Scar Tissue
sunshinefanfics7 Reviews | 7 Ratings, 0 Likes, 13 Favorites )
Scant hours after the bloody final battle, Hermione tries to suppress the guilty urge to reaffirm that she's alive. *Post-Hogwarts, no spoilers, complete in chapter*
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sunshinefanfics
Member Since 2005 | 4 Stories | Favorited by 19 | 7 Reviews Written | 5 Review Responses
Winner of the Multifaceted Award Round Four (Remus) Aphrodisia category for Substitutionary Locomotion. Prominent ships - Draco/Ginny, Snape/Canon Females, Ron/Hermione, Lucius/Canon Females, Remus/Tonks, Triofic, Weasleys
Reviews for Scar Tissue
I liked this story--the reactions and emotions felt right.
Oh man! Now... I wish there was more to come. This story has potential to become a very deep, painful, but passionate romance! Please consider writing more... No rush...
Response from sunshinefanfics (Author of Scar Tissue)
Thank you for your kind words. The first person who betaed this told me it was worthless and that I should start over. I appreciate it!
There is a very nice touch of realism to their coupling. It's rare to find that in fan fiction, but welcome none the less. Please forgive the hint of concrit, but I thought your lead-in was a bit staccato, however evocative. You quickly fell into a more rhythmic flow and I liked that Snape had an undefined emotion at the end. For one so careful, it would be a surprise. Then again, as he said, he is a man.
Response from sunshinefanfics (Author of Scar Tissue)
Thank you, thank you for being such an intelligent reviewer. I appreciate the concrit, and I do agree with you. I did purposely mean for the whole encounter to be abrupt, but I'm glad that it worked for you.
This was amazing. You could have made this into a multichaptered story. Tamara
Well written and clever little plot! I enjoyed it :)
Interesting read. I could actually see this turning into a novella or novel length tale... which means you did well, leaving the reader wanting more, but not requiring it.
nice!