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As Soon As I Belong
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Hermione Granger and Severus Snape have managed to find their respective places in the post-Voldemort wizarding world, but when they cross paths, things may take a bit of a turn.
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hmmm, looking good, and I think Severus is just a tad jealous....
Response from firefly124 (Author of As Soon As I Belong)
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Lovely story, thank you!
Pfft, so apparently Harry is the character death we are warned about? Sneaky. I figured for sure you'd kill off hermione or Snape. Will there be any sort of follow up story about their continuing the experiments? Lol
Response from firefly124 (Author of As Soon As I Belong)
Thanks for reading and reviewing! This was one of my first HP fics, and I'm tickled that it's still enjoyable after all this time. I'm not really writing in the fandom anymore other than the odd ficlet or drabble, though, so there probably will not be a sequel. Sorry.
So the story has a warning of character death.. Thus makes me wonder if Snape will succumb after all, or of the curse is supposed to kill her before it kills him, or what. I an expecting deviousness, lets just say..
Hmm, interesting story so far, very different from anything I've read before. Interested to see what will happen, so I'll keep reading!
Hmm, so if hermione didn't put the black wards up, and neither did Snape, who did exactly? Has someone been tampering with her flat?
Lol, poor Hermione just coming to get pissed and fend off the menfolk.
I am glad that there is a cure for Severus. Very much enjoyed the insight into his mind.
Response from firefly124 (Author of As Soon As I Belong)
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying the glimpses of his thoughts.
It seems her plan's working. Good chapter!
Response from firefly124 (Author of As Soon As I Belong)
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Yay! Finally, some progress is being made. I rather enjoyed Severus' little musings to himself. Nicely written.
Response from firefly124 (Author of As Soon As I Belong)
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it, particularly Severus' musings and mini-self-debate there.
Well, I had the right idea about using a potion, just chose the wrong one. Great chapter, I actually feel sorry for Severus.
Response from firefly124 (Author of As Soon As I Belong)
You were indeed on the right track! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
OK, I'm feeling better now. I'm a happy ending junkie and I was getting more than a bit worried about our favorite Potions professor. I'm enjoying the story a great deal; thanks for your work!
Response from firefly124 (Author of As Soon As I Belong)
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it and are feeling better with a bit of hope in sight for him.
Anonymous
Ooh, please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm pleased that you're enjoying it. The next chapter's in the queue and should be up in a few days.
Great story! You've got a very good plot here. :D
Response from firefly124 (Author of As Soon As I Belong)
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Good writing! I like that you've kept Snape snarky. I can't bear OOC Snape. And Hermione's reaction to her fame is quite logical too. Keep on, please!
Response from firefly124 (Author of As Soon As I Belong)
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it and find them IC. More shall come soon!
Ahh, there's nothing more depressingly entertaining than paranoia. I'm eager to see how that will be overcome in order to enact the countercurse. Nice chapter.
Response from firefly124 (Author of As Soon As I Belong)
Thanks! Yes, curse-induced or not, paranoia has a horrible way of perpetuating itself. I'm glad you're continuing to enjoy the story. More shall come soon.
I just sped through these first seven chapters - love it! I don't recall reading this in the exchange but I am thoroughly enjoying your wonderful story. I love the idea of the curse - it is so frighteningly in line with the person and character of Voldemort and it is a very fair extrapolation on the canon. And Viktor - oh sigh. Viktor is such a wonderful friend! And I like how realistic you make SS/HG's feelings for each other - thank you for not doing the "...and then they realized they were perfect for each other and were deeply in love" route. This is much more believable. Alright, end rant! I eagerly await your next update.
Response from firefly124 (Author of As Soon As I Belong)
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it and find it believable and IC.
Severus must be having a hell of a time with this. His emotions are being messed with and lets face it, men in general, are ill equiped to handel emotional upheavel, or emotions in general. They are trained practically from birth on how they have to be macho.
Response from firefly124 (Author of As Soon As I Belong)
Very true, and it seems that training may have taken particularly well in Severus. Thanks for reviewing!
So much for uncomplicated. Looking forward to the breaking of the curse.
Response from firefly124 (Author of As Soon As I Belong)
Thanks! Yes, "uncomplicated" seems a rather unattainable goal for both of them.
Poor Hermione, she really has her hands full. Maybe she should slip him a lust potion.....
Response from firefly124 (Author of As Soon As I Belong)
That's definitely one possible solution, but I'm pretty sure she'd rather not go that route. Thanks for reviewing!
That was a rather sad and chilling ending to the chapter. I do feel terribly for Severus, and I understand that his reasctions are, in part, due to the curse, but I hate his willingness to die rather than to trust someone else. Sorry for that convoluted sentence. I can't wait to see what plot Hermione will devise in order to convince Severus to do what needs to be done. Great chapter!
Response from firefly124 (Author of As Soon As I Belong)
Thanks! Yes, he's having a hard time of it. But hopefully Hermione will come up with something!
Nice ending, it is open-ended and leaves the reader to imagine how their relationship develops. Great story!
Response from firefly124 (Author of As Soon As I Belong)
Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed it, particularly the open-endedness of the ending.
Response from firefly124 (Author of As Soon As I Belong)
Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed it, particularly the open-endedness of the ending.
Again, kudos to you for Hermione's fantasticly wry, witty, sarcastic style. Love it.
Response from firefly124 (Author of As Soon As I Belong)
Heh. I'm glad you're liking sarcastic!Hermione. Thanks for reviewing and letting me know!
OMG--what an incredibly inventive (and hideous) twist!
Response from firefly124 (Author of As Soon As I Belong)
Thanks! I do owe a good bit of inspiration to the prompt that I was given, which will be posted at the end. I'm glad you're enjoying it!