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Dark Clouds
Hanagasume12 Reviews | 7.17/10 (12 Ratings, 0 Likes, 27 Favorites )
Hermione Granger is a married woman, and Severus Snape is a man who doesn't really care about that. With Christmas looming right ahead of them, Hermione has a decision to make... Written for the Granger Enchanted Christmas Challenge '08, using prompt #6.
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Hanagasume
Member Since 2008 | 31 Stories | Favorited by 246 | 119 Reviews Written | 1,704 Review Responses
I write fan fiction: I am a big SS/HG shipper, but I also like RL/HG, DM/LL and tastefully written Dramione or Lumione on occasion.
I photoshop: I use photoshop an awful lot to create my own banners and edit photos - I love my DSLR.
I am a bibliophile: Paperback, hardcover, graphic novel, fiction or non-fiction. You name it, I read it and collect it.
SEVERUS SNAPE IS MY ONE TRUE LOVE!!!
Reviews for Dark Clouds
Wonderful! I wish there was more!
This story has everything, Longing, romance, betrayal, love, and hot sex. I enjoyed it so much.Very well written.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Dark Clouds)
Thank you very much :) I am glad it was enjoyable for you to read. Thanks for leaving me a review! A~
This is such a well written story of love postponed. I could understand, not necessarily approving of infidelity, but I could understand how the situation could occur. In today's fast paced world, I wonder that more people don't find themselves in very similar circumstances — couples, each married to their second choice, and then find after a time that the one they had given up on was the right one for them.I can't tell you how relieved I was to find that Charlie had been cheating on Hermione already. It was sad for her to find out about it, especially the way she did, but it did free her and Severus to claim the love they had felt for one another for years.I was reading some of the reviews and clapped my hands when I saw that you're planning a short, multi-chap follow up! Yay! for you, Angela!!!A Thousand Points to Your House! Beth
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Dark Clouds)
Thank you so much Beth!You have no idea how much it means to me!And it's Ravenclaw, by the way ;pThe first chapter of the follow-up is already complete,so its all a matter of having it read by my beta,and waiting until at least "WCC" is complete before I upload. *big hug*Angela~~
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Well done! All right, probably not too much christmassy, but fitting in the mood some people have ove the festivities very well, I think.
Generally, I wouldn't consider Hermione's reaction to be one I could easily accept - after all, she's about to do exactly te same as Charlie - but it works really well in the plot.
Author's Response: Haha thanks!
I do realise that Hermione's reaction may be a bit much,
but I will be explaining this further in the near future.
A follow-up will be along shortly.
Thanks for reviewing!
xo.
i thot it was delicious! altho i don't generally like cheating stories ("married to another") this was excellently done. thanks so much
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Dark Clouds)
Thanks so much!I'm not a fan of writing them much either!xo.
Woow. That was amazing!! Can we have more like this LOL!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Dark Clouds)
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Response from Hanagasume (Author of Dark Clouds)
Hehe, certainly you can!It'll just take a little time for me to get used to writing lemons! ;pI am currently working on a short multi-chap follow-up story!Thanks for reviewing!xo.
Response from Nessa (Reviewer)
I'll certainly look forward to the follow-up!
I do love a good intrigue, and this was a lovely story. Mutual infifelity aside, it is good that both Hermione and Charlie are figuring out that they are not well suited. Great Job, and dw about being off-track!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Dark Clouds)
Thanks for that!I am still working on a short follow-up.There is much more to be explained yet!xo.
Mutual infidelity. Hmm. I can see it happening if each are tempted with the love they though was previous unattainable to them and they were not "in love" with their spouse. It would reinforce they were married to the wrong person. In fact it appears both Charlie and Hermione might have settled for their second choice.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Dark Clouds)
I'm sure it happens a lot.It was sort of just an experiment - this story.To see if I could write about infedelity at all.I will likely follow it up and try and explain things a little more.Thanks for reviewing!xo.
I liked it a lot. And I think loads of relationships get rekindled or started during the holidays. I would say you hit the mark rather well!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Dark Clouds)
Hehe thanks!I know what its like to begin relationships on a holiday!'Tis the season for romance after all!Thanks for reviewing!xo.
I really liked it. I wish there was more, like a Charlie confrontation.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Dark Clouds)
Lol, I probably wont write any more though. Thanks for reviewing.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Dark Clouds)
Lol, I probably wont write any more though. Thanks for reviewing.
This was a nice little story, I liked it. I would have liked to see what happened with their relationship, and Hermiones marriage with Charlie, but I dont know where you would have gone with that, so its probably better you stopped her. Good job.
Looks like everyone had a very merry naked Christmas indeed!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Dark Clouds)
Merry, naked and Christmas are my middle names (as if, but its fun to say!) Thanks for the review!