First Kiss

Gelsey

3 Reviews | 3 Ratings, 0 Likes, 3 Favorites )

Romance Hogwarts Castle 161 Words 1 Chapter Complete

A sweet moment at the Yule Ball.

Chapters (1)

Chapter 1: First Kiss

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10/10

You have painted a lovely picture of Hermione's first kiss. That is a memory she can hold on to forever.

Response from Gelsey (Author of First Kiss)

Thanks! I thought it was a good memory to give her. Thanks for reviewing!

10/10

Sweet. A lovely setting, a respectful older student, no fumbling or a push for more than a kiss. I always liked Viktor.

Response from Gelsey (Author of First Kiss)

Thank you! I'm very fond of Viktor myself :D

Response from Gelsey (Author of First Kiss)

Thank you! I'm very fond of Viktor myself :D

8/10

That was beautiful and simple. I like the 'eyes fluttering closed' part the best. I think it really captures her innocence at that moment.

Wonderfully done!

~Katie

Response from Gelsey (Author of First Kiss)

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Response from Gelsey (Author of First Kiss)

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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