A very emotional tale with enough feasibility to be considered an alternate ending to the battle. Nicely written with just a few minor grammatical/wording boo-boos.

Elura

A very powerful story.  I most certainly would not object if you wrote "the continuing adventures of" in this little corner of the universe. (And not just erotica -- perhaps a bit of Hermione and Severus plotting together? etc.)

In other words: Sequel, please! (if you feel so inclined)  Your Severus in this story is so very human and real. I would like to see more of your Hermione in this as well.

This is  a great story.

I have read this story several time on various sites.  I would love to see a sequel in which Hermione and Severus either escape or destroy the Dark Lord.

I have read this story several time on various sites.  I would love to see a sequel in which Hermione and Severus either escape or destroy the Dark Lord.

Intreging start... Hmmm are they really all dead??? I guess I will just have to keep on reading when you update next to find out.

Cheers, Sonia (kabrax@dodo.com.au)

I like this a lot! And I hope you'll do a sequel.

this is good, i would like to see more. how their relationship changed, what happens when the baby is born. will they ever be able to marry?... it was enjoyable. write more,

Goodness, this was amazing. They are so precious together and couldn't help but tear up on the hopelessness of their situation. I wished you could continue this story. Maybe add another chapter:)

You are truly an amazing author and have a way with words.  I can't wait to see what else you have on this site.  Tamara

This is such a wonderfull start to a story, are you going to leave it as is or are willing to continue it?

 This story has left an opening for a sequal which I hope you will take advantage of.  I would love to know the baby's gender and if Hermione and Severus ever get their wish to marry.