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Tale of the Nightshirt Chapter 12: Mirror Image
Chapters Menu
Tale of the Nightshirt

1: Lights Out

2: Rising Sun

3: Flight of Fancy

4: Wandering Hands

5: Circumnavigation

6: Mercury Rising

7: Across the Bows

8: Relative Properties

9: Reverberation

10: Need to Know

11: Need to Know II

12: Mirror Image

13: Mud-slinging

14: Foundations

15: mea culpa

16: Small Steps

17: Inverse Function

18: A Touch of the Blues

19: Greeting the Day

20: Work Ethics

Mirror Image

Tale of the Nightshirt

Chapter 12 of 20

Ladymage Samiko

Sometimes we see only what we want to see.

Drama Romance General Drabble/100-Word GrangerSnape100 12,141 Words 20 Chapters WIP
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Mirror Image

Her loose shirt was black, not grey, and thankfully, she wore a pair of shorts as well. Not that he was looking. “What is it, Snape?” He blinked at her curtness.

“I—“ He hunted for proper words. “You look bloody awful.” Not something he’d meant to say. True, however. The black emphasized her pallor, and dark circles rimmed her eyes.

“Thank you so much,” she replied sourly. “If that’s all? Or would you like to insult my intelligence, as well?”

“I—“

“You keep saying that.”

“I apologise.”

She stared at him for a moment, then sighed. “You’d better come in.”


The interior of the flat was in marginally better condition; it was overstuffed with research materials, but they were at least organised by some idiosyncratic, Byzantine method— which didn’t hide the inch of dust on various surfaces, nor the piles of dishes and take-away cartons in the kitchen.

But at least the cartons showed that she’d been eating.

She started to make tea and seemed confused when she couldn’t find clean cups. Observing her narrowly, Severus couldn’t discern any sign of post-curse relapse. Perhaps the idiots had simply been starting at shadows. And wasting a good deal of his time.


Hermione winced slightly when she bent to give Severus his tea, and she could tell that he noticed. Well, bully for him. “So what brings you to my doorstep?” she asked. She hadn’t the energy to reciprocate his nastiness. “I thought I’d given the Ministry their weekly pound of flesh— and so had you.”

“I have,” he answered evenly, sipping the English Breakfast.

“Then you’re here merely to insult me? You can do that more easily at work, you know.”

He shrugged. “My comment earlier was an honest, if inadvertent, reaction rather than an intentional insult. You do look awful.”


“Is ‘awful’ your general opinion of my appearance, sir, or specific to this evening?” Hermione asked waspishly.

Snape made an exasperated sound. “Come, girl, haven’t you even glanced at a mirror recently?”

“I don’t see what that—“ Hermione broke off with a squawk as he grabbed her wrist and towed her into the bathroom. She blinked at the image in the mirror before her. “Oh.” Her customary hair and makeup charms were now so ingrained that she rarely bothered to consult a mirror; she hadn’t realised how run down she’d become. It wasn’t too bad, but it certainly wasn’t good.


“Am I now quite clear?” Snape grated.

Hermione nodded. “I hadn’t realised…” She sighed.

“Would you care to explain yourself, Miss Granger?” “Professor” Snape was certainly in attendence.

“I don’t see why I need to explain myself to you.” She was ten years from being his student, damn it. “I’m sorry if I alarmed you, but it’s really none of your business.”

She grit her teeth as his fingers bit into her shoulder. “Then perhaps you might explain yourself to your two hysterical friends,” he hissed, “or does ‘after-the-war bad’ not mean anything to you?”

“Oh. Oh, dear. Oh, damn.”


AN: See, I can keep my word! The 'real' chapter is up before close of business. I hope you've enjoyed; Hermione will be explaining herself in the next batch! Thank you and if possible, please leave a small token in the review box.

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Latest 25 Reviews for Tale of the Nightshirt

318 Reviews  |  5.46/10 Average

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Minerva

Later? I certainly hope to read more of this two ...
Thank you again for this wonderful tale.

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mick42

A blue chapter indeed.

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mick42

Two minds are brgining to think as one.

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mick42

Bangers and mash, could be a ''pet'' name , for one or even both of them.

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mick42

The walking wounded are seldom noticed.

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mick42

They both have more than their fair share of baggage, prehaps they can help eachother carry the load.

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mick42

Oh dear, I hope Severus isn't going to strike back.

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mick42

 " After the war bad " must be bad.

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mick42

I'm glad he went to Minerva.

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mick42

He sees so much, and is so blind at the same time.

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mick42

Is Severus about to put his foot in it again.

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mick42

Oh Merlin! they are a pretty pair.

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mick42

Go! Hermione, that's what he gets for looking a gift horse in the mouth, dunderhead.

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mick42

Ahh Gryffindors, got to love them.

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mick42

I'm not sure what he wanted when he first knocked on her door, but I think I may have an inkling of what he what he wants now.

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mick42

I'm with Hermione, anyone that wakes me in the middle of the night, needs a crash helmet.

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mick42

 He survived the war, only to be brought to his knees by a nightshirt. 

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mick42

ERRAND BOY!!! the ungrateful bastards!

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mick42

Awww, he slept on her nightshirt.

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Teal

"Curse it, Severus.  I nearly wet myself!"  Ahh, yes, they are truly meant for each other.  Please, keep those chapters coming.  Thanks.

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sunny33

LOL. That was a sneaky move.  Worked well to upset the boys. :)

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Jinxie

Too funny on him tickling her, to make the boys think the worst!  Looking forward to seeing what happens next!

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HBAR

Wonderful, as always.

8/10

bedworm

Your story has been very entertaining to read, particularly this last chapter. I'll enjoy reading more of it whenever it comes.

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snitchette

The boys are going to have a hard attack if the two continue like this. First the shocking news then the shoking position. One more and they're dead on the spot.

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