You really have managed to include a lot of clichés in this story. Having read my share of Time-Tuner fics, I recognized them and was rather entertained. Good work, Sun.

The single room for Mione (LOL!) is very convenient. They couldn’t have shagged like bunnies otherwise. And not a thought about contraception in all those weeks? Not really very Hermione. Very Slytherin of Sev to make sure his older self will get laid by a pretty girl by making her pregnant. Hermione has accepted her fate as a soon to be teenage mommy rather readily. I’d have expected her to go raving mad. Soooo sweet!

A dark witch? Well, Sirius should recognize one when he sees one, with that cousin of his. Double-virgin double-orgasm - every teenager’s dream come true.And in the post coital bliss the Gryffindor in her can’t help herself but blurt everything out.  This is very entertaining! I bet you had as much fun writing it as I have reading it.

Now, I do see someone who is enjoying it immensely to act like a proper Slytherin. What fun it must be to impersonate Draco LOLI just wonder whether about the Sorting Hat. For the child Hermione it considered Ravenclaw and Gryffindor, but let’s face it, the older Hermione got the more Slytherin traits she developed, so the Hat was able to put her in Slytherin as it saw the need for it in her thoughts. I doubt it would have placed her in a House just because the Headmaster told it so. Professor Odkins, oh my. I wonder about his drinking habits. So much for taking it slow. The Gryffindor in her comes through with that, isn’t it? Perhaps you should post this one at the pit of voles without the parody-warning. I’d like to see the raving fangurrls.

I have finally come around to reading this parody. It really is brilliant, Sun. You manage to pack so many overused plots iin this story, it should be declared an artform for itself. Your characters are switching from OOCnes to ICness in such a rapid succession that I'm nearly dizzy from it.

I loved this story!It was a great parody.I love time turner stories as well!

I loved this story!It was a great parody.I love time turner stories as well!

it was a fun ride!  thanks so much  

I was all right until I got to the part about "Snape Manor." *Snort!* Then the chuckles simply would not be denied.Good story. I do love a happy ending!  Thanks for a fun read, Southern; good job.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!! "Ronnie" Oh, gheez, no... Brilliant... and terrible, but that was the point was it not!?!

It was corny, it was cheesy- it was perfect! I do dearly love the SS/HG pairing, and this was a great parody of it!

Well now I don't know if this will help me in my writing, I'm worried that now I will write like this just because this story will stick in my head.  If that happens I will just have to say that it is all my favorite author's fault.  Brilliant work but that is expected from you.

Wow.... Wonderfull story

How's that for cornball?! LOL And I thought I was a sap!This was lots of fun. Thanks for the entertainment.

Well, any intentional goofs certainly didn't keep my eyes from tearing up at the end.  I'm such a sap!  Snape watching the Pensieve and then their reunion were both great!  The Epilogue was hilarious!

Nice ending but I was surprised that they named their little boy Ronnie.All well, I'm a sucker for happy ending.

Classic!

I'm exctatic. It's just perfect. I loved the previous chapter so much that I read it THREE times and I nearly reviewed it as much. I probably will do the same thing with this one. Atlough it's a parody and BLA BLA BLA I love the way you wrote it and even more I adore sappy endings. I could read them forever. So I'm absolutely delighted with the whole story despite what everyone could thing of it. Again thank you for writing it.PS: if you find some Timer Turner story that you like, I'm sure I'll like it too. So please let me know. Again HUGE THANKS for everything.

Loved it. Thanks for sharing.

RONNIE?????Now, I believe you that this was a parody!!! I've really enjoyed this story, great work!gab

RONNIE?????Now, I believe you that this was a parody!!! I've really enjoyed this story, great work!gab

Ahhh, all's well that ends well.  I think you've created the perfect Time-Turner fic here.  Oh, and those chapter breaks... to die for.  So much better than your average dot dot dot or dash dash dash.

I truly loved that part where Hermione tried to save him from himself by not telling the details about just how she got pregnant.  The woman is a Slytherin at heart.So sad this is over.  It has been a truly fun read.  It literally 'had it all.'

I still say your writing made this parody almost a primer.  Thanks for the fun. 

of course, to  be a proper parody she must be preggers.  love this story.  thanks                                   

OK, that one was really full of pretty much every cliche I've read about her return.  Hee.  Yes, I'm enjoying this very much.  Sev's son, which he decided he had to have.