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Under The Stars
odogoddess5 Reviews | 5 Ratings, 0 Likes, 2 Favorites )
Luna helps Harry get over his guilt one special night at Shell Cottage.
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Member Since 2006 | 6 Stories | Favorited by 39 | 26 Reviews Written | 145 Review Responses
odogoddess -aka- psyfic, lives in Southern California and travels when she can with her beloved soulmate/lifepartner/legal spouse. They share pets, dreams, laughter, gossip, fantastic (gluten-free) food as well as an obsession with quirky films, sci-fic/fantasy, fandom in general, and outrageously sexy menespecially the far-too-tasty-for-his-own-good Alan Rickman.
Reviews for Under The Stars
How did I miss this story? This is wonderful! So sweet and loving. They're both so IC
Response from odogoddess (Author of Under The Stars)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I thought that was quite sweet and gentle and utterly believable. Luna's matter-of-fact manner was so very much in character. I liked this very much.
Response from odogoddess (Author of Under The Stars)
Thank you for commenting. I'm glad you liked Luna. I enjoy writing her. :)
Luna is one of my favorite characters. I liked that.
Response from odogoddess (Author of Under The Stars)
Thank you. :)
I would never have imagined this situation, but as you present it, it becomes quite believable. It was sad and sweet at the same time.
Response from odogoddess (Author of Under The Stars)
Thank you. I appreciate your feedback.
A bit frustrating, to be frank. It started out well, and picked up well towards the end, but this sentence in the middle was just a jarring mood-breaker:...Harry suddenly realised his face was cushioned against one of her breasts!It's really too bad, because what came before and after is just fine. With a smoother transition, it could even have been rather sweet. The exclamation mark really drags it down.
Response from odogoddess (Author of Under The Stars)
It's good of you to make time to comment. I don't respond to issues of writing style, however, as we each have our own, and what works for one does not work for all, as your comment illustrates.