Falling for Pomona
MMADfan9 Reviews | 9 Ratings, 0 Likes, 6 Favorites )
First impressions can be so important, but sometimes don't we all hope they aren't?
Just a light little one-shot.
Companion one-shot: "Impressing Filius."
Chapters (1)
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Note 10 December 2015: I've been unable to write fanfic the last couple years, but I haven't abandoned my works-in-progress!
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Reviews for Falling for Pomona
A vision of loveliness hovering above him.Isn't that moment of falling in love just wonderful?Most of us aren't lucky enough to have it while we are flat on our backs. But, then most of us don't literally fall in love.A delightful play on words, cleverly done.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Falling for Pomona)
Thank you!
What a sweet story. You are so very good at creating the mental imagery to go with the story, I could see Flitwick with his fluffy gray waving hair!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Falling for Pomona)
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. There will be a companion story to it up fairly soon -- Pomona's side of it.
Thanks for reviewing!
Oh this is cute. A hornet instead of a hairnet! Too cute. 
Loved the way Pomona and Filius kept getting each other's name wrong - too cute!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Falling for Pomona)
Thanks! Filius was so sure they were going to ask him to turn something into a creature of some sort, he got flustered and thought he'd finally gotten something right . . . but he didn't! Glad you liked the story! I think there's a "bookend" coming up -- Pomona's side. We'll see how it turns out.
Thank you very much for reviewing! Glad you enjoyed it!
LOL. Poor Filius, being all absent-minded and love-at-first-sight-ish. The tongue-tying didn't help much either. Good work.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Falling for Pomona)
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. :D
Oh, poor Filius.(chuckle) Great story. Very sweet.Truly
Response from MMADfan (Author of Falling for Pomona)
Thank you! Glad it entertained you!
What a delightful new story 
! You write such an adorable Filius! So sweet the way he's at a los for words and not picking up on the hint from Pomona that her last name is Sprout and not Sprig hehe 
Great job. I'll definitely read when this is updated :)
Response from MMADfan (Author of Falling for Pomona)
Thank you! And I guess I have another hint that the story needs continuing! We will see what I can do. Thank you for reviewing!
Please tell me this isn't complete ... WHAT?! This is too cute to stop there!
Okay, you're the writer; it's done when you say it's done. I love the way they're both kind of tongue-tied around each other and can't quite get each other's names right. This is a lovely meet-cute! 
Response from Keladry Lupin (Reviewer)
Okay, okay, because I'm pushy ... howzabout Pomona's take on this scene? I'd love to know what she's thinking, while Filius babbles because he thinks she's so lovely. *puppydog eyes* 
Response from MMADfan (Author of Falling for Pomona)
Wel, hmm . . . did some scoundrel tell you that I'm a sucker for puppy dog eyes? Hmm? Fess up! *sigh*
I'm very glad you enjoyed it so much . . . and I'll see what I can do about a bookend for it. I do have some ideas of what was going through her mind, so . . . .
Thanks for reviewing!
Response from Keladry Lupin (Reviewer)
Hee hee hee! *tucks puppy-dog-eyes info away for future use*
I don't want to be too pushy! It's just that I'd really love to know what's going on in Pomona's mind, and if she is even the tiniest bit interested in him, too ... or if she just thinks he's rather odd. But I know about trying to force something that isn't coming; don't push it.
This is absolutely adorable! I never would have considered the Flitwick/Sprout ship if you hadn't written Budding Charms!I love how Flitwick gets all tongue tied after the collision with Sprout. And then he incorrectly remembers her name as Sprig. That had me in a fit of giggles!! They're such a cute couple!Another part of this story that I love so much is that it seems to be set in the RaM universe. That only makes it more enjoyable to read and makes me wonder if perhaps this is a little snippet into the RaM story...tee hee. As always...A FANTASTIC JOB!!Your GLM
Response from MMADfan (Author of Falling for Pomona)
Thank you! I wrote it as a favor for someone, and so I thought that if I set it in a RaM-like universe, my RaM Muse wouldn't flee! I'm glad you found it amusing! Thanks for reviewing!