Losing the Bet
kittylefish16 Reviews | 6.81/10 (16 Ratings, 0 Likes, 17 Favorites )
When Lucius loses a bet to Severus, how will he have to pay?
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my catalyst into the world of hp fanfic was the ignominious death of severus snape by snakebite in dh. grrrrr. he deserved better, and i set off on a mission to find it! i appreciate and admire the vast and limitless creativity of all of the wonderful writers on this site and in this fandom.
accordingly, for me it's mostly about snape: ss/le, ss/hg, ss/rl are my favorite ships. i especially like happy endings for those who did not get them at the hands of jkr.
Reviews for Losing the Bet
Lucius as "a tarted up bumble bee" I fear I'll never be able to escape that mental picture. Those naughty boys!
Response from kittylefish (Author of Losing the Bet)
they are very naughty indeed. i hope that mental picture makes you giggle, as it still does me. thanks for the pretty shinies. :D
Oh...oh wow. That was unexpectedly hot. Kudos. I have to go fan myself.
Response from kittylefish (Author of Losing the Bet)
thanks! *hands you a fan* ;)
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That was shmexy! I liked it a lot! Men in drag are so hot, especially when they are just that -- men, and not pretty little boys.
Now, how about a little 'turnabout is fair play'? Lucius wins, Severus loses, and our dear Potions master must dress in drag? Hm?
Author's Response: hey! don't go reading my mind. that's not fair.
glad you liked it. men in drag! rowr!
Okay, I was tempted by the image of Lucius in fishnet and corset. And? That was hot, hot, hot. Hot. Loved that you put Lucius in Hufflepuff colors, hehe. He'd love that, I'm sure. Oh, and Dom!Snape is freakin' hot! ~wipes brow~
Response from kittylefish (Author of Losing the Bet)
you succumbed to temptation. tee hee. so glad you liked it. :)
Do you think he will lose on purpose?
Response from kittylefish (Author of Losing the Bet)
i think he just might, in order to repeat an experience he liked more than he expected to.
Oh, this was fabulous. I LOVE that Lucius was plotting further ways to loose bets to Severus. Always knew he was a closet sub.
Response from kittylefish (Author of Losing the Bet)
oh, you knew that did you? it kind of caught me by surprise. ;) glad you liked it.PajamaPants's response: Alright.... I didn't always know.But it certainly fell in line with the 'Hermione is a sub because she has to be in control in all other areas of her life' school of thought. I mean, with the exception of brawling in Flourish and Blotts with Arthur Weasley, I'm sure the man never looses his cool (unless he intends to).:)
Response from kittylefish (Author of Losing the Bet)
yes, that's exactly why i think he'd enjoy not having to be in control for a change.
Just what I needed at a boring day at work, dear - thanks for sharing this wonderful, dirty tale!
Response from kittylefish (Author of Losing the Bet)
i'm so glad it brightened your day! thanks for your initial positive response which helped embolden me to share it. :D
I very rarely read slash, but this was well worth it--especially for the image of Lucius dressed as a "tarted up bumble bee" and licking Snape's boots. ;)
Response from kittylefish (Author of Losing the Bet)
i'm so glad you took the plunge for my little story! thanks for letting me know your favorite parts. *giggles*
Let's hope he remembered to transfigure his platforms. lol A very hot and naughty read!
Response from kittylefish (Author of Losing the Bet)
LOL! now i'm seeing him hobbling away on the platforms. thanks!
Uh yumme!
Response from kittylefish (Author of Losing the Bet)
glad you thought so! thanks for telling me. :)
This entire story was wonderful! My favorite line, and it made me laugh out loud, is when Lucius is looking at the outfit Severus required that he wear: "He felt like a tarted up bumble bee." This line is priceless!!!!!Well done!
Response from kittylefish (Author of Losing the Bet)
thanks for your lovely review! i like that line, too, and i'm glad it made you laugh out loud! :D
The bumblebee got stung! Great story... enjoyed every line. Was that last bit a hint that there may be more?
Response from kittylefish (Author of Losing the Bet)
*giggles* thanks so much for your lovely review. as to whether there might be more - i didn't think so when i wrote it, but sometimes these things take on a life of their own, and this one was giving some indication that it might want another chapter. or possibly two. we'll have to see.
Yesssss! This was definitely one of the hottest reads this year! Well done, you! 
Response from kittylefish (Author of Losing the Bet)
thank you so much! *beams* (and i'm pretty sure it owes its existence to your having made lucius more palatable to me.)
thank you for getting Barbie!Deatheater Lucius arse smacked.Cheers MoepiAKA Michele
Response from kittylefish (Author of Losing the Bet)
barbie!deatheater lucius! roflmao!thanks for the review. :)
Please go to your friends and TALK WITH THEM RIGHT NOW. The result is more than satisfying...
Response from kittylefish (Author of Losing the Bet)
i'm so glad you liked it. :D