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Nightmare

Arabella Bloodgood

33 Reviews | 7.03/10 (33 Ratings, 0 Likes, 4 Favorites )

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Hermione Granger Severus Snape

This is what should have been added at the end of Deathly Hallows. IMHO

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Chapter 1: Nightmare

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Arabella Bloodgood

Member Since 2007 | 8 Stories | Favorited by 7 | 1,994 Reviews Written | 643 Review Responses

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8/10

Megzela

SO much better! :)

10/10

jeanmarie123

nice story i think that Hermione should be marry to Severus retrive his body and he's still alive having babys.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

Thanks for the awesome review. I agree.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

Thanks for the awesome review. I agree.

0/10

dki2girl

Very cute!! And I totally agree!

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

lol thanks for the review,

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

lol thanks for the review,

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10/10

FlittterKat

Yesss, what a good idea because it sure as hell suits my idea what should have happened. Like Paul Harvey sez, and "and that folks, is the rest of the story". LOL

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

I love to listen to Paul Harvey. Thank you so much for reviewing my story.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

I love to listen to Paul Harvey. Thank you so much for reviewing my story.

10/10

kereia

Oh, if wishing only made it so. This ending is so much better than the real one. Well done. And very funny, too. I think I actually will tape it to my copy of DH.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

Thank you,

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

, for reading and reviewing my little drabble. I'm glad you liked it.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

Thank you,

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

, for reading and reviewing my little drabble. I'm glad you liked it.

10/10

lynetteaug72

Oh I really like your take much better.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

Thank you.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

Thank you.

0/10

etherealizabeth

This was hilarious! You're right - it definitely should be added to the end of Deathly Hallows.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

Thank you

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

for reading and reviewing my little review. And for writing such brilliant stories for me to read and review.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

Thank you

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

for reading and reviewing my little review. And for writing such brilliant stories for me to read and review.

10/10

beaweasley2

Isn't that the way it did go? Hunts down book. I hated the epilogue, but I'm sure it was a mistake... Where is that book? I threw it over here...

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

LOL Yeah thats what I did to lost it in a pile of junk. lol Your the best

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

LOL Yeah thats what I did to lost it in a pile of junk. lol Your the best

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

10/10

mick42

Just as it should have been.

10/10

BrenaMarie

I loved this little piece. I'm actually going to print it right now and tape it to the back of DH. Oh How I hated DH.... But this was cute, and really made me smile. Thanks! ~

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

Thank you,

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

, for reading and reviewing my little drabble. It was very sweet of you.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

Thank you,

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

, for reading and reviewing my little drabble. It was very sweet of you.

10/10

braye27

Good for you!!! This is just how DH should have ended.I LOVE it!Beth

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

Thank you for your lovely review and for reading my little drabble.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

Thank you for your lovely review and for reading my little drabble.

10/10

snitchette

I think I'll probably take your suggestion into account. This is so much better than the other ending (please note I didn't say the real one). Maybe you should write more. Not necessarily about this, just let the muse lead you whereever you must.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

Thank you for you sweet review. I have written a poem that is located on this site, as well.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

Thank you for you sweet review. I have written a poem that is located on this site, as well.

10/10

chivalric

*lol*I've written a similar version, with Snape having the nightmare, but I like yours even better. Thanks for sharing!

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

Aw thanks sam, i'm glad you liked my little drabble. I'm sure your's is much better than this. Your brilliant. Thanks for reading and reviewing.Tamara

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

Aw thanks sam, i'm glad you liked my little drabble. I'm sure your's is much better than this. Your brilliant. Thanks for reading and reviewing.Tamara

0/10

soccermom

I prefer your ending to JKR's. Thanks for writing it and sharing it with us.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

Thank you,

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

, for reading and leaving me this very nice review.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

Thank you,

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

, for reading and leaving me this very nice review.

10/10

irishredlass

Indeed the end was a nightmare and this explains it all.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

That is so right. Thank you

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

for reading and reviewing my little drabble.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

That is so right. Thank you

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

for reading and reviewing my little drabble.

0/10

sunny33

ROFL, I like it! :)

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

I'm glad you like it, Penny. Thanks for reading and reviewing my little drabble.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

I'm glad you like it, Penny. Thanks for reading and reviewing my little drabble.

10/10

Larrabee

Hard-Copy = CheckDouble-Sided Tape = CheckSuper Glue = Check, Check(I just had to leave you some KUDOS here, too)

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

Aw, you are so sweet

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

. Yes I remember your review from the other site. Your such a dear. Thanks for reviewing again.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

Aw, you are so sweet

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

. Yes I remember your review from the other site. Your such a dear. Thanks for reviewing again.

10/10

whasittoya

That was hilarious!well done!

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

Thank you

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

for reading and reviewing my little drabble.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

Thank you

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

for reading and reviewing my little drabble.

10/10

debjunk

Oh, I loved it! Short, sweet, and oh so much more satisfying than the original! Lol. You should write more.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

Thanks for the review. This took alot of fixing for it to be posted and it was small. lol

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

Thanks for the review. This took alot of fixing for it to be posted and it was small. lol

0/10

katie9635

i might just tape that to the back of book 7. thanks for the great idea!

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

someone actually said that super glue works too lol Thanks

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

for reading and reviewing my little drabble.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

someone actually said that super glue works too lol Thanks

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

for reading and reviewing my little drabble.

0/10

salvamea

Ending up with Ron made her scream? Yes, me to. She deserved better. and you gave it to her. In a short and clear way. Thank you, this makes up for what JKR perpetrated.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

LOL I'm glad you liked my little drabble. Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

LOL I'm glad you liked my little drabble. Thank you for reading and reviewing.

0/10

Marty21

I definetly like your version better. I wasn't happy at the ending of DH either.......

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

I know a lot of people hated it. This just popped in my head after reading it. Thanks

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

for reading and reviewing.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

I know a lot of people hated it. This just popped in my head after reading it. Thanks

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

for reading and reviewing.

10/10

silverdoe

Ugh I hate ron. So glad this ending is better than the original

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

~wipes eyes~ thanks silver your the best thank you for reading and reviewing

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

~wipes eyes~ thanks silver your the best thank you for reading and reviewing

10/10

cflower

That was so funny! Just a nice bright ending; to poke fun at the whole thing.Thanks for sharing.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I just wanted to lighten it up a bit.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I just wanted to lighten it up a bit.

10/10

Stefdarlin

What a wonderful ending to DH, rather than the one JKR gave us. I am glad Hermione didn't end up with Ron, he really gets on my nerves.Kudos to you, Arabella! I love it! ~~Stef

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

You are two sweet,

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

. I thank you from the bottom of my heart.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

You are two sweet,

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Nightmare)

. I thank you from the bottom of my heart.

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