Nineteen Years Later
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Nineteen years later, just after they left King's Cross, something happened that changed Hermione's world.
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You can kill off Ron as long as Snape lives! I approve.
Response from mauvemagique (Author of Nineteen Years Later)
Thank you!
very intresting ideas. I like your using Neville and I like the setting of ninteen years later. well done.
Response from mauvemagique (Author of Nineteen Years Later)
Thank you. I truly appreciate your review. I hope you will come back to read the rest.
I said it five times without any mistakes and I'm glad we're having chapter seven soon. But what about chapter six ? ;-). Keep up the good work.
Response from mauvemagique (Author of Nineteen Years Later)
Thanks! Good eyes!
Chapter six is now under the careful eyes of my beta. Chapter seven will follow it soon.
Good chapter - I cannot wait to see how the return of memories goes. With the Malfoy's plotting - it seems like Severus is needed before they get out of hand
Response from mauvemagique (Author of Nineteen Years Later)
Patience, my good reader!
Thanks.
Good scene that her friends checked on her and are trying to pull her through. Sometimes people get distant when you have a death but if they had in this case with the way you had wrote what was happening to her - I think grief might have killed her.
Response from mauvemagique (Author of Nineteen Years Later)
You are right, it would kill her if her friends were not there for her. I wish I had friends like she had, don't you? Maybe, you already have!
Good chapter - poor Ron - it is tragic that after all they have faced that he would wind up coming to death from a car accident. Cannot wait to read the next chapter.
Response from mauvemagique (Author of Nineteen Years Later)
Thank you. Ironic, isn't it! I love Ron, ( just not when he is with Hermione), I love Severus better, I don't like bad Ron either; so Ron had to go.
Nice to see Lucius is starting trouble again....
Response from mauvemagique (Author of Nineteen Years Later)
Yeah, doing what he does best! Thanks for reading.
OK, Lucius is evil. And I kind of like Scorpius.
Response from mauvemagique (Author of Nineteen Years Later)
Thank you.
Great chapter! I think Hermione might be on to something with the memories. And I'm intrigued to see what the Malfoys get up to. I hope you can update again soon. Keep up the good work!
Response from mauvemagique (Author of Nineteen Years Later)
She is smart,is she not! Thanks for reading.
Okay - I think Neville may have snapped a little. I cannot wait to see what Hermione can do for Severus but if anyone can - it would be her
Response from mauvemagique (Author of Nineteen Years Later)
You are on the right track. Thanks for reading.
Oh crap and what a secret Neville has - I like the shock factor - great chapter - never would haved guessed this one
Response from mauvemagique (Author of Nineteen Years Later)
Thank You.
Wow, Neville is not right, is he? That is so sad.
Response from mauvemagique (Author of Nineteen Years Later)
Do you mean--Neville thinks Snape would not wake up ever?
Hmm... He's the only one trying, maybe he is not out of hope. You have to read the following chapters, don't you?
Response from blue artemis (Reviewer)
Oh, I definitely need to read the rest of the chapters. But I think I meant that Neville wasn't functioning properly. What he is doing is obsessive and strange. Kind, but strange.
Wow! This is a really great premise, and it reminds us all of the facts as they are at the end of DH...it is entirely possible that Snape really could still be alive! I am going to think that way...I have been anyway, but this really helps...no matter what JKR says!~HR
Response from mauvemagique (Author of Nineteen Years Later)
Thank you. I stood in the line at 12:00 a.m., read the book nonstop, moped around for two days, got mad at my darling hubby for suggesting 'it's just a story' and then kissed him for suggesting I should write how I thought it should end and picked up the pen.
I can't wait for Severus to wake up! Great chapter.
Response from mauvemagique (Author of Nineteen Years Later)
Thank you. So can't I.
Very interesting so far. I agree Snape should have been given better than he got. Witout Severus the book would be called 'Lord Voldemort's Rise to World Domination'. Severus Snape is a hero!
Did you mention English is not your first language? If so, I'm bloody impressed! Well done.
Response from mauvemagique (Author of Nineteen Years Later)
Thank you. Yeah, and who would want to read a book like that!
My mother tounge is Bengali, I am rather out of touch with grammar now a days, but my beta Writermerrin really is amazing, I am not saying those thanks just because.
While reading the tittle I xas under the impression nthat Neville's secret has something to do with a certain potions master. I'm glad that we're seeing his very lose nose so soon in the story. Thank you for not puting too much suspense.
Response from mauvemagique (Author of Nineteen Years Later)
Thank you for reading and reviewing, your opinion means a lot to me.
Oh, Rose is having problems, isn't she? And what a dramatic ending to the scene.
Response from mauvemagique (Author of Nineteen Years Later)
Thank you. Sudden death of a parent could be very hard on a kid. She loved her dad, Hermione was dealing with her own sorrow, and somewhat neglecting everything, including her children; Rose could not express her feelings, so she felt alone, lost and angry. But she is trying her best to deal with herself, and still being caring enough to comfort Albus. Sometimes, we grownups forget how hard it could be on the kids.
Whew! What a secret; what a chapter.
Response from mauvemagique (Author of Nineteen Years Later)
Thank you. I am glad you liked it.
Great story. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Response from mauvemagique (Author of Nineteen Years Later)
Thank You.
Well, I don't see much wrong with your English, and I'm enjoying the premise to this story.
Response from mauvemagique (Author of Nineteen Years Later)
Thank you. I am very grateful for the help I have recieved.
Somehow, Ron fighting death because he forgot to look at the wing mirror is insanely funny to me. Does that make me evil?
Response from mauvemagique (Author of Nineteen Years Later)
Does it? No more than I am, I guess.
Nice start! Well, not for Ron, I suppose.
I'm looking forward to more, in any case!
Response from mauvemagique (Author of Nineteen Years Later)
Thank You. I like Ron, but not with Hermione.I could not make him abusive or lazy or nutter, so I had to merci-kill him for the sake of my story.
I wonder what's next?
Response from mauvemagique (Author of Nineteen Years Later)
Once my Beta Writermerrin graciously polishes my next chapter, you will find out.
neat turn of events, excellant story
Response from mauvemagique (Author of Nineteen Years Later)
Thanks.