should settle for less but unfortunately a lot of people does.

Eugene was a lucky child to end up with them as parents. So..a Gryffindor...poor Severus :)) But I know he'll accept that. I wonder what Hope will be? :D

I loved reading this story. Thank you!

0/10

deedeebug95

Lovely,powerful story!!!

Response from livvy6 (Author of The Unforgiven)

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)Thanks for reviewing!Livvy

10/10

mick42

Like a lot of other people Harry is attacking others, because he is feeling gulity himself. 

0/10

theseachange

Interesting.  So now Hermione is master of the elder wand, right?  Yep, that's the way it works.

Response from livvy6 (Author of The Unforgiven)

I actually didn't think of that! The Elder Wand doesn't get attention in the story. But what a thought!Thanks for reviewing!Livvy

0/10

tenoh27

A fascinating and believable characterisation and understanding of Snape, as well as being a well-crafted story with lovely writing! Thanks so much.

Response from livvy6 (Author of The Unforgiven)

Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed it :)Livvy

9/10

Elianna Eldari

I loved it, it has an interesting plot, and fair writing and character development, though though some of the characters could have had more depth, Eugene especially. If you write a sequel, can it please be about Eugene, with a bit of his backstory?

Response from livvy6 (Author of The Unforgiven)

Absolutely. I like to keep my OC's a bit vague so I can do a sequel if the inspiration hits me.Thanks for reviewing :)

0/10

Elianna Eldari

I KNEW THE SLANG!! yay!  (i'm american, so was happy about that)

Response from livvy6 (Author of The Unforgiven)

LOL! Great! I'm glad you liked that.Thanks :)

10/10

AlanaVawn

awesome

Response from livvy6 (Author of The Unforgiven)

Thank you very much :)

10/10

ginny24

a very touching story, it has been a pleasure to read! I loved it from the first chapter to the last...great style!

Response from livvy6 (Author of The Unforgiven)

Thank you very much :)

10/10

Morsmordre

Outstanding!

Response from livvy6 (Author of The Unforgiven)

Thank you so much for all your reviews :) I'm glad you enjoyed the fic!

10/10

Morsmordre

I am loving, just POSITIVELY ADORING this story! This is AMAZING. Wow! *And I can soo see Severus akwardly having a man to ten-year-old 'sex talk' Heheeeeeee

Response from livvy6 (Author of The Unforgiven)

Thank you! I hope you like how I start winding it all down and where I take Severus, Hermione, and Eugene.Thanks :)

0/10

Morsmordre

Ginny always was a little bit#h. lmfao

Response from livvy6 (Author of The Unforgiven)

LOL! Ginny can really dish it out when she gets her dander up.Thanks :)

10/10

Morsmordre

So, what the heck's the holdup? Hermione is determined and stubborn. Why hasn't she just went and got Snape's memories back? And WHY would Harry not have immediately been over after she owled Ginny about him? Strange directrion. I wonder whats going on at the Burrow. This is very intriguing.

Response from livvy6 (Author of The Unforgiven)

Yes, what IS going on at the Burrow? But Hermione knows that Harry is struggling with his own feelings of guilt and sadness. He has to be ready to do that. But you'll find out what the hold-up is.Thanks :)

10/10

Morsmordre

I love the way Hermione is with these children and the way she tells stories. I think only Eugene is a wizard but it almost seems like a surreal 'otherworld' where all those who died in DH are back as children again. and Yaay. Bout time she finally gets yelled at by Snape. Id take a mean Snape over a dead Snape any day!

Response from livvy6 (Author of The Unforgiven)

Oh, yes! Near death experience or not, you can't take the grouch out of Snape!Thanks :)

10/10

Morsmordre

I chose this story to read first because of the many reviews. I feel you have kept the characters, well--in character wonderfully. I was sorely disappointed that there was never a 'true' epilogue in DH, I think all of us would have liked to have seen the real reactions of people who are so well renowned they are almost alive. Congrats on your close to 400 reviews and I applaud you. I am going to try and see if I can figure out who you are before voting closes. Excellent work!

Response from livvy6 (Author of The Unforgiven)

Thank you for all your compliments! I really wanted to know Harry's reaction to the absence of Snape's body at the end. I just felt JKR didn't do justice to Snape's death... or did he die?Thanks :)

0/10

kimjo2

how very characteristicly pratish of ron.  i'm glad severus is healing so well.  lovely update. thanks muchly

Response from livvy6 (Author of The Unforgiven)

Prat is Ron's true middle name. Severus and Harry will be much better from here on out. A bit of happiness all around for those deserving!Thanks :)

0/10

debjunk

Ah, Ron's a jerk. You'd think he'd have gotten the hint a long time ago.

It was nice of Harry to repair Severus' wand. And I'm glad Severus was able to repair a little of Harry too.

Response from livvy6 (Author of The Unforgiven)

Yes, I thought that having the both of them helpin the other would bring closure and happiness to them.Thanks :)

10/10

Shadow

Good for Severus to put aside his personal feelings in order to help Harry.

So typical of Ron though. No thought of anyone but himself.

Response from livvy6 (Author of The Unforgiven)

Yes, Ron will never change.Thanks :)

10/10

Shadow

I am glad Hermione has been able to convince Severus that he needs to see Harry and help him put his guilt aside.

I can just imagine Severus gloating about his potency over a Weasley!!

Response from livvy6 (Author of The Unforgiven)

Yes, some things will never change. Snape is such a smug bastard sometimes :)Thanks!

10/10

Shadow

I hope this truly signifies the end of Severus' obsession with Lily. He now has so much to live for in the present with Hermione and Eugene, he must stop living in the past.

Response from livvy6 (Author of The Unforgiven)

Yes, I think the destruction of the mirror will shake him out of his delusion and madness.Thanks :)

10/10

Shadow

Poor Hermione. Not only is she dealing with Severus' guilt and depression, but just when she thinks she is making a breakthrough, he goes back to the Lily in the mirror. Good for her though. Breaking the mirror was probably the best thing she could have done.

Response from livvy6 (Author of The Unforgiven)

Absolutely. It was good for Severus to see something tangible that was feeding the madness destroyed-that it was not indestructible.Thanks :)

10/10

Shadow

I am glad Hermione is so patient with Severus. He needs gentleness and reassurance so badly in his life.

Response from livvy6 (Author of The Unforgiven)

He does. And believe me- it will not escape his notice that a real life woman is loving him.Thanks :)

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