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Tale of the Nightshirt Chapter 6: Mercury Rising
Chapters Menu
Tale of the Nightshirt

1: Lights Out

2: Rising Sun

3: Flight of Fancy

4: Wandering Hands

5: Circumnavigation

6: Mercury Rising

7: Across the Bows

8: Relative Properties

9: Reverberation

10: Need to Know

11: Need to Know II

12: Mirror Image

13: Mud-slinging

14: Foundations

15: mea culpa

16: Small Steps

17: Inverse Function

18: A Touch of the Blues

19: Greeting the Day

20: Work Ethics

Mercury Rising

Tale of the Nightshirt

Chapter 6 of 20

Ladymage Samiko

Both Hermione and Severus find their… perspectives… changing.

Drama Romance General Drabble/100-Word GrangerSnape100 12,141 Words 20 Chapters WIP
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Mercury Rising

Dinner was rather stilted, conversation occurring in awkward fits and starts. Snape was attempting to deal with his mortification and, as a consequence, was taciturn, though manners kept him from being a completely surly git. Hermione, for her part, was realizing the down-side of having Snape see her as a woman: she was seeing him as a man. (Instead of a professor, a very different entity.)

In fact, an entirely different entity.

Oh, he hadn't changed. She knew that. He was still a snarky, homely man, but sitting across from him at the dinner table, she began to notice… things.


His hands. Hermione had never really looked at them before. But now she noticed that they were large hands, and sinewy, rather like daVinci's 'David.' Long fingers, moving with deft precision as he manipulated his utensils. Would they manipulate her with that same dexterity? What would they be like to the touch? Smooth and well-tended as valued instruments? Or calloused and scarred from accidents and labour? How would they feel as they trailed down her body and…?

Hermione flushed and refocused her attention on her plate. Food. Yes. Food was good. Necessary. Prosaic. Certainly nothing suggestive of sex, except… Damn.


He'd noticed Hermione's high colour during dinner and attributed it to frustration at his continued presence. After all, he wasn't a pleasant conversationalist by any standard, and this mess had begun with him staring at her legs. She'd very nice ones, honestly, but he doubted he was someone she wanted looking. Even if it was her own bloody fault he had. Women were like that. Why else the black eye?

But they were nice legs. Come to think of it, the breasts weren't half-bad, either. Nor her hands as she…

Damn. Focus, man. Eat quickly and get the hell out.


Hermione took full advantage of the silence, putting her mind to work in its usual methodical way, and had come to a conclusion by the time she'd stacked the dishes on the kitchen counter.

Severus hovered uneasily near the door. He didn't need to be a complete prat nowadays and wanted to take his leave properly. "Hm. I appreciate the dinner, Miss Granger…" For the sake of his sanity, he did not thank her again for his, hm, nap. He wasn't babbling, but he couldn't seem to find an end.

Hermione found it for him as her lips claimed his.

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Latest 25 Reviews for Tale of the Nightshirt

318 Reviews  |  5.46/10 Average

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Minerva

Later? I certainly hope to read more of this two ...
Thank you again for this wonderful tale.

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mick42

A blue chapter indeed.

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mick42

Two minds are brgining to think as one.

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mick42

Bangers and mash, could be a ''pet'' name , for one or even both of them.

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mick42

The walking wounded are seldom noticed.

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mick42

They both have more than their fair share of baggage, prehaps they can help eachother carry the load.

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mick42

Oh dear, I hope Severus isn't going to strike back.

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mick42

 " After the war bad " must be bad.

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mick42

I'm glad he went to Minerva.

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mick42

He sees so much, and is so blind at the same time.

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mick42

Is Severus about to put his foot in it again.

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mick42

Oh Merlin! they are a pretty pair.

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mick42

Go! Hermione, that's what he gets for looking a gift horse in the mouth, dunderhead.

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mick42

Ahh Gryffindors, got to love them.

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mick42

I'm not sure what he wanted when he first knocked on her door, but I think I may have an inkling of what he what he wants now.

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mick42

I'm with Hermione, anyone that wakes me in the middle of the night, needs a crash helmet.

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mick42

 He survived the war, only to be brought to his knees by a nightshirt. 

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mick42

ERRAND BOY!!! the ungrateful bastards!

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mick42

Awww, he slept on her nightshirt.

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Teal

"Curse it, Severus.  I nearly wet myself!"  Ahh, yes, they are truly meant for each other.  Please, keep those chapters coming.  Thanks.

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sunny33

LOL. That was a sneaky move.  Worked well to upset the boys. :)

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Jinxie

Too funny on him tickling her, to make the boys think the worst!  Looking forward to seeing what happens next!

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HBAR

Wonderful, as always.

8/10

bedworm

Your story has been very entertaining to read, particularly this last chapter. I'll enjoy reading more of it whenever it comes.

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snitchette

The boys are going to have a hard attack if the two continue like this. First the shocking news then the shoking position. One more and they're dead on the spot.

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