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Yule 2008 Challenge Ave Maria
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Ave Maria

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Ave Maria

kizzy7

33 Reviews   |   33 Ratings, 0 Likes, 46 Favorites )

Angst Romance Yule 2008 Challenge 2,529 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Hermione is alone in Hogsmeade on Christmas Eve.

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Chapter 1: Ave Maria


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0/10

TheCopperDragon2004

Poor hermione, thinking Snape is out running around on her on Christmas eve! What a nice surprise though.

10/10

beaweasley2

Ah, what a lovely Christmas story. I really like the way it turned out. Misunderstandings can be such a bother, can't they?

10/10

lilyreally

Oh, I want to live in that house!

What a sweet story!

Thanks kizzy7 

0/10

kimjo2

oh, kizzy!  you made me cry!  that was so sad and so joyous at the end.  thanks so much and a blessed new year to you and yours.

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Ave Maria)

~tissue~ I must admit, I sniffled a bit while writing this! So glad you enjoyed, kim. Hope you had a very Merry Christmas, and may your 2009 be blessed as well! *hugs* ~kizzy

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

I enjoyed this very much. :)

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Ave Maria)

Oh, thank you, SW! You've made my day! Hope you had a very Merry Christmas!!

9/10

apisa_b

I as good as felt Hermione's pain, which resulted in a constricted throat and watery eyes. Hell, how could he do this to her? And on Christmas Eve to boot!Thankfully it was just a misunderstanding.See what emotions you were able to evoke in a reader?

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Ave Maria)

*hands you a tissue* Ah, see, he thought he was doing something sweet. Of course, being rather thickheaded when it comes to matters of the heart, he went around it in the wrong way. But it turned out for the best!! Thank you so much,

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Ave Maria)

!! I hope that you had a wonderful Christmas!

10/10

karelia

This was absolutely lovely. Everything was right, from Hermione's misery, which you portrayed with such perfection, to the happy, happy ending. Well done!

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Ave Maria)

Thank you, ladyinthecloak! I know I did feel bad for Hermione, but it turned out for the best! I hope that you had a very Merry Christmas!

9/10

StormySkize

Oh, I love stories like this. There are secrets as one partner plots to surprise the other. There are misunderstandings as the other partner misinterprets the first one's secretiveness. There is anger, and sometimes tears during the inevitable confrontation. And then there is kissing and making up as true motives and hidden insecurities are revealed.This was a lovely bit of dramatic fluff (or fluffy drama!)A perfect read at the end of a quiet, peaceful Christmas.Thanks for sharing.

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Ave Maria)

Thank you,

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Ave Maria)

! Ah, misunderstandings. Happens in so many relationships! Luckily, it worked out here for the best. Fluffy drama! Yes. I like that category! Thank you, and I hope that you had a wonderful Christmas!!

10/10

ylang_two

This delivers like Santa.  I knew you wouldn't really skewer our OTP with angst on Christmas Eve!!  Thank you.

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Ave Maria)

*chuckles evilly* No. They deserve a happy Christmas, those two. Merry Christmas,

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Ave Maria)

!f

10/10

Kore

And what a twist! Silly Hermione, she should know better than to expect that of dear Severus! lol

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Ave Maria)

My thoughts exactly,

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Ave Maria)

! Thanks for reading and reviewing, and Merry Christmas!

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Lysithea

Oh, this is a nice little christmas story, love how it ends.

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Ave Maria)

Thank you,

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Ave Maria)

! Merry Christmas to you!

9/10

kittylefish

this is a nice read - just enough drama to make the happy ending sweet. (silly hermione,letting her insecurity get the better of her.)

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Ave Maria)

Ah, drama. I find that I can't help but write drama! Even on Christmas-- but of course the ending had to be happy. Thanks, kitty. Merry Christmas!

10/10

debjunk

Aw, kizzy, that was simply perfect!  I loved that Rosmerta backed her up, showing that Hermione wasn't overreacting.Such a sweet gift from Severus.  He showed his love for her in a truly beautiful way.

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Ave Maria)

Thanks, deb! Yes, well, he did seemingly deserve it! But our Severus always pulls through in the end! Merry Christmas!

8/10

imhilien

A good and dramatic story, thank you. :)

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Ave Maria)

Thanks,

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Ave Maria)

! Merry Christmas to you!

10/10

snitchette

I'm so glad there is a happy ending. It's such a sweet story.

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Ave Maria)

Thank you,

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Ave Maria)

! Merry Christmas!

10/10

Mint Stick

You had me in tears half-way through it... and then that wonderful twist (I mean, I knew there had to be a misunderstanding, as it's impossible to have a SSHG Christmas story that ends badly! but my heart just went out for Hermione) made it all well, again.Merry Christmas, and thank you for the story!

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Ave Maria)

Oh, thank you,

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Ave Maria)

! I have to admit, I was a bit teary-eyed when I was writing the part where Hermione tells Sev off, and I knew what was going to happen! And of course, he would never cheat on his Hermione. Especially not in a Christmas fic! Merry Christmas to you as well!!

0/10

sunny33

Aww, Kizzy, that was sweet!

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Ave Maria)

;-) Thanks!

Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)

Oops, how did I do that twice?

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sunny33

Aww, Kizzy, that was sweet!

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Ave Maria)

Thanks, sunny! You're such a sweetheart! Merry Christmas!!

0/10

michiruwater

My name is Charlotte ;)I've always found it rather amusing that my name rhymes with nothing good - harlot, scarlet, starlette. But I do rather like it, in the end.Nice fic.

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Ave Maria)

;-) I think that Charlotte is a lovely name, I really do. Always reminds me of Pride and Prejudice, sigh. It just worked here, do forgive Hermione! Thanks for reading and reviewing, and Happy Holidays, Charlotte! ~kizzy aka Kristie.

10/10

Muggline

...and even more Christmas fluff... you are so wonderful, ladies!

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Ave Maria)

Oh, thank you,

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Ave Maria)

! Merry Christmas, dear!

10/10

sregner

My favorite song too, Hermione!  Thanks for the early Xmas gift...happy holidays

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Ave Maria)

I absolutely love that song! Thanks for reading and reviewing, sregnor! Happy Holidays!

10/10

neelix

Ha! I was almost convinced that he really was having an affair for a brief nano-second. The I remembered that Severus Loves Hermione forever 2gether....and I started to relax! Brilliant work, honey xx

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Ave Maria)

Forever and ever and ever! lol. Thanks, dear. Merry Christmas,

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Ave Maria)

. *hugs*

10/10

braye27

What a marvelously written Christmas story!  First I am sad, then I am wringing my hands, and them I'm smiling broadly!!!Thank you, and Merry Christmas!Beth

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Ave Maria)

Oh, thank you, Beth! So glad you enjoyed! Merry Christmas to you as well! ~kizzy

0/10

HermioneJeanSnape

Gorgeous imagery! Lovely sudden change of events, thank goodness Severus wasn't cheating! Lemons would have been highly welcome ;)Merry Christmas!

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Ave Maria)

Thanks! ;-)

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HermioneJeanSnape

Gorgeous imagery! Lovely sudden change of events, thank goodness Severus wasn't cheating! Lemons would have been highly welcome ;)Merry Christmas!

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Ave Maria)

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Ave Maria)

(and what a wonderful username that is!), thank you for reading and reviewing; I really appreciate it! Severus would definitely not cheat on his Hermione! Lemons are always welcome, lol. Merry Christmas to you as well!

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