The Petulant Poetess
  • Stories
  • Browse By
    • Category
    • Character
    • Genre
    • Author
  • Info
      Useful Info
    • General Information
    • Message Board
    • Membership & Story Ratings
    • Submission Rules
    • Important Links
    • Support The Petulant Poetess
    • Writers' Resources
    • Punctuation Guide
    • Writing Fan Fiction
    • Harry Potter Resources
    • Dictionaries
    • Beta Resources
  • Create an Account
    • Create an Account
    • Sign In
Hogwarts Castle Harry and His New Family
Chapters Menu
Download PDF Version

New Chapter for Harry and His New Family

Harry and His New Family

1: Chapter 1 - On the Train

2: Chapter 2 – No Sleep Found

3: Chapter 3 – The Confrontation

4: Chapter 4 – Meeting Madam Pomfrey

5: Chapter 5 – The Examination, Part One

6: Chapter 6 – The Examination, Part Two

7: Chapter 7 – Professor Dumbledore-Snape

8: Chapter 8 – Best Friends

9: Chapter 9 - The Talk with Albus

10: Chapter 10 - The Nervous Breakdown

11: Chapter 11 - Poppy in Distress

12: Chapter 12 – Harry's New Home

13: Chapter 13 – The Round Tour I

14: Chapter 14 – The Round Tour II

15: Chapter 15 – Paul

16: Chapter 16 – Problems Again

17: Chapter 17 - Breakfast

18: Chapter 18 - James

19: Chapter 19 - Decorating

20: Chapter 20 - Ron and Hermione

21: Chapter 21 – Hard to Accept

22: Chapter 22 – Remus' Visit

23: Chapter 23 – Stupid Ron

24: Chapter 24 – The Shopping

25: Chapter 25 – End of the Guardianship

26: Chapter 26 – Talking with James

27: Chapter 27 - The Twins

28: Chapter 28 – Getting Into Trouble

29: Chapter 29 – Talk about Punishment

30: Chapter 30 - Reasons

31: Chapter 31 - Punishment

32: Chapter 32 - Albus vs. Severus

Harry and His New Family

grugster

178 Reviews   |   178 Ratings, 0 Likes, 69 Favorites )

Alternate Universe General Psychological Friendship Hogwarts Castle 66,011 Words 32 Chapters WIP
Albus Dumbledore Fred Weasley George Weasley Harry Potter Hermione Granger Original Character Poppy Pomfrey Ronald Weasley Severus Snape Tom Riddle (Voldemort) Minerva McGonagall Rubeus Hagrid Alastor (Mad-Eye) Moody Remus Lupin Draco Malfoy

Harry is getting abused by his relatives. When Snape and his wife find out about it, they adopt him. So now he has two little twin brothers and caring family to cope with.

Start Reading

Chapters (32)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - On the Train

Chapter 2: Chapter 2 – No Sleep Found

Chapter 3: Chapter 3 – The Confrontation

Chapter 4: Chapter 4 – Meeting Madam Pomfrey

Chapter 5: Chapter 5 – The Examination, Part One

Chapter 6: Chapter 6 – The Examination, Part Two

Chapter 7: Chapter 7 – Professor Dumbledore-Snape

Chapter 8: Chapter 8 – Best Friends

Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - The Talk with Albus

Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - The Nervous Breakdown

Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Poppy in Distress

Chapter 12: Chapter 12 – Harry's New Home

Chapter 13: Chapter 13 – The Round Tour I

Chapter 14: Chapter 14 – The Round Tour II

Chapter 15: Chapter 15 – Paul

Chapter 16: Chapter 16 – Problems Again

Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Breakfast

Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - James

Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Decorating

Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Ron and Hermione

Chapter 21: Chapter 21 – Hard to Accept

Chapter 22: Chapter 22 – Remus' Visit

Chapter 23: Chapter 23 – Stupid Ron

Chapter 24: Chapter 24 – The Shopping

Chapter 25: Chapter 25 – End of the Guardianship

Chapter 26: Chapter 26 – Talking with James

Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - The Twins

Chapter 28: Chapter 28 – Getting Into Trouble

Chapter 29: Chapter 29 – Talk about Punishment

Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Reasons

Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - Punishment

Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Albus vs. Severus


About grugster

Validated
Author

grugster

Member Since 2005  |  6 Stories  |  Favorited by 17  |  7 Reviews Written  |  472 Review Responses


Hi,


I absolutly love fanfiction but I never thought I would write one myself. But when Healer Pomfrey put up a contest I decided to write a stroy for it! The result was my story "Everything will be okay soon" !

I'm a social worker in a children shelter for abused, hard to educate and/or criminal girls.


Bye Sunny

Author Website
http://grugster.deviantart.com
Also Archived At
http://www.fanfiction.net/u/721716/

Reviews for Harry and His New Family

Displaying Review 1 - 25 of 178 in total
← Previous 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 Next →
10/10

imahdreamer

Please post more! i have become obsessed!

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

I no longer have a beta, who is good enough for this page. Therefore you can only find all my chapter and even the sequel to this story on fanfiction(dot)net.

Response from imahdreamer (Reviewer)

Aww. i am no longer allowed to that website, i crashed almost four computers on fanfiction.       it is an amazing story, and very wonderful to read!

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

I no longer have a beta, who is good enough for this page. Therefore you can only find all my chapter and even the sequel to this story on fanfiction(dot)net.

Response from imahdreamer (Reviewer)

Aww. i am no longer allowed to that website, i crashed almost four computers on fanfiction.       it is an amazing story, and very wonderful to read!

10/10

Marty21

Loving this story so far. Please keep up the good work and I can't wait to read more.

10/10

snitchette

I trully wonder what punishment Severus will think appropriate for the two. I hope it will involve the two of them together so maybe they can start to get along better.

10/10

Red_Garnet

hehe awesome chapter....hehe i already read it all at fanfiction! your stories are soo awesome! hehe please update all your stories soon! in Ashwinder, PP, and FF! hehe thanks "Cheers"

0/10

j_mckay91

awesome update. i really like the way this story is written. can't wait for more

0/10

kimjo2

*sigh*  it's going to take time.  i hope maybe he and draco can become friends...draco needs real friends.  great update.  thanks and smoochies

10/10

Red_Garnet

aww, come on....please? rly i don't know how changed ur fics are in ff.net but I'm reading over there....and when u upload i'll read over here to see the differences... so....update for your poor fans, eh? thx

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

The next chapter is in the queue already. So I hope it will be up in a few days.Thanks for your review!

10/10

Red_Garnet

I think I'm about to keel over and die right now. I hate cliffhangers. This is an awesome story, please update as soon as you have time. Please. Siriusly. :) "Cheers",

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Thank you very much for your review!

8/10

zenobia

I hate all the draco's of the world.I always looking forward to your story.

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Thank you very much for your review!

10/10

snitchette

Bad author who mistreats her poor reasdrs with evil cliffies *stick out tongue*

BTW I was wondering if you're planning to update your other story about little Severus?

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

I would love to update "A better childhood" but I can't find a beta. :( If you know someone who could help me or if you would help me, it would be great. Otherwise you need to read the not so perfectly edited version on fanfiction(dot)net. There is even a sequal up for it. Thank you very, very much for your review! 

Response from snitchette (Reviewer)

I'm awful at grammar and punctuation but I help with the missing words and such. Try asking SouthernWitch. She's very kind and a wonderful beta. Now I will check FFnet becauseI miss that little fellow a great deal.

0/10

chinoslady

Please finish this story I love it it is very compelling could not stop reading read it in 3 hours.

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

This story already is finished, just not on this site because my chapters need a lot of editing to make them acceptable for this site. So no worries, it is finished and if my beta doesn't leave me, it will be uploaded here as long as I get feedback.Thank you very much for your review!

10/10

esmelle

Same old Draco, kicking someone when they are already down.  I hope Severus will be wise enough not to believe Draco's version of events.  Good chapter. 

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Thank you very much for your review!

9/10

MsTree

It's not a bad little story. But you don't update fast enough to suit me. ^_^

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Yes, it's hard to make my chapters to be accepted here. That's why the updates take so long. :( Sorry. Thank you very much for your review!

0/10

liviconnor

Don't be depressed!  I thought your Weasley twins were rather over the top (honestly?  Calling his dead mother 'hot?' tasteless) but overall helpful.  After all, if the wild Weasleys get along with Snape, surely Harry can.  As for Draco, I'm sure Severus will be able to figure out what happened.  Even if Draco gave him the best story ever told, Harry's complete freakout would tell a rather more convincing version.

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Yes, I thought long about leaving them be like I wrote them, but then I decided it would be okay. Thank you very much for your review!

10/10

Red_Garnet

I am about to get a f*cking heart attack right now. Your story is so friggin' awesome! I totally loff it. :) Awesome chapter. Hope you have another up soon. :) "Cheers",

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

And I love your review! :) Thank you for it! This story is already finished, but only on fanfiction(dot)net. It costs me a lot of efford and betas to make the chapters grammatically correct, so they will be accepted here. It surely will take me years to finish it here on this site. I'm glad you and some others are patient enough!Sunny

10/10

snitchette

I'll try again. This one person that he doesn't want to speak with must be *drumble sound* Draco maybe? What do you think? And I think th etwins may be too right. That's easy to get Sev on your side once you've got past the bat persona. I suite like this Severus very much. He seems really approachable.

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Well guessed! :)Thank you very much for your review!

0/10

esmelle

I wonder who is at the door. James is a great therapist and Harry seems to be making progress. Interaction between Snape and the twins was funny. Good chapter.

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Thank you very much for your review!

10/10

snitchette

I really like Jame. He seems to be of great help for Harry. As for the person knocking at the door, I'd guess it's maybe Ginny. Am I close?

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

No, not Ginny. :) But with red hair too! Thank you very much for your review!

0/10

kimjo2

ron is such a clueless prat!  loved the interaction between sev and harry.  great update.  thanks and mucho smoochies

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Thank you very much for your review!

10/10

snitchette

That's so nice to see Harry opening up and relatively relaxed. Also thanks for the longer chapter.

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

The later chapters will be much longer then my first ones. My writing style changed as well. The story has 84 chapters!Thank you very much for your review!

Response from snitchette (Reviewer)

84!! WOW !! I long to read them all.

0/10

kimjo2

altho i know severus would hate to be called sweet, that was a very sweet thing he did.  lovely story.  can't wait for the trip to diagon alley!  thanks and mucho smoochies

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Thank you very much for your review!

10/10

snitchette

It's hard for Harry to reconcile the previous severus with this one. I'm sure with time things will go better.

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Thank you very much for your review!

0/10

feisanna

glad you updated, you're take on the paternal Severus/Harry is new, especially with Harry's issues.  thanks for the posting

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Thank you very much for your review!

0/10

liviconnor

So, I'm pretty sure friendlily isn't a word, but really I'd never have known that English is your second (or third, or fourth) language.  Either you have an exceptional Beta or you're crazy good at this.  Heck, even native speakers need a good beta or two to keep their punctuation in line. Some of your sentences are a bit short or choppy, but aside from one sentence fragment, "Then the twisted cruel smirk as he raised his arm," you're scott-free.  And what's more, I'm hooked.  Good writing!  And may I ask, what IS your first language?

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

German is my first language, and I have two VERY GOOD betas for this story!!! I hate that I only can write those short sentences. I try very hard to be better, but until now I fail. :( I hope that one day that will change. My writing style has changed a lot over the last month. I finished this story a week ago with 84 chapters. If you don't loose interest in the story after the first chapter, I promise the second half of the fic will be much better.I hope you will like the rest of the story as well.Sunny

10/10

esmelle

Great chapter title, very appropriate. Thanks for the update, looking forward to the shopping.

Response from grugster (Author of Harry and His New Family)

Thank you very much for your review!

Displaying Review 1 - 25 of 178 in total
← Previous 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 Next →

The Petulant Poetess

A moderated archive, hosting stories by authors who enjoy dabbling in the wonderful world of Harry Potter fanfiction.

More About The Petulant Poetess

© Copyrights. All rights reserved. ThePetulantPoetess.com

Explore

  • All Stories
  • by Author
  • by Category
  • by Character
  • by Genre

Links

  • General Information
  • Terms and Conditions
  • Message Board
  • Writers' Resources
  • Submission Rules