Not sure I enjoyed that at all. Ok he stood her up, and not for the first time, but to do that to him, knowing how it would kill him inside, I don't know. And he should not have abused hre that way, she is his wife, not some whore he picked up on the street.

That was really good! They were both quite evil in their 'revenges.' Great story idea though. ~Jen

Ohhh, you are evil! Severus really is a bad boy, but he should be careful, I think Hermione's payback will be... monumental. LOL!

Really funny even if a bit strange: if I was in Severus' position I'd be very careful not to further anger my lover...expecially if she had been thinking of making me pay. All in all a little silly and delicious oneshot. Cute but not too realistic. I like it but I'd like even more if you wrote a sequel and let me know how Hermione decides to 'punish' Severus.

that was so mean.  she should really make him pay.  thanks for the frustrating story!

Pure Evil!He best not keep her waiting again though!!!

Evil you. That's nit just frustating for them but for me too. Now you HAVE TO write the morning next. ;)

Great writing! You really drew me in.She forgave him too easily... what an utter b*st*ard! That's left me shaking my head - AARGH! He is worried that she is going to leave him because of his repeated bad behaviour and she gives him payback - and rather than gacefully ending the matter he ties her up overnight. Right! He deserves the same plus a feather tickling charm. Thanks for this wonderful story.Cheers

I liked your story, it was lovely.

That was great! Enjoyed every minute.