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Darkness Within Chapter 18: The Letters
Chapters Menu
Darkness Within

1: Encounter

2: Consequence

3: On The Edge

4: The Calm Before

5: The Storm

6: Oblivion

7: Desperate Measures

8: Some Riot

9: Catharsis

10: The Heart of the Matter

11: Full of Spices

12: Reaquainting

13: Mending Fences

14: Butterflies

15: One Fine Day

16: My Best Friend

17: Parting Is Such Shit, Really

18: The Letters

19: One Day Like This

20: I Know You

21: Sunshine

22: Epilogue

The Letters

Darkness Within

Chapter 18 of 22

neelix

Severus Snape bumps into his ex-student Hermione Granger, but she's not the Hermione he remembers. Unwittingly pulled into her seedy world, he uncovers a shocking secret.

Mystery/Suspense Drama Angst Romance Horror Psychological Potions Under Duress 33,678 Words 22 Chapters Complete
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Dear Severus,

As promised, my first letter. I haven’t even started unpacking.

My room is small and basic and looks out over a small Paris back street that I don’t know the name of yet. It’s in an old and dusty building, and from my window, I can see a coffee shop and an ice cream and crepes parlour.

My landlady is called Marie and doesn’t speak English. She looks almost Spanish, and she has a moustache.

I have my first class in the morning.

It’s Potions.

Love, Hermione.

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Dear Ginny,

I think I have made the biggest mistake of my life.

My room is dark and cramped, there are pigeons on the roof of the building opposite, and they make such a noise I can’t concentrate properly. I had my first Potions class, and the teacher is hopeless. I had to intervene at one point, to stop her from blowing everyone up!

My landlady, Marie, is nice but very nosy, and she keeps asking me personal questions. I just smile and tell her I can’t understand her. Today, she asked me about my boyfriend.

I miss him, Ginny. Have you seen him? How is he?

Love, Hermione.

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Dear Hermione,

Just give up the course and come home. We all miss you.

Harry invited Severus for lunch, but he turned down the invitation. He has agreed to come and visit Albus next week, so I will let you know how he is.

I’m sure he feels the same way about you. You should have told him.

Write soon.

Love, Ginny.

*******

Dear Severus,

I have been here almost four weeks, and you haven’t replied to any of my letters.

Please don’t be angry with me.

Have you visited Albus at all? I bet he is getting big now.

Please write. I miss you.

Love, Hermione.

*********

Dear Hermione,

I apologise for not replying to your letters. I wasn’t under the impression you expected me to write.

I have been particularly busy fulfilling recent orders, but your filing system is still working perfectly, and I can assure you I am up to date with the invoices.

I have visited Albus just this week after incessant invitations from Harry. And, yes, the child is growing, as he should.

I hope your course is everything you hoped it would be.

Regards,

Severus.

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Dear Hermione,

I am worried about Severus. He came to visit Albus last week, and he looked awful, really tired. I think he’s lost weight. I am sure he is missing you. I mentioned your name, and he couldn’t look me in the eye.

I made him promise to come to dinner next week. If I feel brave enough, I’m going to ask him how he feels about you. It’s ridiculous, both of you being unhappy like this.

How is your course? I hope you are miserable, because we all are without you.

Ginny.

***********

Dear Ginny,

Please don’t ask Severus about me. He will think I have put you up to it.

Do you think he might be ill? He wrote to me, but he didn’t say very much.

And I am miserable. Thank goodness the holidays are only two weeks away.

Depending on how things go, I may need to come and stay with you, if that’s okay? I will see Severus first though, but don’t tell him. I want it to be a surprise.

Love, Hermione.

***********

Dear Hermione,

I only just got your letter, I think your owl got lost or something.

I spoke to Severus about you, Hermione.

I told him you care about him, and that you are really missing him.

I think he loves you, even though he wouldn’t tell me how he felt. I thought he was going to hex me at one point. Thank goodness I had a glass of wine to steady my nerves!

You really need to go and see him. He is missing you; he told me himself. He looks even worse than he did before.

I won’t tell him you’re coming home, but I know he will be pleased to see you.

Love, Ginny.

********

Dear Severus,

How are you keeping?

Ginny told me you have visited. I am glad you are staying friendly with her and Harry.

My holiday is coming up, but I have a mountain of studying to do, so I don’t know if I will get away as yet. I hope to.

I think of you often. I miss our curry nights.

Love, Hermione.


A/N: Hi, everyone. I hope you didn't mind that little departure from the norm. Please stick with it because we're almost there now. Hermione comes back in the next chapter... sit back and watch the fireworks! Thanks for reading and letting me know your thoughts.

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326 Reviews  |  5.89/10 Average

10/10

HBAR

Yay!  Happiness all around!  Great story!

10/10

HBAR

Just from this short chapter, it is so very obvious how happy and in love they are.  Maybe it is good that she went away briefly.  They needed a kick in the pants somehow.

10/10

HBAR

He had one chance to make this perfect, and I think he did outstanding.  Yay!

10/10

HBAR

I think he finally realized that it is now or never.  Thank goodness!

10/10

HBAR

I love the contrast in the first letter she sends to Severus and the one to Ginny.  Why won't they just talk to one another?!  Ginny may have to intervene further.

10/10

HBAR

You're tearing my heart out with this chapter.  Love the last line!

10/10

HBAR

Doing something foolish?  Everything those two do these days is foolish.  I hope they cave soon.  This is too much for me!  I can't remember if she stays or goes.

10/10

HBAR

I get so mad at these two, but considering her past and how delicate the subject, I can appreciate the tip toeing that is going on.  Poor dears.

10/10

HBAR

Oh dear, he is going to explode.  I wonder who will cave and make the first move, and how it will be received.

10/10

HBAR

So glad that they are all on friendly terms.  That will help Hermione immensely.

10/10

HBAR

I sure hope the Potters take this well.  Hermione could use some friends.  Not that Severus hasnt been wonderful to her.  Onward and upward, I suppose.

10/10

HBAR

I agree, it is great to see her happy.  I just hope if their relationship progresses beyond just friends that they arrive there together with little drama. We'll see ...

10/10

HBAR

What a sad pair they are right now.  I think eventually when they stop working against one another, they will be able to sort themselves out.

10/10

HBAR

He may be sorry he asked. :(. But, it is good for her to talk about it.  She can't move on if she keeps it all bottled up.  Things can only get better from here, right?  Right?  *is worried*

10/10

HBAR

Well, looking in her head might be less painful than having to recount her whole story.  Hopefully they can work together to get her back to good.

10/10

HBAR

Bummer.  He shouldn't have let his guard down.  This poor girl is in bad shape, and I feel bad for her, her guilt warring with the need to drink.

10/10

HBAR

Why do I know she isn't going to like what he has to say?  Still, he is taking awfully good care of her ...

10/10

HBAR

Wow, she's in a bad place, and he seems I'll equipped to deal with it.  Still, they'll get through this.  Eventually.

10/10

HBAR

It is odd that he watched her for so long, neither deriving pleasure nor intervening.  Maybe he feels protective, but not quite ready to get involved.  I think this gets ugly before it gets good.

10/10

HBAR

I love this because it is so different than the usual Hermione.  Under the right circumstances, this could be her life.  Now get in there Severus, and fix this mess!

10/10

HBAR

It's been a long time since I read this, and I wasn't reviewing back then.  So, I'm ready to jump on this ride again (since I don't remember much but know it will be good).  Intriguing start.

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TheCopperDragon2004

Aww, a happy ending to a story with such a crappy beginning (circumstance-wise, not the actual writing!) is always a good thing to read. I loved the part where they write letters to each other, as well as when she came home on holiday and they finally said how they felt. :)

10/10

mick42

It is so very sad ,to see her fall so low.

10/10

mick42

" Miss Granger what happend to you?" that is the question ,isn't it.

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marisamarinee

Awww I loved it. 

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