Just Look Up
MomoDesu24 Reviews | 24 Ratings, 0 Likes, 24 Favorites )
If anyone had told Hermione that on Christmas Day she would be snogging her Potions professor in a dirty closet she would have laughed. Now that it had happened, laughing was the last thing on her mind.
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MomoDesu
Member Since 2008 | 9 Stories | Favorited by 9 | 83 Reviews Written | 77 Review Responses
I am a twenty something college student living in South Florida.
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Lol, cute story. Can I cancel my brewing that has yoube done as well? ;) thanks for sharing your story with us.
Well, things are looking up for a happy new year.
Lovely.
Thank you.
Love Sonia :)
Oooh, I do love meddling Minervas and Snarky Snapes. Adorable and well-written to boot!
Very nice. Thanks for sharing!
Nice piece of work! Lovely!
Response from MomoDesu (Author of Just Look Up)
Thank you very much! I appreciate it.
aw a snape/hermione fic that actually made me smile rather than vomit! yay! you did an awesome job in writing this.
Response from MomoDesu (Author of Just Look Up)
I'm glad to hear I was able to write something of said pairing that didn't make you puke. I take that as a great compliment :) Thanks for reading it, giving it a chance.
Oh, very amusing... I appreciated how both Severus and Hermione stayed in character all the way through, even once they noticed their mutual desire for each other. Good work!
Response from MomoDesu (Author of Just Look Up)
Thank you very much! I love throwing those two into new situations and trying to write their reactions yet keep them in character.Momo
the comment about the sherbet lemons was particularly good.
Response from MomoDesu (Author of Just Look Up)
I had to add that in. The situation just called for it!Momo
I love it when the staff plots to get Hermione and Snape together, and Remus and Minerva pulled it off like seasoned pros."Just Look Up" is a delightful story and I offer my compliments! Well done, Momo!
Beth
Response from MomoDesu (Author of Just Look Up)
Thank you very much!Momo
nice characterzation and great dialoge! THanks!
Response from MomoDesu (Author of Just Look Up)
Thank you!
Anonymous
Lovely! Though having set them up in this way is truly nasty, I'd think... *malicious gigle* What about a nice punishment for the responsibles? *cackles*
Author's Response: Yes, but setting them up in a nasty manner was fun. *giggle*
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Momo
Lovely -- comic and spicy and even better, Filch has to clean up the closet at the end of it all!
Response from MomoDesu (Author of Just Look Up)
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Momo
Yay! Perfect tale for my lunch break - thank you!
Response from MomoDesu (Author of Just Look Up)
You're welcome. I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading and leaving a review :)Momo
*big grin* So, to be locked in a broom closet with a bit of mistletoe is all it takes... *ponders* I'm not sure there will be something useful in the trees down the street. *sigh* I'll have to go trecking in the forest. *double sigh* What a gril must do sometimes. ;o)
Response from MomoDesu (Author of Just Look Up)
Maybe you can find some bargain bin mistletoe for 75% off at the market? Half of January may be gone, but that would make the price on Christmas decor even lower! Save some money and get your smooches ;)Momo
Response from snitchette (Reviewer)
I don't think I've ever seen mistletoe sold anywhere (at least in France where I live). So I guesse I'm still with the trecking in the foret idea. ;)
Brilliant! lol... I loved it.
Response from MomoDesu (Author of Just Look Up)
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!It's nice to see you here too, in addition to AFF! I love being able to respond to reviews.Momo
Oh, the three mischevious twits! Trapping them in the closet like that. What I want to know is why it took so long for two of the brightest in Hogwarts to figure out how to open up the door. I mean, geeeze! They had to be told! Didn't either of them ever hear of Locked-In-The-CLoset? the kissing game? You get locked in for X# of minutes and you are supposed to kiss. Surely someone of Snape's or Hermione's intelligence could have figured that one out. LOLPoor Argus, got a shock and extra work. Adorable story. Thanks for sharing.
Response from MomoDesu (Author of Just Look Up)
Isn't there a saying along the lines of 'even the smartest people can be dense'? That seems to be the case with those two. And who would suspect Remus of playing tricks? Sweet, lil' ol' Remus?I'm glad you enjoyed it.Thanks for reading, and leaving a review!Momo
For two people who only had 'respect' for one another, they sure seem fond of each other! Nice story.
Response from MomoDesu (Author of Just Look Up)
Thanks!Momo
This was great--and it probably wasn't magically locked after all, which makes it even funnier! I think both Remus and Minerva ought to lay low for a couple of days, no matter how well things turned out... 
Just to be safe...
Response from MomoDesu (Author of Just Look Up)
Was the door magically locked? To quote the old tootsie pop commercials: "And the world will never know." Thanks for reading, and leaving a review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Momo
I love it when the whole of Hogwarts conspires to help Snape get the stick out of his arse. Well done!
Response from MomoDesu (Author of Just Look Up)
Thank you very much!Momo
Eeek! Evil Remus and Minerva. Then again, it was for a good cause... Very nice!
Response from MomoDesu (Author of Just Look Up)
Yup. A great cause. They are both Gryffindor after all! They can't just let such a cause pass them by. ^_^Thanks for reading and reviewing!Momo
what a delightful story. i loved the see-sawing back and forth between insults and friendlyness. great story. thanks and mucho smoochies
Response from MomoDesu (Author of Just Look Up)
Thank you so much! That was my first SS/HG piece, so your praise means a lot to me. Again, thank you ^^
I had read this last year and forgot how good it was.
Response from MomoDesu (Author of Just Look Up)
Thank you very much ^^