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Darkness Within Chapter 2: Consequence
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Darkness Within

1: Encounter

2: Consequence

3: On The Edge

4: The Calm Before

5: The Storm

6: Oblivion

7: Desperate Measures

8: Some Riot

9: Catharsis

10: The Heart of the Matter

11: Full of Spices

12: Reaquainting

13: Mending Fences

14: Butterflies

15: One Fine Day

16: My Best Friend

17: Parting Is Such Shit, Really

18: The Letters

19: One Day Like This

20: I Know You

21: Sunshine

22: Epilogue

Consequence

Darkness Within

Chapter 2 of 22

neelix

Severus Snape bumps into his ex-student Hermione Granger, but she's not the Hermione he remembers. Unwittingly pulled into her seedy world, he uncovers a shocking secret.

Mystery/Suspense Drama Angst Romance Horror Psychological Potions Under Duress 33,678 Words 22 Chapters Complete
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One Month Later

Severus was sitting by his open fire, sipping at a glass of Firewhisky and reading through the Daily Prophet. He was waiting.

It had become almost a ritual, to the point where he wore the same clothes and followed the same routine. He glanced at the Muggle clock on his mantel and took another sip of his drink. He had ten minutes. He closed his eyes and took a slow, deep breath.

Shortly, he would leave. He would shrug on his black Muggle jacket and check his hair in the mirror, slug down the rest of his drink and Apparate to the Traveller’s Rest pub in a rundown part of West London. Once there, he would purchase another whisky, usually Black Bush, and then sit on a bar stool and wait for Hermione to arrive. She wouldn’t see him. She was, as a rule, intoxicated before she arrived. But he knew that she wouldn’t be alone.

Severus looked at the clock again and folded his newspaper, laying it gently on the arm of his chair with a soft sigh. It was time to leave.

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Severus caught sight of her as she pushed open the half door and held it open for her companion. With a subtlety that was a testament to his years of spying, he glanced with a blank face and blank eyes in their direction. Hermione looked towards him but didn’t see him, and Severus registered her dilated pupils and slightly vacant expression. The couple walked past him, and Severus, ever sensitive to aromas, inhaled the unmistakeable smell of stale vomit and fresh alcohol on Hermione’s breath. He turned his eyes to his drink and tried to ignore the clenched sensation of his stomach, and then he looked at Hermione’s date for the night. If Severus didn’t know better, he would have assumed that Hermione was a prostitute and that the man was her latest customer. He knew this wasn’t the case, however. Hermione never took their money.

This one was different in some way, and Severus’s senses were immediately on edge. For one thing, he was older than the others, and he was also considerably scruffier and unkempt. He had at least a week's worth of greying stubble on his cheeks, and his salt and pepper hair was dirty, pushed in slick lengths behind his ears. He was wearing Muggle jeans and an old, threadbare checked blue shirt.

Severus ordered another drink and waited. After twenty minutes, Hermione stood and took her companion by the hand, dragging him out of the pub. She was unsteady on her feet, and Severus frowned as he noticed the smirk on the man’s face. He downed his drink swiftly and followed them.

By the time Severus had Disillusioned himself and caught up with his quarry, Hermione was having a hard time staying on her heels. He could hear her mumbling, and a deep, croaky laugh came from the man she was with. He watched as the man put his arm around her to hold her upright as they walked, and then without warning, he steered her into a side street. Severus’s eyes narrowed as he followed closely behind. This wasn’t part of the routine. Hermione was usually the one in control, but then again, she wasn’t usually this inebriated.

The man paused at a gated alleyway, glanced around, and pushed the gate open, his hand grabbing Hermione’s shoulder and pulling her with him briskly.

Severus increased his pace, his heart beating fast beneath his ribcage. His mind was racing as he pushed open the gate and walked down the alley behind a row of houses. He heard a noise from the backyard of the first house, and as he entered, he stifled a shout, pulled out his wand, and muttered ‘Stupefy’ as quietly as he could.

The man stiffened where he lay and almost suffocated Hermione; she was unconscious beneath him, her skirt ripped, blood pouring from a split lip, and her legs akimbo.

‘Shit,’ Severus muttered. ‘Stupid fucking witch.’

With a shove of his foot, he rolled the man from Hermione’s body. The man’s jeans were around his ankles, his cock still erect. Severus kicked him fiercely in the ribs and heard the satisfying crack of bone before turning back to the prone witch. He pulled what was left of her skirt down around her hips, trying not to look at her knickerless and hairless pussy as he did so. He bent to lift her and was shocked at how light she felt in his arms. The smell of alcohol assuaged his nostrils, and he fought down the nausea in his throat.

With a sharp crack, Severus Disapparated.

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Latest 25 Reviews for Darkness Within

326 Reviews  |  5.89/10 Average

10/10

HBAR

Yay!  Happiness all around!  Great story!

10/10

HBAR

Just from this short chapter, it is so very obvious how happy and in love they are.  Maybe it is good that she went away briefly.  They needed a kick in the pants somehow.

10/10

HBAR

He had one chance to make this perfect, and I think he did outstanding.  Yay!

10/10

HBAR

I think he finally realized that it is now or never.  Thank goodness!

10/10

HBAR

I love the contrast in the first letter she sends to Severus and the one to Ginny.  Why won't they just talk to one another?!  Ginny may have to intervene further.

10/10

HBAR

You're tearing my heart out with this chapter.  Love the last line!

10/10

HBAR

Doing something foolish?  Everything those two do these days is foolish.  I hope they cave soon.  This is too much for me!  I can't remember if she stays or goes.

10/10

HBAR

I get so mad at these two, but considering her past and how delicate the subject, I can appreciate the tip toeing that is going on.  Poor dears.

10/10

HBAR

Oh dear, he is going to explode.  I wonder who will cave and make the first move, and how it will be received.

10/10

HBAR

So glad that they are all on friendly terms.  That will help Hermione immensely.

10/10

HBAR

I sure hope the Potters take this well.  Hermione could use some friends.  Not that Severus hasnt been wonderful to her.  Onward and upward, I suppose.

10/10

HBAR

I agree, it is great to see her happy.  I just hope if their relationship progresses beyond just friends that they arrive there together with little drama. We'll see ...

10/10

HBAR

What a sad pair they are right now.  I think eventually when they stop working against one another, they will be able to sort themselves out.

10/10

HBAR

He may be sorry he asked. :(. But, it is good for her to talk about it.  She can't move on if she keeps it all bottled up.  Things can only get better from here, right?  Right?  *is worried*

10/10

HBAR

Well, looking in her head might be less painful than having to recount her whole story.  Hopefully they can work together to get her back to good.

10/10

HBAR

Bummer.  He shouldn't have let his guard down.  This poor girl is in bad shape, and I feel bad for her, her guilt warring with the need to drink.

10/10

HBAR

Why do I know she isn't going to like what he has to say?  Still, he is taking awfully good care of her ...

10/10

HBAR

Wow, she's in a bad place, and he seems I'll equipped to deal with it.  Still, they'll get through this.  Eventually.

10/10

HBAR

It is odd that he watched her for so long, neither deriving pleasure nor intervening.  Maybe he feels protective, but not quite ready to get involved.  I think this gets ugly before it gets good.

10/10

HBAR

I love this because it is so different than the usual Hermione.  Under the right circumstances, this could be her life.  Now get in there Severus, and fix this mess!

10/10

HBAR

It's been a long time since I read this, and I wasn't reviewing back then.  So, I'm ready to jump on this ride again (since I don't remember much but know it will be good).  Intriguing start.

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TheCopperDragon2004

Aww, a happy ending to a story with such a crappy beginning (circumstance-wise, not the actual writing!) is always a good thing to read. I loved the part where they write letters to each other, as well as when she came home on holiday and they finally said how they felt. :)

10/10

mick42

It is so very sad ,to see her fall so low.

10/10

mick42

" Miss Granger what happend to you?" that is the question ,isn't it.

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marisamarinee

Awww I loved it. 

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