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Black Against White Chapter 7: Fat Load of Good
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Black Against White

1: A Splotch on the Horizon

2: Ruminations on a Fight

3: Enter Stage Left

4: A Higher Power

5: Waxing?

6: Dinner and a game

7: Fat Load of Good

8: Snake bite

9: A Sudden Attack

10: Dishes Decided

Fat Load of Good

Black Against White

Chapter 7 of 10

tobeacting

Hermione recovers only to be more confused.

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By the time Hermione got over the shock of an almost compliment, the rest of the table was done with Remus’s manipulative little game and was beginning to saunter out of the Great Hall. When Hermione was done with her food, everyone had left, including the current bane of her existence. Hermione was about to leave when the unmistakable blue-tipped wings of Ginny’s purple swamphen, Lefou, dropped her response on Hermione’s plate with an undignified squawk. Hermione let Lefou eat some of the leftovers before rushing off to read her friend’s advice. She hoped it contained some answers.

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Hermione,

You are among the most ridiculous of my friends. It’s right in your face but you are too blind to see it. I don’t think I can really tell you what to do about the fight. This is something you have to figure out for yourself, and I hope you do it soon too. I have a bet with Harry on when you will finally wake up and smell the roses. I get out of dishes if you do it sooner rather than later.

I love you dearly,

Ginny

“Fat load of good that did. I'm actually more confused.” Hermione grumbled.

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Hermione decided the only thing she could do was suck it up and talk to him. Tomorrow. Tonight, she was going to crawl into bed with one of her favorite men. As Hermione drifted off after spending the night with Henry DeTamble, she had a strange vision of Severus striding toward her with an odd look in his eye. She chalked it up to staying up til 3:30 reading one of the ultimate love stories. She must remember that The Time Traveler’s Wife, stress, and fatigue just don’t mix. She contemplated dreamless sleep before deciding the vision was a freak occurrence.

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Latest 25 Reviews for Black Against White

116 Reviews  |  7.01/10 Average

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sighingsealey

Lovely story - I like the moving back and forth between Hermione and Snape.

10/10

mick42

 YES! YES! YES!  at last, my God he's hard work, but so worth it. 

10/10

mick42

Well don't just sit there in a stupor girl, don't let him just kiss and run, get after him and snog him into submission , 

10/10

mick42

Someone needs to lock these two in a room , and let them fight untill they come to their senses, and admit they love eachother.

10/10

mick42

Hermione, take the compliment as an apologie, it may be as good as you get.

10/10

mick42

Severus quite the marksman, he never misses ,he always  shoots himself in the foot.

10/10

mick42

Poor Severus, in the hands of yet another well meaning Griffindor.

10/10

mick42

To right Remus, it was a very low blow. 

10/10

mick42

Somehow I don't think Hermione's hair is the problem, something else has gotten under Severus' skin.

10/10

mick42

Ignoring Severus sounds like a good idea, but it's easyer said than done.

10/10

mick42

 Hermione is no better than Severus. 

10/10

braye27

Yes!  Courage and persistence pays off in the end.

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debjunk

this was truly deelightful.  of course they would both be utterly obtuse.

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sunny33

They were a bit slow, but they figured it out. :)

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Jinxie

Well, they got there in the end.  It's amazing what silly little arguments can reveal.

Thanks for sharing!

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Jinxie

Well, I think that should make things obvious to her now.  Wow on the kiss, it says way more than words.

10/10

Jinxie

Oh jealousy and self-denial!

10/10

Jinxie

Oh silly, oblivious woman!  I love that Ginny knows and knows Hermione should, but doesn't.  The not so subtle hint still went partially over her head, as her subconscious is trying to reveal it to her.  Well done!

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Jinxie

Wow, Severus participated and let Hermione know her intelligence wasn't a motivator for his denial.

10/10

Jinxie

Ah, to the crux of the matter.  At least he's admitting to himself that he likes her. 

10/10

Jinxie

He he he, "manipulative" Remus sounds quite fun.  He see's what Severus and Hermione don't see, doesn't he?  (Gah, that sounded quite convoluted, didn't it?)

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cabepfir

Ahahah. The letter to Ginny is so realistic! Love plans between girlfriends. I can see myself in that situation ^^

9/10

Jinxie

Intriguing start to your story.  (Off to read more.)

10/10

snitchette

This is a very nice ending. I'm glad you found it in you to finish this little tale.

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tenoh27

Cute, thank you!

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