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Obliging Minerva
MMADfan17 Reviews | 6.47/10 (17 Ratings, 0 Likes, 26 Favorites )
The Headmaster's been very busy lately. His Transfiguration teacher needs some time with him. One-shot.
Not DH-compliant. Set in late October 1957.
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Note 10 December 2015: I've been unable to write fanfic the last couple years, but I haven't abandoned my works-in-progress!
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Reviews for Obliging Minerva
Had to read this again ... *whimpers* ... such a beautiful chapter, and so open, and honest, and tender - and of course, bloody sexy! I loved it the first few times around, no surprise I'd still love it.Mostly, I love that Minerva seems to show Albus that even he denies himself pleasure when he overbooks his schedule, and doesn't make regular time for them as a couple - and that he reliquishes once she's fully reminded him - so beautiful!Its a HOT story, but I think that's just the icing, its the love that truly is the cake - the love and the way they cherish and respect each other, and how completely open they are with each other - which is hard to do - that kind of trust is hard to come by.*wants her own Albus ... sniff* I be in LUV with RaM Albus, you know... oh you didn't know? Pshhha - you knew!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Obliging Minerva)
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it so much.
I sometimes worry that the somewhat graphic sex overwhelmed the story and the relationship aspect of it, so it's good to hear that you found it the icing on the cake.
I kinda guessed you had a wee bit of a thing for RaM!Albus. Too bad you'll have to settle for reading about him!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Ahh, but better to have him in RAM than not to have him at all - yes? And I have Squibby's Albus too, and a few other authors who write him well, but RAM Albus is above and beyond, the sweetest of all of them - and so very charming! *swoons*
Response from MMADfan (Author of Obliging Minerva)
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it so much.
I sometimes worry that the somewhat graphic sex overwhelmed the story and the relationship aspect of it, so it's good to hear that you found it the icing on the cake.
I kinda guessed you had a wee bit of a thing for RaM!Albus. Too bad you'll have to settle for reading about him!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Ahh, but better to have him in RAM than not to have him at all - yes? And I have Squibby's Albus too, and a few other authors who write him well, but RAM Albus is above and beyond, the sweetest of all of them - and so very charming! *swoons*
Loved this, especially the little portrait-fu at the end.Added it to my Minerva-centric recs at my LiveJournal.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Obliging Minerva)
Thanks! I'm very glad you enjoyed it so much!Portraits can be fun "characters" to play with. Thanks again!
I found it very entertaining. I may have to read something else before I turn in for the night though :P
Response from MMADfan (Author of Obliging Minerva)
Glad you found it entertaining! Yes, something a little . . . cooler before bed might not be bad! haha!Thanks for the review
Response from MMADfan (Author of Obliging Minerva)
Glad you found it entertaining! Yes, something a little . . . cooler before bed might not be bad! haha!Thanks for the review
Haha! That was so great to read after the last chapter of RaM! You have quite a gift for writing erotic, yet touching and appropriate sex scenes, without reducing yourself to gross terminology! It takes quite a bit of talent and creativity. :) I love these one shots...can't wait to see the next thing you post, whatever that may be!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Obliging Minerva)
Thank you! I'm very glad you enjoyed it. Once I've finished RaM (and I'm glad you liked the tie-in with that last chapter posted there), I think I'm going to stick to one-shots and short stories with only a few chapters. I am writing a sequel to AAoL, but it's not going to be as long as AAoL -- and certainly not as long as RaM!
Thanks very much for reviewing! I really appreciate it. :)
Well! I certainly wasn't expecting this story considering how RaM is still in progress, but I'm not complaining! I can't wait to read more of RaM now that hope is in sight!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Obliging Minerva)
I thought you might be happy about that! *grin* Thanks for reviewing!
I got back from fencing last night hot, tired, and sore and turned on my computer. I found your new story and ended up hot for a completely different reason! This was amazing, an attribute I've come to expect from anything you post. Beyond being just incredibly hot and sexy, the amount of affection they exude given they hadn't been together long made it all the better.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Obliging Minerva)
Very glad you enjoyed it!
Fabulous! Delicious! Magnificient! and very hot!
I LOVED it!!!! oh masterful writer! You are as always facinating to read! I hope that this will not be the only one-shot stories. And yes it gives hope to a devoted RaM reader.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Obliging Minerva)
I think that once RaM is finished, I'm going to stick to one-shots and very short fics of just a few chapters for a while. In fact, maybe forever! LOL!
I'm very glad you enjoyed it and that it gave you hope!
Thanks for your review!
Wow. That was hot... I love MM/AD. None of this stupid Albus is gay stuff. I love the portraits at the end of the story. It was hot sexy and then funny.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Obliging Minerva)
If you like hot MMAD stuff, you should read "An Act of Love" -- lots of hot MMAD in it -- especially chapters 13 & 14, but I recommend the whole thing, even though it's sort of a Severus-Snape-story.
It would have been great if JKR had seen fit to actually put gay characters IN THE BOOKS. And that's all I have to say about that, LOL! And this is fanfic -- if people can slash clearly straight characters such as HP & DM, then other characters whose sexuality is never clear IN THE BOOKS can be paired in any way that seems to work well, if people enjoy them and want to write them and read them. I don't see people up in arms about SSHG even though SS dies (rather ignominiously and without a struggle) and HG marries Ron, as was clear from practically book one was going to happen. Fortunately, I think that folk on TPP are open-minded. I hope so, anyway!
Response from barbied011 (Reviewer)
My thoughts and sentiments exactly. What's the point of making Albus gay if no-one had a clue in the entire series? It seems a waste of what people are calling this great experience. I mean she did have an awesome opportunity to have a beloved openly gay character and all we got was a beloved character who for all intents and purposes appeared to be straight.
Yes. I love fanfic because Sev deserved a little bit better treatment and MMAD
Finally, I have read An Act of Love and it was a very hot sex scene and I'm very sorry if I didn't review at the time. I try to review after reading but sometimes I'm tired and think I will do that when I get up in the morning but I've already forgotten.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Obliging Minerva)
I agree bout SS. I do think that he had some really bad aspects to his character and wasn't an unambiguously "good guy," and I would have been really surprised if he had "survived" book 7, but I thought his manner of death was just unworthy. Not that he would have had to have jumped in front of an AK to save HP (or whomever), but the manner of his death was really . . . not what I would have had for him. But I also think that almost all of the characters in DH seemed OOC compared to their development over the course of the series -- as though they were shoe-horned into the plot and moved about like cardboard cut-outs. *shrug* Well, we all know how JKR has her series worked out, so, on with fanfic!
I'm glad you liked AAoL! (I sure understand RL, being tired, and all that!)
Oh, my, that was hot! So, erm--satisfying--to see them together in the RaM universe/timeline. *very* erotic, but sweet as well. I like that little bit of shyness between them, that they are still new in this phase of their relationship (although that they can be shy when being so intimate adds it own bit of fizz to the story!)LOL at the portraits! That was great! And so nice to see Albus using that desk with Minerva for something other than a shield! Wonderful! And an unexpected treat to have an update to RaM and a RaM lemon! I didn't know which to read first!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Obliging Minerva)
*grin* Very glad you liked it! And found it, erm, satisfying!
When you've read the chapter, you'll see why I posted this at the same time. *grin*
Thanks very much for reviewing! (And yeah, it's a much better use for the desk -- better than him hiding behind it!)
FANS SELF AND WIPES STEAM FROM MY COMPUTER SCREEN!! I BOW TO THE GREATNESS OF THE ICON OF LEMONS!
Merlin's beard that was incredible. I love how Minerva went to his office with the full intention of seducing him, making him fulfill her needs. The part with her sitting on his lap taking care of herself was something not usually seen in lemons but something I could certainly believe. It's great to see Minerva stepping outside the usual "lemon" box and doing things to arouse and please her Albus...woo hoo. She certainly got his attention and created a few fireworks in his office. Much better than working on dull paperwork I'd say.
And they nearly got caught. EEEEK! But transfiguring into Tabby was yet another uncommon but very erotic image of her "innocently" stretched out in his lap. Tee Hee. I'm surprised Albus didn't toss Flitwick out on his ear well before the hour was over.
I'm glad Albus decided to return the favor to Minerva, though. Turn about is certainly fair play so she deserved that little show, though it was funny that she wouldn't let him finish. Guess he aroused her passions just as much as she aroused his. It's wonderful to watch them being so playful and free with each other.
The portraits were hilarious. Dilys cracked me up when she said it was the best sex she'd seen in that office. As long as she's been there, I'd say that's really saying something...wink wink.
Thanks for the RaM/ADMM lemon. Very nice to read...very nice indeedy!!!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Obliging Minerva)
Thank you very much -- and you may have noticed a tie-in with the most recently posted chapter of RaM ("Not to Be Tolerated"), which is why I posted this now. And to give you and other RaM-readers some hope, of course! LOL! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I wanted to do something a bit different for their "office sex." So I tried this. Glad you found it steamy!
Thanks for reviewing!
Quite an interesting little one-shot.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Obliging Minerva)
Thanks!
Anonymous
Ahaha! I was wondering through the whole thing about the portraits and that was an hilarious ending! Lol! A fabulous lemon and it's given me a great deal of hope with RaM that perhaps the getting together part does exist, somewhere...
Quite a racy lemon and you made me blush, again. Though Minerva certainly got his attention :)
Elo xx
Author's Response:
You're so cute when you blush! Of course, the AAoL lemons were, um, racier, I think. I blush just remembering that I wrote them! LOL!
Yup, there's hope -- and did you notice the year in which it is set?
Thanks for reviewing!
I dont know if you remember me, i started reading RaM in ffnet last februry i think ( i'm not very sure about the date) i´ve follow you to this site, to read more of your stories, i only have to say that i love RaM, but your making me crazyy!!! how much more are you going to me me suffer???? sorry about the writing style and speling (i´m spanish) carry on your work is great!!!xxxx
Response from MMADfan (Author of Obliging Minerva)
Response from MMADfan (Author of Obliging Minerva)
Yes, it was February when I started posting over there. I'm glad you like my work. We're closing in on the big crisis, very close, in fact, and after that we will be well on our way to the end of the story.
Thanks for the review and letting me know you are still reading and enjoying, if feeling somewhat tortured!
Ouch, this end was too funny!!!Thank you for writting this one-shot, it was really a good and light reading ^^"Not to be tolerated" is to be without your stories xD *Marina
Response from MMADfan (Author of Obliging Minerva)
Thank you very much! Glad you liked it! And my other stories! Very kind of you. :)
Yay! I finally joined up over here, and it was worth it!!! After reading about those portraits over at RaM, that was a hilarious end to a very naughty/nice fic!!!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Obliging Minerva)
Glad I was able to encourage another person to come over and check out TPP -- I am fond of this site, myself. :D
I'm glad the end of the story gave you a laugh!
Thanks very much for reviewing -- and for joining over here!
OOOOMMMMFFFFGGGGGGGGGG*pants*DAMN.... and then the paintings, sooooooooo brilliant... just perfect! THANK YOU!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
That was just sooooo..... beautiful.... the only way I can think to describe it, I love how they both can be completely honest with eachother, and that Albus allows her to push him.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
“I used to do this rapidly, get it over with, gain physical release and leave it at that. But then my thoughts began to be filled with you, and I found that I could not touch myself without thinking of you . . . but I believed that your fondness of me was that of simple friendship, and I could not allow myself to violate your privacy and your modesty by thinking of you while doing this. It was difficult, all that time, wanting you and denying to myself that I did, and then finally admitting it to myself, and yet that was hardly any better.”*snip* That was..... so endearing, I nearly cried.... I know, I'm such a sap, but so beautifully written.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Obliging Minerva)
Aw! Thank you! And I'm so glad that you felt the honesty, love, and tenderness there, and not just the "hot" stuff -- but that you also found the hot stuff hot!Thank you again!
Wonderful! But let me elaborate a bit: it may look a bit shocking, how Minerva seduces Albus by almost forcing herself on him and masturbating for him and then he masturbating for her (personally I found it not shocking though :-) ) But if you read well, actually it is their love and respect for each other which makes them do it and I found it very beautiful! The end with the portraits is golden. Haha, great!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Obliging Minerva)
Thank you!Yes, there is love and passion for each other, which is what motivates and underlies their activities, and they do respect each other, too. I'm glad that you enjoyed it and found it beautiful!Glad you liked the bit with the portraits at the end! Thanks very much for the review! It brightened my morning!
Response from Mars_M (Reviewer)
My pleasure. Always